ok so I have been working on an idea for about 5 months but i've run into many snags. I was turning it into a fanfic but its kind of sketchy on general written and depth aspects. I have also been trying to turn it into a somewhat animated series. I am looking for help, ideas, and over all feedback on my base idea. the general idea I had going was (and its probably going to sound pretty generic plotline-ish): before equestria 2 sides of opposing ponies were fighting with rather advanced technology, one wanted to rule the world while the other wanted to keep peace and order, war broke out it goes on for quite some time and all of a sudden it just ends. both sides aren't heard from for a long time and equestria is formed (pretty much a far off continent) time goes on and chrysalis attacks at the wedding to be hurdled into the distance. she lands in the wastelands of the once war torn area from before and finds the enemy side of the wars factory and proceeds to use this advanced technology to take revenge on equestria. the other side of the previous war notices what's going on and attempts to aid equestria in finishing what had started ages ago. that pretty much sums the intro and plot. I am trying to get some ideas on why the war ends from before where did these 2 groups go/do and what did they do for this long period of time. as for it being animated and such I have been looking for help with va's artists and such.
i'm hoping to get any feedback I can and also am hopeful to find helpful members of the community.
(edit) attachment: MLP Friendship is T3CHN1C4L.docx the unedited story/idea of the story (subject to multiple changes and edits)