TheGreatTrixie

Sorry guys I've been busy lately and also I didn't have a chance to post yet. I moved back to the dormitory and there is no wi-fi. NO WI-FI! So I was very angry but I found a way to post in the nearest shopping centre. I will try to post everyday when I can.

Violet tried follow the other as quietly as she could. They reached the stairs and she let Code and Chemm to go ahead while she looked back to make sure that Pyxel was there too. It would be a deadly mistake to left anypony behind. She started to walk up the old staircase. Violet didn't want to believe her ears. Code said that he found one of the ponies but...she was dead already. Thats it...enough...Violet couldn't take any more. She wanted to run. Run from this cursed town as far as she could. But she was to scared... How could this happen? Why just with them? Violet sat down on the staircase and front of herself. She wanted to believe that there was still hope for them. She wanted to believe, but she wasn't able. They will all die here in this town. Sooner or latre...That means there is no reason to fight, to fight with that creature. It's easier to give up and everything will be over soon, maybe without pain...

Violet looked back and saw that Chemm followed her to the house. She wanted to know why she should stay if she offered to go in and she also seemed very angry. "Calm down!"-asked her Violet. "I just wanted you to stay because it seemed your injuries are very bad. That's why I changed my mind! And I think you rather be thankful than..." Violet heared noise coming from upstairs that interrupted her. "Maybe the others are upstairs.."

Maybe... Well, I'm too lazy right now to corrcet it but it think I will. Maybe you are right. Even I'm not so pleased with them (...just for the limit...)

As always I tried to correct the mistakes. The colors are more intense. She isn't so thin anymore! I made some re-colors. And a lots of minor changes. Hope she looks better now ^^

"I...I'm sorry Chemm but I won't go with you. You know, I just don't want to enter that house again. I won't be able to, and somepony needs to stay with Code anyways so..so I won't go. Sorry..."-she said and turned away from her. She felt so bad for letting her go with her injuries. Than a sudden thought ran across her mind. What if the monster or ghost appear and Chemm won't be able to run away from it. She would never forgive it to herself. "Wait, Chemm...I think maybe you shouldn't go. You have injuries so...just stay hete with Code." She didn't even asked Code to go instead of her after he saved her life. "I will go with Pyxel and we will be out in a minute." Violet made a nervous laugh than entered the house. "What could have happen...if we stay together, right?"-she asked from herself than looked around. The room where the little group was before now was empty. "Girls?.."-she asked quietly as she moved closer to the fireplace.

@, @@RedStorm, @@Sterling Crimson, "Get out of open!? Get out of this town as soon as we can!"-shouted Violet but she realized that it's better if she lower her voice. "Guys...That thing just get in the room, even if the door was stucked. There is no place where we would be in safe! I want to leave as we found the others. Please."-said and turned towards Pyxel who was already searching for the others in the old house. "Wait! You can't go alone! Somepony should go with you and I'll stay with the other one." There was no way that Violet enter the house ever again. She would rather stay outside in the cold. "Maybe he can't harm us if we move in groups. I mean, I was alone there when he appeared and maybe he was the one who bolted in the door..."

I don't know what should I do with Light and Sweet Symphony we cannot let them just there but what could have happen with them? I know Eddie wants to kill Light...Noble's OC but there still remaine one pony.

@, @@RedStorm, Violet agreed that they must leave as soon as possible. After what happened to her, or almost happened to her, they weren't safe there, in Echo Falls. Who knows what happenes next... Violet was shivering as she recollected what happened upstairs. That pony with his frightening eyes. And he almost killed her. If Code wouldn't be...She probably never thank him enough what he had done. As Pyxel mentioned Violet realized that she hadn't seen the grey stallion for a while. Pyxel said that maybe some kind of monster ate him but Violet was sure that what she seen wasn't a monster. He was so dim, and thin. He rather looked like a ghost but, ghosts doesn't exists. Right? "I don't think it was a monster.."-answered Violet as she looked to the old house. "..but I don't want to find out."

So here is my latest draw, everypony's favourite nurse, Redheart. Well, maybe this is a little different than as we usually sees her This is the first time when I finally used colored lines not just black. So guys, what ya think about her? Should I change something? Any kind of advice? Btw, I'm planning to make a comparison about have much my technics changed since I started to draw 10 months ago. Ha! Even I can't believe that I draw them. Oh, here is the pic! Welcome, Nurse Redheart! :

As Violet started to fall she couldn't do anything just closing her eyes and waiting for the crash with the ground. She felt that somepony grabbed her and in the next moment they reached the ground. Violet didn't hit herself for her biggest surprise but as she opened her eyes to see what happened she realized why. Code cushoined her fall that probably saved her life. "Oh no!" Violet get down from Code and sat down next to him. She breathed heavily probably from the shock that received. The last thing that she remembered was the creepy pony in the room and than she almost died but she wasn't and Code injured himself. "Code! I'm so sorry!"-she shouted.

Than you just need a reason

So Eddie you would like to kill, but now your oc is on the ground with broken bones. How he could murder?

