Remmie Moore

invite sent, i'm joshuamerrick on steam :3

i'm not much of a writer but I can go through a script and absolutely FILL it with improvement notes and re-writings

Hiya, I write scores and I've been doing stage musicals for about 8 years, I can write the instrumentals but lyrics are not my forte (I could do it if nobody else can but someone else could likely do it better). I can compose tracks, sing (I'm a tenor, I can go into a bit lower or higher but I can't really do a full bass or alto), write, act and edit audio. (also, wow we have a lot of musicians, that's awesome!). Here's a link to my soundcloud, and you can catch me on skype at joshua.merrick

you could try indieDB, I *think* they host uploads, but I'm not 100% sure

Yeah, just wanted to throw it out to the forums in general first.

I'm not really good at MLP impressions (doesn't help that there are all of 5 male characters in the universe ) and I thought it'd be nice to get a group together to do a bit of improv voice acting, be it impressions or just random voice, to have a bit of fun and stretch our VA muscles and range without actually having to do any roles or anything important. if you fancy having a bit of VA improv fun then you can add me on skype at joshua.merrick or PM here. thanks!

I'd love to do some collab, I've been wanting to do some analysis but I don't tend to do well speaking on my own.

Here is a recording of my voice :3

added, cheers mate! my skype should show up as joshua.merrick rather than remmie

Icetron, master of the metaverse

Merry Doomcloud... such a disturbingly happy expression...

Bow ties are cool, even without a shirt

7/10, interesting to look at

This looks cool, can I join the mighty guild of voice acting? Here is a link to a soundcloud demo I threw up today, in a playlist where ill put all my demos. https://soundcloud.com/joshua-merrick-2/sets/voice-acting

I can help with the music if you like, I'm a composer but I've also done a lot of audio editing for podcasts and such in the past. I can also do voice acting so if you want an English accent for a background character give me a shout. I don't know if I can help too much with the art/animation as I don't quite know how you're doing it. I've been learning to animate in the MLP style, but I've been doing it in anime studio rather than flash (which most people seem to use). Here are some links: voice demo https://soundcloud.com/joshua-merrick-2/sets/voice-acting Music demo https://soundcloud.com/joshua-merrick-2/unhallowed-murder-in-the https://soundcloud.com/joshua-merrick-2/wasteland-jam-guitar https://soundcloud.com/joshua-merrick-2/dreaming-looking-up

I'd be happy to do a bit of voicing, but I have an English accent so I don't know where it may fit in. if you need an English voice give me a shout

That's one of the reasons I love to pick the show apart, it really feels like there are things to be discovered in the world

sounds awesome, i'm in. My singing isn't great but I can do instrumentals

mind if I add you on skype so we can talk about it?

looks awesome! I've done one of mine, though im not really happy with the proportions. Incidentally, im planning a video on why peeps picked the OCs they did, fancy joining me?

A hug from Discord, awesome! If I ever meet John De Lancie I shall use this to my advantage...I can blame the internet... Mwahahaha!

Hiya, I decided that a dragon OC would be kinda cool, but the only dragons to reference are babies, teenagers and GIANT DRAGONS, none that are adults but vaguely sized to deal with ponies. I don't know why, but the shape I went with just seems off. I'd appreciate any critique or advice in drawing a dragon like this (and I know, I'm not doing the typical colour palette of MLP because doing each section with a different colour takes a lot longer for me and I prefer this style for drafts). Thanks in advance!

Incidentally, is has anyone else done video/sound editing before? I'd be interested in having a talk about the style of video editing for something like this as I feel the current style most brony analysis vids take won't work as well for this and I think there are far better ways we can do it. I'd also like to throw out there that since a bunch of people don't seem to have skype, I ahve a TS3 server you can use if that would work better. I'd also love to throw in things like sketches and improv skits to keep the feed fresh if anyone else is interested in that sort of thing. I'd love to be part of that discussion, though not a Christian myself i've always found the religious comparisons to shows like this to be some of the most thought provoking because of how they usually deal with very old and set definitions of traditional morals. and if anyone wants to feel free to skype me for a chat

While I agree with the idea that simple is often better, for something like this I would think a more powerful verb should be used rather than hitting, which is a little vague in my opinion, as this part of the scene is quite action heavy in contrast to the second section. I would rewrite that part more like this: In a panic the unicorn flung the vase at the figure, striking the girl above the nose, shattering into a shower of porcelain shrapnel, the pieces clawing at her eyes like the talons of some enraged fiend. In a just sounds odd to me without this panic the unicorn flung the vase at the figure​ rewriting this I realize how difficult it is to sue anything other than common nouns without actual names, so if there are no alternate nouns you could use for these characters earlier in the story I recommend you try and add some to give a little variety, striking the girl above the noseif we have more specifics of where the vase hits here, then we can be less specific later, shattering into a shower of porcelain shrapnel if you have the chance to add alliteration, assonance or sibilance I recommend you do it. it makes for a good flow a lot of the time and also gives you a chance to try and work in some more exotic words without them feeling out of place, the pieces clawing at her eyes like the talons of some enraged fiendadding similes gives the reader a better understanding of the situation and allows them a clearer image of the action, alternatively you could use a metaphor to cut down on length by a couple words. While the verb 'clawing' may not be best used in this description normally, we have already given to reader the information that a) she is hit by shrapnel from a shattered vase (which is quite a distinct image) and it hits her in the face, so we already have an image in our mind of the type of damage being caused here, so we have more leeway to be creative with the actual damage later in the paragraph. I do, however, understand that this kind of description is a much longer sentence and it really depends on the flow of the rest of the story as to how long the sentences should be. Also I didn't even consider the tears, genius!