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  1. Legendary Emerald
    This is a very big improvement, but still not quite enough to be accepted into this particular RP. Your character is fine, and there are parts of his backstory that we like, but your grammar and prose isn't quite meeting the high level that Skyman and I are setting for this RP. There are plenty of RP games on this forum and others that will accept you without pause, and I suggest you check them out. You learn more about writing the longer you engage in it, so if you want to improve, the best way is to keep at it.
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    Thank you for showing interest in our role play game. Unfortunately, your character does not suite the needs of this RP at this time. In the future, please be aware that it is common courtesy to link to your character's database in any "searching thread". It's a bit of a hassle for RP mods to search for it themselves, and in your specific case, it took longer to find than to read through. There is not enough information present on your database to give the impression of a well formed character as it stands, and the backstory you've given is not suitable for this sort of roleplay. The rules specify that characters have a KH specific backstory available on their page, even if it is just a slight modification of the character's existing backstory. You will have one more opportunity to submit your character sheet after making changes to it, if you wish. But if you are truly interested in taking part in this roleplay, I think you would be better off creating a new character that is more than an avatar for yourself.
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    Thank you for showing interest in our role play game. Unfortunately, your character does not suite the needs of this RP at this time. While the abilities your character has are unique and well suited for play, the "personality" section of your character sheet lacks focus and does not paint a picture of a consistent character. The "backstory" section is a block of text, which is nearly unreadable. Proper paragraph structure is a must for this RP, and you've unfortunately made a bad first-impression in that regard. You will have one more opportunity to submit your character sheet after making changes to it, if you wish. But if you choose to, be aware that a new rule has been added to the rule list, which specifies that each character sheet have a new/modified backstory that will specifically allow them to exist in the KH universe.
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    The description seems to imply that everypony has been living in the apartment for a while now, and are already familiar with each other. Wouldn't it make more sense for the characters not to know each other yet, and for them to be meeting for the first time at the start of the RP? That way the players could get to know each other's characters through the character actions, not from character bio pages that could never possibly give a complete picture of a character's personality and the relations they would have with different characters. Edit: Apparently the RP has already started, so my advice is kind of rendered pointless. Nevermind.
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    GOOD FRIEND! (Also he already read the first chapter and said that "it's not even bad at all". That may be the strangest compliment I have ever received. )
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    Please check out my new fanfiction, 6 months in the making. First storyline is complete! http://mlpforums.com/topic/51344-the-subordinate-six-fanfiction-first-storyline-complete/

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    Cover art by Arylett-Dawnsborough It's finally done! The first episode of my fanfiction, "The Subordinate Six", is completed and free to view on FIMFiction Dot Net! It's already managed to make its way onto the Featured Stories list (if you don't have your profile set to include +18 stories, at least ), and is getting some favorable reviews. Please give it a read; I didn't work on this for 6 months only to have a handful of people see it! The Subordinate Six Summary: Las Pegasus, the entertainment capital of Equestria. Lyra and Bon Bon arrive in the city prepared to start a new life, but run into some familiar faces. For instance, there's a wall-eyed mailmare living next door, and some traveling magician won't stop proclaiming her own greatness. And Lyra could swear she's seen this pony named 'Vinyl Scratch' before, but Octavia is remaining tight-lipped. Can they make it in this town of glitz, glamor, and crazy ponies? (First episode/storyline is completed!) Characters: Lyra, Bon Bon, Derpy, Trixie, Vinyl, Octavia Genre: Comedy/Normal with eventual shipping Rated: E10+
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    6 months of writing and editing... now sent off to EQD. Feels good man.

    1. duidamasterXD

      duidamasterXD

      I can imagine. Good luck :)

    2. Dave247

      Dave247

      I wish you the best of luck and hope everyone enjoys i as much as I did :)

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    I came.
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    Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to read a story that isn't quite as weird, and that I actually put time and effort into, give my story "The Glowmelon Mystery" a shot. There should be a link in my signature. That fic has an EQD stamp of approval.
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    Granny Smith's Twilight Delight Description: HAPPY VALENTINES' FOOLS' DAY! Granny Smith has fallen in love with Twilight Sparkle, and now the librarian has to find out how to lose a mare in 10... scratch that, 1 day. Written for a 30 Minute Pony prompt. Please don't take this seriously in the slightest; I sure as heck didn't when I was writing it. Rated T for verbal innuendo. Hopefully y'all will get a cheap laugh out of this.
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    Just wrote a Twilight x Granny Smith joke-fic for Valentines' Fools' day. Check it out here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/83820/granny-smiths-twilight-delight

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    2. Rainbow Dash

      Rainbow Dash

      I never laughed so hard in a while. i thank you for your genius.

