OOC: LOL I wasn't mad at all. You didn't ask for a opinion. All you did is show me XD.
I'm not the sort to criticize a person's character they made, but on the other hand, if it were to help one person to improve their character I suppose I could say one thing or two.
There's nothing wrong with making god like characters but question is; is it fun? A character that can shatter a planet at a snap of a finger since he was a colt, was it a blast?
You said he was born from an immortal father so he instantly got his divine powers by birth. Which means he didn't earn it, he was born with it. So you are limiting yourself to exploiting different areas for your character.
In Greyhawk's case, he wasn't born with it. Ok, maybe in ponyverse they were born with it but they still need to discover their hidden talent. But still, Greyhawk's special talent started out very simple and basic and that is the sight and communication with the ghosts.
Yea at first, I thought it wasn't much either with somepony who were able to communicate with ghosts. But I have been exploiting the use of it and soon come to terms that a simple talent can do so much when you make use of it.
What about Kira? How did he discover his special talent? Try consider what I just said and maybe it would work.
Thanks I loved my character alot. I put alot of heart into it.
Oh! One more advice;
do some discussing with your friends too. It could help develop your character. You see, I didn't create Greyhawk alone. I had help from friends too to start him off outside and within the forum.