Cannon and rarity

I'm making a new fanfiction that isn't on FIM fiction yet but will be soon but here is a link:

http://www.quotev.com/story/6482868/Imperials-of-War-MLP-Fan-Fic/BYE!!

Alright then (rainbows and unicorns to get 20 characters)

We know that because that's why people make prequels for BACKROUND infomation

Oh and why 1 months?: becuase when Trixy finds Big Mac he talks about applejack dieing and is still sad about it because it wasn't too long ago

Although Pinkie Pie is undoubtedly awesome, she is not a good explanation if you are writing a serious fanfic.

Also, why did AJ and other ponies who would know how to handle stuff didn't survive, but a girl who brags and lies for a living does?

And just "I feel she needed love" does not justify why she survived. In my fanfic, most of those who are still there in the war are there because they were the best, the ones who knew how to fight and survive, and no one, no one survived because of love. In a post-apocalyptic world such as the one you are writing, only the best survive, and I doubt Trixie has any real life experience.

 

I highly recommend you go on Springhole and read some of the tutorials there.

1st time: pinkie pie knocked her out

2nd time: I'll change it soon

And I will soon

Ok then, here are a few tips and questions you need to get right for the story:

 

Why did Trixie survive? Why her and not other more able ponies? Why did she fall asleep for more than 1 year?

 

How do we know that an apocalyptic event will strike a few weeks later?  Why did you use "started" (a past tense verb) to describe an event in the future? Well unless you want to do something about time travel, that would justify it but still, it's a confusing grammar.

 

Why did those other ponies survive? Who are they?

 

What is the cataclysm that happened 1 year earlier?

 

Those are some questions I would ask myself when reading your fanfic. You need to remember to take everything into account, not leave a single detail behind.

Why did she fall asleep for over a year: uhhhhhhh PINKIE PIE

How did we know it started weeks later?: people told her

Why using started: again uhhh pinkie pie

Why did other people survive who are they?: because apoclypse stuff and lots of people like: dr hooves,big Mac,applebloom,spitfire,flash century,Fluttershy and a lot more

What happend a year earlier?: I'm gonna make a prequel all about it

Any more questions?

Nah, putting your stuff here is fine. Care to give me the link to the fic? I might be able to help.

I actually haven't gotten chapter one done so it's impossible to see until I put 1,000 words and get accepted

Hi! Are you writing a Fanfiction? If so you may need someone to proof read each chapter as it comes out. I have a lot of free time at night to read, so if you need anything to be proof read and some improvements recommended, feel free to send me a link in PM or here. I'll read it ASAP and recommend some improvements and corrections.

I'm currently writing a fan fiction which I have no ideas for bu I would love proofreading help

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So I made the last of the cast for my Prism Ponies but I'm having a hard time in finding a talent for her and a name so a bit of info and ideas.  Given she has unicorn blood I thought of making her a Spell- Crafter or a talent with Telekinesis....

 

Name is still leaving me a bit in a blank area also!

 

Name: Uknown

Age: 18

Race: Earth Prism Pony

Job: chronicler/explorer

Father: Oak-Earth Pony

Mother: Sweetblade-Unicorn

Twin Sister: Nimble-unicorn: http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y111/DemonicHellfire/1cd_zpssaaz2g2x.png

Personality:

 

Good Side

Born Leader

Outgoing

Charming

Courageous beyond compare

Noble and warm-hearted

Willing to  fight the good fight to the bitter end if the cause is worthy.

Honest

 

 

Bad Side

Bossy at times

Harsh

Holds a grudge

Holds onto the past

Young

Prone to emotional outbursts.

Tends to probe a bit to much and has problems backing off

Rushes

 

Cutie Mark:  A wand with sparks coming out (given Nimble is her twin,  I made their cutie marks match just a bit.

 

Image:

Hey there.

 

As this seems to be looking for feedback / ideas, I've moved it on over to Creative Resources.

How many of what exactly?

Celestia and Luna war fics

I think they meant that this Luna and Celestia war fic thing has been done so many times. I don't think he/she meant it like that(at least i don't think so).

What she said (rainbows and unicorns jsut because I need 20+ characters)

I'm making a new fan fic and I need ideas so here is my description for it: Trixie wake up a year after an incident almost killing her but what she doesn't know is a few weeks later an apoclypse started with very few survivors will her and her friends survive? And who will die?

Well I say f*ck you other fics. I didn't start drawing or getting my fanfics out there for them to blend in the crowd. I did it so that they stand out. I will call Celestia's army Celestians. Even though she represents the sun, she is named Celestia after all. 

 

Also not to be offensive, but you should watch your grammar.

 

And did you say my story was... copied? I've seen my share of WW2 fanfics but no other tells the story of a Tiger tank crew, so I don't see where you find the "1000 other copied fics".

Well what should I call Luna's forces? Moonbutts? Celestian is for Celestia, Lunar is for Luna.

No you got lunar right but the main term is solar for celestia's side we KNWO this because this book is kinda copyrighted off of let me see: 1,000 other fics

Celestia is the enemy for the crew. Both sides do horrible things (because you know, world war going on).

 

Can you use mine which is my profile pic

And if you think all alicorns are marysues could you use my other one

Why is CELESTIA the enemy I kinda picture Luna being the enemy

OMG so amazing I love the art on it

i jsut got pranked

JK happy late April fools I jsut messed around with the link like I'm gonna changed what you said here

I hate you

Why?

Name one princess that isnt a alicorn and a pony that is an alicorn thats not a princess

"Well I can name an alicorn that isn't a princess a remember a yellow one with blue mane forgot her name"

Does being a princess make you an alicorn or does being an alicorn make you a princess?

None some princesses can be alicorns not all and if you are an alicorn it doesn't mean you're a princess

this still joinable just wondering

is this still opened? I would love ot join

open characters:

rarity

rainbow dash

pinkie

fluttershy

applejack

applebloom

sweetie belle

scootaloo

celestia

luna

RP: http://mlpforums.com/topic/124889-the-alicorn/