Euphoria Aurora

Anti My Little Unicorn Fanfic Help:

Maybe someone should make a fanfic portraying the Unicornicopians as the bad guys with an insane army taking over Equestria. The Grand Ruler Celesto is actually a tyrant dictator (meaningful name much), while the power of believing is actually their misguided faith in their ''motives'' as well as their faith in ''authority is always right.''

My suggestions are:

It should be a Deconstruction Fic (go to TV Tropes)

It should have depth, it is heartwarming and most importantly, it should make sense.

A sort of realism to the drama, characters are not flat.

And that's it

'''Here is my template:'''

Celesto was once defeated by Queen Solara and King (I forgot his fandom name), before the birth of Princess Celestia and Luna. Banished to the depths of his mind.

Prologue: Twilight reads their story in an old book, being glad its just a story.... Or is it?

Dark skies loom over the plains of Ponyville (You think of the rest)

Celestia will have a one on one battle with Celesto to spare her subjects in an all out war with Unicornicopia. Celestia will lose because of the solar eclipse, Celesto will then beat her up and slings verbal insults at her. Luna arrives and fights for her sister's behalf as she is in no condition to continue fighting. Luna loses because Celesto cheated, and attacked her from behind when she was showing mercy when she just finished and demanded him to leave and to never show his face in Equestria again.

All of Canterlot is in distraught, Celesto will keep the princesses prisoners in an anti-magic stasis bubble. Later he will force Celestia to marry him to strengthen the merge of Unicornicopia and Equestria. At first she thinks it's a political marriage but then it's revealed that he has the "hots" for her!!!! and would forcefully have her bear his children. Luna and Celestia are disgusted! They can only hope for the elements of harmony...

Meanwhile Queen Cadence is the last monarch, and takes control of everything, as Princess Twilight is still to young to govern. Her brother King Shinning Armor manages the army to prepare for war.

lightning dawn meets up with Twilight in an "attempt" to convince her to yield to the Great "autocratic empire" [of] Unicornicopia. Saying she belongs their. Twilight will have nothing for it, and deconstructs his belief and motives. lightning at first pities Twilight, truly believing she's insane (like Ace Ray) and belongs in an insane asylum. Twilight annoyed, and continues her rant. lightning becomes psychotic and threatens to kill her next time they meet while saying she doesn't belong to their "magnificent" empire anyway. To lightning's surprise, Twilight took it as a compliment. The two bitterly part ways.

Princess Twilight and her friends have an adventure to evacuate the neighboring kingdoms (the griffons, the changelings, the dragons) to Canterlot as the (Princess Cadence) shields are being raised as well as to convince them to join the army, and have a rousing speech about "think of your children if they win" type of speech.

Discord is the one to rescue the princesses as well as confess his love for Celestia.

The lightning dawn and his friends journey to end Twilight's "madness". As the adventure and the hardships continue the Mane Six realizes the true power of their virtue:

Honesty becomes Integrity

Loyalty becomes Devotion

Generosity becomes Charity

Kindness becomes Compassion

Laughter becomes Optimism

Magic becomes Friendship

Harmony at it's finest

As the Mane Six realizes this as they become true Alicorns and they are the ones to defeat their (supposedly more powerful magical alicorn counterparts.)

Twilight realizes the last virtue at the penultimate battle. The epic battle between the Equestrians and the Unicornicopians begin. Her friends sacrifice their power to give Twilight strength (becomes a Grand Alicorn like the other princesses) at the final battle with Celesto, as the beam of rainbow friendship forms, added with Love by Cadence and Shinning Armor with Celestia and Luna. The beam turns into a divine golden ray of... Wait for it... Belief and blasted Celesto, leaving a giant crater. Celesto fatally injured wonders why this did not kill him.

Twilight tells him the real virtue of belief (you think of something, I got nothing), Celesto cannot believe the irony and conjures up a beam to attack Twilight from behind. Twilight walking away did not bother to turn as she closes her eyes and redirects the attack back at him. After awhile she turns back to her alicorn state. Where Cadence and Shinning Armor sadly tell her the bad news... Her friends are all turned into crystal.

Twilight goes to them and cries, she then hears her friends (talking about friendship, love) and convincing her to never forget the magic of friendship and "believe" they are still with her. She then promises and bring their words to her heart. As Twilight is now ready to rule Equestria.

Her friends are placed in the Canterlot square with a placard each:

Rarity of Charity

Fluttershy of Compassion

Applejack of Integrity

Rainbow Dash of Devotion

Pinkie Pie of Optimism

For all ponies to look up to, and "believe" in the magic of friendship. The End

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It's just a template so don't mind my grammar mistakes

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Dear everybody,

I cannot write this fanfic, it's not that I did not try, but I'm having trouble with my English. I cannot seem to make it... presentable, to be able to do justice to MLP.

To be very honest, I was only able to read 3 pages of that awful anti-fanfic. I could not stomach it, for the people who had the courage to read through the whole thing, you guys don't deserve a clap. No! For you guys, I give my salute.

I was only able to grasp a bit of the story by MST's and forums, that's how I got to know Ace Ray. The only redeeming, if not, the only sane character there.

By just reading three pages. The real moral I was able to grasp is to blindly obey. The magic of believing is kind of lost to me, the author never expounded on it, or I just missed it. Oh and giving your character the title "Grand Ruler" and putting serial numbers on the ponies flanks made me correctly assume this is a dystopia of grand proportions. You're just seeing things from the perspective of the Unicornicopians, mostly lightning dawn, the rather useless student of the Grand Ruler. (pls. Kill him and end his, I mean... My misery.)

