TheLineTrotter

Huh. A deer OC. Unique! I like it!

I never see an OC of a Griffin. It's like a splash of clean water against the face (that is meant to sound like a complement). I like your great detail in the personality section. There's a lot to be said about Vincent and I think many OCs don't take full advantage to explain in great detail the mind of Vincent. The backstory is simple and easy to understand. Don't take that as a bad thing. Many backstories that I see are confusing and complicated.

Overall, a good job to you.

I never see an OC of a Griffin. It's like a splash of clean water against the face (that is meant to sound like a complement). I like your great detail in the personality section. There's a lot to be said about Vincent and I think many OCs don't take full advantage to explain in great detail the mind of Vincent. The backstory is simple and easy to understand. Don't take that as a bad thing. Many backstories that I see are confusing and complicated.

Overall, a good job to you.

The purpose of this profile was to allow Vincent to be used in a multitude of situations and roleplays, while keeping his personality in line, thus the simple nature. 

I was kinda glad to see so few Griffin roleplays. I considered making a pony, and wanted flight but for some reason didn`t like the idea of being a Pegasus, so Voila!

I also tried to think of something to make Vincent differant than 'most griffins' (I.E, like Gilda), and since i`m a history nut myself, I figured it fit.