Musical bronies, I need you. So usually I just make instrumental stuff, but after episode 100 I wanted to make a song with Lyra singing to Bonbon. I can't sing, so it turned into a rap. This is the first time I've made a semi-ok rap. I read a lot of articles and did a lot of experimentation with mixing vocals, but I am still very new at it. So right now I've done all I can think to do. Any advice/constructive critique on my mixing/instrumentation/lyrics/pronunciation/etc... would be appreciated. Thank you so much!
Link to soundcloud here https://soundcloud.com/tgaffe/pink-and-blue-lyras-rap-produced
I also put a crappy voice changer on it for experimentation. Link here https://soundcloud.com/tgaffe/pink-and-blue-lyras-rap-lyra-voice Pros: I kind of sound like a girl. Cons: It sounds like a girl rapping into a can