My head ached when I read it, to those who haven't read it and are curious... I suggest you don't! If you still want, prepare some bag of ice on your head.

Yes, it was that bad! I am not exaggerating!

Why thank you, everypony. I didn't really expect a fast response.

Wayzer107, why don't we help each other out. In marketing, I'm told to learn the rules, so we could break it pieces. My teacher's very open minded about us. We are dared/instructed to enhance new ideas, improve old ideas, and to create the edgy, brilliant and out of this world.

You see, in the Philippines. My teachers are stressing how lousy are promotion and commercials are. Oh, and don't get me started on the soap operas. Ughh...

Hi Hi Puffy YumiMiko, so you like heavy metal. I have no genre when i listen to music. I listen to Kpop, metal, classical, alternative and... rap music.

I guess, in lean towards the classical type. Im only level two when it comes to piano. I tried violin once, and its very difficult, unlike guitars, violins have no frets, everything is played by ear. But piano's not easy as well, it takes a while to learn proper fingering, and i often misfire my notes.

The funny thing when I listen to heavy metal is that I only listen to it when i do my plates. Classical music makes me sleepy, while heavy metal keeps me awake. Another funny thing is, its rather quite dissonant especially when I'm doing a plate meant for kids.

I too like Adventure Time and the Amazing World of Gumball. I like both Cartoons and Anime, although, i find Naruto and Bleach over rated. I did however like Death note and other animes like Blood+, I am also a fan of Junji Ito's horror mangas. I really appreciate the anatomically realistic style, and the best part is everything is played for horror, no fan service there.

And thats about it. nice to meet you all.

Hey there!  Of course everypony here will be your friend!  I'm a little touched by your story.  And it makes me feel really terrible.  

I'm great at mathematics, organizing, filing, writing, reading, art, computers, public speaking, and many other things... but I have no motivation.  

I am so petrified of the future, of how much time I have wasted, and I have no clue what it is that I should do.  I guess I'm a Cutie Mark Crusader of sorts...

 

I've worked at Microsoft, PetSmart, Wal-Mart, I've tried selling paintings, and working on a ranch, I've lived in big cities... and served in the military.  (24 btw)

 

The fact that you are so driven is a huge inspiration.  I'll bet you have more skill than you think you do.  If somepony like me who isn't friendly, tolerant, nice, or motivated can get recognition somepony as AWESOME as you is gonna be HUGE one day.  I know you've helped me smile today, and who knows, maybe that smile is just the start.  

 

I owe you one, FRIEND.

You know Dark Dawn, I don't know if I could give you advice or if you could take this composition as words of wisdom. But...

There was once a time I worry about my future, like getting a job, helping my family and other things like how to get by. I hear people say, they might get lucky one day. I for one don't believe in luck, one should make their own luck in this world.

Then one day I had a revelation. After all this time, I've been counting my worries on my fingers. And so I tried to see things in a different light. I started focusing on the good things that happened, I made a mistake of counting and comparing though.

And so I realized, I should be the best person I could be, never mind that I'm second to last place when Im in class, eventually motivation just came to me. I stopped comparing my work from others, and slowly i realized how i improved. I started to live in the present. However that doesn't mean I'm oblivious to things. When i abandoned those feeling, it was then i saw that the world isn't as rotten as i thought it were.

You see, at first, i was regretting the course i took. People were saying if I'm going to a fine arts course, it would have been better, if i had taken interior decorating or architecture.

Im also annoyed at the double standardness of being optimistic compared being cynical.

It was through my advertising course, I started to learn how to become savvy. I started taking advantage of what people thought to a disadvantage. It's mostly about perception and assumptions, heh, people just like to label others. *smirks*

After all, life is simple, I shouldn't have been complicating it, but it was never synonymous to the word easy.

You have so many talents, so many things you could accomplish. If you find it hard to start your work with love or passion, then i suggest you start by viewing the world differently, from what you perceive and from what others perceive. Time will come and only you can stop yourself.

Why Hello every pony, I am Euphoria, an earth pony studying at Canterlot's grand guild of Fine arts; I am a novice artisan of the trade. My cutie mark has yet to come.

In real life, I am an advertising student, a mix of both marketing and fine arts.

Im learning how to appeal, to do photoshop, make magazines, posters and to attract.

Productions and Promotions will be my forte one day.

Never the less, I sound like I'm extremely talented... But you are wrong. I can barely paint, my sketches are a mess, i don't even know how to paint digitally.

I live in a harmonious land called the Philippines *cough* *cough*

However like Pinkie Pie, I'm very optimistic of the future. We are after all the new generation. One day, just one day, I will become great, I could inspire, like my heroine Lauren Faust. However, i am aware you cant fulfill your dreams by just waiting for it.

And thats why i came here. I know us Bronies and Pegasisters are generous in sharing knowledge. Im still trying to learn foreshortening and proper shading; tempra (poster) painting i could do, but colored pencils are my weakest.

I am interested to learn how to watercolor and (digital and traditional) animation. Speaking of animation, what software does mlp use?

Creativity and Inspiration are in my veins.

I am a fan of Rarity, although, I'm not a fashionista. I just love her artistic flavor.

Also im very new here, i might get lost, if that ever happens, can some pony give me directions. *sigh* to lazy to read the directory.

And thats about it. Hello!