    3. Legendary Emerald

      Legendary Emerald

      Thanks. Btw, story seems to be getting downvoted a lot, probably just because it involves a strange ship. If you like it, thumb it up plz. :)

    4. Rainbow Dash

      Rainbow Dash

      i up-voted. people who down-voted it are in denial about their feelings if you know what i mean haha

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    Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. I don't go on this site very often these days. Overall, I found the album very enjoyable, professional sounding, and containing a number of earworms that won't be leaving my head anytime soon. I think the highlight for me was the "Balloon in My Basket" remix, which is one of the greatest feel-good remixes in the fandom. I'd actually had that song on my mp3 player for many months and loved it, back before I knew you'd changed your name from DJ-Pon3 to Freewave. Other songs of particular note were the remix of "Spring", "Road to Appaloosa", and "Tonight". Most songs were at least good if not mind-blowing, though. Only slight criticism I'd have is that some songs tend to use (or abuse) vocal clips a bit too much. "He's a Bear" is a great example, and probably the only track I didn't get any real enjoyment out of. Congrats on finishing this album. You did a great job.
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    I used the Rarity Ind. + BGM file, without really having an understanding of what the purpose was. I let myself relax and listened to the whole thing, and could feel the changes that the voice was telling me to feel. My inner voice even changed to Rarity's. But after the recording ended, I didn't know what I was supposed to do. It was very relaxing, but I don't see the point of it all. Can someone explain to me? Edit: It's worth noting that my head still feels a bit cloudy at the moment, and the way I type and think seems to have been effected by the experience, in small ways. I repeated the "revert to normal" mantra a few times, but it only does so much.
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    Downloaded it just now, after listening to the first song. Will give full impressions after I've listened to the album in full, but I like what I'm hearing so far.
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    *edit* The situation has been cleared up; nothing to see here. Move along, move along. Hey, that means you Derpy! No, no don't drop that piano! Nooooo!
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    *edit* The situation has been cleared up; nothing to see here. Move along, move along. Hey, that means you Derpy! No, no don't drop that piano! Nooooo!
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    I can't believe Lyra is actually on her way to winning this! Can it be that the world has finally come to realize what I have known all along?!
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    I think this may be the worst username and avatar I've ever had on this site. And that's saying something.

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    the legend of emerald

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    I actually can't name a single Mega Man fan game that is better than this. And the only other series which get fangames worth a damn are Sonic the Hedgehog and Mario (with a few exceptions, of course). I think Capcom's piggy-backing the project is pretty pathetic too, but if nothing else, they might have helped the game get finished a bit faster than it would have otherwise. Maybe. Who can really know? Glad you liked the video. The whole series of vids is actually online now, in the playlist I linked. Part 10's trimming still needs to be processed by youtube, though.
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    Just completed my blind-run LP of the game Mega Man x Street Fighter, and realized there was no thread for the game here on the forum! I'll fix that. Mega Man x Street Fighter is a fan game, given monetary and advertisement support by Capcom, which features Mega Man going through levels inspired by Street Fighter arenas. And of course, at the end of every stage, there's a classic Street Fighter character to beat down. Overall, I wasn't expecting much from the game. But DAMN, did it deliver. One of the best fan games I've ever played, and hands down the best Mega Man fan game I've ever played. The game is available for free on Capcoms official site, but the download link works very slowly, or disappears entirely depending on how swamped the server is. Best of luck! www.capcom-unity.com/mega_man
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    Just completed my blind-run LP of the game Mega Man x Street Fighter. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZk_ikk5c_k&list=PLG9fXHJlgGoDV-N7bVnJ_QPTKrPD9kPQy&index=1 Playlist: (not all videos done being uploaded & processed yet, but they're all que'd up) Overall, I wasn't expecting much from the game. But DAMN, did it deliver. One of the best fan games I've ever played, and hands down the best Mega Man fan game I've ever played.
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    Currently uploading my LP of Mega Man x Street Fighter! 5 vids are currently up, with more on the way!

  25. Legendary Emerald
    Loud rapping at the door finally woke Lock Heart from his nap. His eyes squint in the low light of the box-car; he felt as if it had been an eternity since he last did anything. He yawned loudly and scratched his back with a hoof. "Hope I didn't miss anything important. It'd be a shame if I missed an opportunity to drive somepony's ego into the dirt." Lock Heart said to himself. "I'll get right to it. But first, can't criticize on an empty stomach. Think that's one of Iron Will's rules. If you don't properly eat, you can never compete... or some bullshit like that." Lock Heart looked around himself. "I really must stop talking to myself so often." --- Lock Heart completed the short trek to the meal car, passing ponies on his way. He saw several prime targets for trolling, but kept his mind focused on the task of receiving some form of edible sustenance. Several ponies were already at the dining area, seated complacently. "Perfect timing on my part." he said, sitting at a seat that was unoccupied on both sides. "Now to wait and see if I'll first be served caviar or escargot. Joy." Lock Heart looked around and saw that several ponies already had their food; in fact, it seemed that it was a self serve. Feeling only slightly embarrassed, Lock Heart got up to get a plate.
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