@@RedStorm, @, Violet finally recovered her conscience but just after she released the window-frame. As she realized what happened she tried to hang on but it was late. She lost her balance and started to fall. She saw Pyxel under the window and Code flying towards herself who probably tried to save her.

Aye, Aye! It counts double! By the way Sterling I'm okay with your idea also I'm sorry but I'm so tired now it's 1:20 am here so I'm gonna go to sleep. Night guys

I don't know yet but I will figure out something.

I'm a bit sad but also I totally understand it guys and I'm sorry if I disappointed you. I can figure out something but first I like to ask the others that they would like to continue it? As I said I totally understand if not.

@, "Come on, please...open."- she mumbled while she listened to the steps that came from above. Soon, she heared Code calling her name, but as soon as she wanted to reply the noise stopped. "Code! Code...I'm here. The door stucked and I can't open it! Code, there is somepony else in this house! We are not alone!" Violet could bet that she felt gasping behind herself. She turned around immediately but there was nothing. She turned back and shouted to Code. "Get me out of here! Please!" She felt the gasping again but now as she turned around again her heart stopped for a minute. Somepony stood there not far from her with her head laid down. Violet started to panic and kicked the door as hard as she can but nothing. She started to sob. "Code...please..." The strange pony raised his head slowly. Violet now could see his eyes and that moment she felt so calm. "Everything is alright. Come with me. I can get you out from here"-said the unknown pony and grabbed Violet's hoof. "Just follow me.." The pony started to walk backwards to the direction of the window and Violet followed her without any word. She lost her conscience. "See, this is the way where you can get out."-said the pony and moved away leaving Violet alone. Violet slowly approached the window, opened it, and climbed up to the ledge.

Who talked about your OC? >

Don't worry there wont be zombies What I planned is much more worse than it. Cute...bunnies. It's enough to look into their eyes and you will get instant heart attack. Btw guys what do you think? I think Eddie should suffer more! Moar! Muhahahaha!

A scream was coming from outside and soon she heared steps coming from downstairs. She looked out the window and saw Pyxel leaving. She stood up and wanted to go after him, maybe she can help, but she couldn't. The door of the room which was opened a few minutes ago, was closed now. She tried to open it, but it didn't move. She wanted to shout when she heared steps above herself. They were not alone in that house. The young ponx turned around and looked directly at Pyxel. "I said go away...oh.. It's never mind now.." The young pony slowly walked closer to Pyxel still looking in his eyes. "It's too late now...It's too late now! They are here..." His face was emotionless as he said the last sentences than turned around and started to walk away till he disappeared in the dark.

Violet was getting tired as she sat there doing nothing just watching the fire. "I'm gonna look around a bit."-she said than get up from the ground. The house, where the little group settled for the night, wasn't big but it had two floors. Violet found the stairs at the end of the hallway and started to stragger up. The stair creaked under her hooves even if she tried to be very careful. Well at least the guard was okay. As she reached the top of the stairs she saw only one corridor front of her but it led to many rooms. Violet opened the closest door and found out that once it was a bedroom. There were two beds, one of them was next to the window. Violet sat down to that and look out the window. The sky was so clear that she could see the stars, and the town, it was so quiet. @@Eddie, "You shouldn't be here."-said a voice from behind Eddie. "You shouldn't be here! You must leave!" The pony who talked to Eddie couldn't be older than 7 years old and there were burns in several place on his body. And his eyes. Something wasn't right with them. "Go away...While you can.."-he said again and headed to the direction of the chair. "The others doesn't like visitors..."

"Thank you so much!" Violet opened the can and started to drink. It turned out that she was thirstier than she thought. She couldn't stop drinking it till she noticed that it was empty. Meanwhile the others found a place to tide over the night. Violet followed the others to the house. She immediately noticed the spiderwebs. Violet can't stand spider. She is even afraid from the smallest one and the thought that her mane could hitch into one of those cobwebs was terrible. She tried to find a place which wasn't so dusty and was away from any kind of spiders. One of the other ponies made a fire so Violet slipped a bit closer to the fireplace, carefully. "By the way, my name is Violet."- introduced herself Violet.

"This town is empty!"-shouted Violet furiously as she walked from one of the doors to another one. "That's our luck! Hete is a town which was our only hope but nah...it's a ghost town. She kicked into a gravel that broke the window of the house front of her. "Oh..I'm sorry but that never mind. It isn't matter anyway because this town is dead!" Violet wealked to the stoop and sat down to rest for a bit. She heared Code's offer. "Well, I'm a bit thirsty so if you could give me something to drink well, that would be good." Violet looked to the sky. "By the way,I think we should find a place to rest as soon as possible. It's getting cold in here."-she said and looked at the others. "So what do you think, guys?"

So, after I uploaded the original picture, I've received some advice, how she could look better. I went back to the vectorising and changed a few things. The original: And the new one: I think the difference is so obvious. -From now she hasn't got such a strange eyes. -made a few small correction in her mane. -also her mane had been recolored -new horn -fixed cutiemark -the headphone is also fixed -oh, and her nose isn't as sharp as it was. It isn't finished yet, cus the shadows from her body are missing, I just like to know what you guys think about it. Maybe you guys have another advices to me. Also I thought about making a backround to her. What you think about that idea?