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Mentis Soliloquy

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  1. Hello @Loud Opinion (I'm a little slow my apologies) I've gone over your Crystal mare and she is something and a half that is for sure I must say and what I've been reading it seems Randimaxis and yourself have been working on her quite a bit since the start and have created a monster... I mean well-written character. I can't find any issues with your character entry so I can do nothing more but approve her well done on this OC and have fun with her out there in Equestria.
  2. Questions if someone called jeric will be fiddling with staff ranks...?
  3. IF I DON'T SEE MY TEAM WIN I WILL PERSONALLY BAN... I MEAN SEND ALL OF MY OPPONENTS TO THE MOON FOR THE REST OF TIME!!
  4. How on Equas should I know?!... maybe @Randimaxis can answer your question, I summon thee...! Boss man.
  5. Emerald just sat there watching the go between the trio wonder about whether she'd end up in some prison cell for the rest of time or perhaps she'd be allowed to go back to her own life with that lovely collage mare she'd met. Not much she still could do despite her statue, she was better than most ponies due to her undeathly nature. But against Luster, she wasn't a challenge. Why on Equas Twilight decided to turn off her safety protocols was just bizarre to her. She simply continued to sit there and watch as the end of the world may have begun, perhaps it would not... She looked between the fighting parties. "Why... can't we just stop?" She just asked no one, who knows whom may of heard her among the events. "Just forget about the past and move on, it's easy enough to do. To let old wounds heal to move past them and forge a new future." She was speaking to anyone who would listen but she was hoping it was Luster who would, that droid was the nutter who was going to ruin two worlds. Everyone else here seemed to be less, bent on such things.
  6. Blast Jeric beat me to the punch. Yes! We're working on fixing the shambles called character sheets at this moment.
  7. @Twilight Sparkle Oh Princess this humble pegasus asks: What is your advice in restarting a friendship when there was a few issues, but we are both capable of moving past it. Any tips? Bat alas I missed this day due to work commitments and time zones damn you... someone?
  8. Yes sir? I am having a look and I think it needs a little more... chaos? @Randimaxis I summon thee.
  9. I'm going to keep an eye on here and see what occurs, a lot of fun I hope.
  10. We'd prefer that you did have one yes, do you have
  11. Did you look at my mention I sent on the 25th of June?
  12. @Buck Testa @Denim&Venom Kat had honestly enough of the teacher's attitude and was not going to make the mistake of talking to her again anytime in the next few centuries if she could help it as she was beyond insulted by how she was acting. Nevertheless, she kept her mouth shut and was almost dragged along to see the duel though she wanted to watch anyway really. What transpired though was... nuts! In a word. "Je sais que le premier jour du trimestre est normalement amusant ... Mais c'est plus que fou!" (just some info Katarina is French) She exclaimed as she felt the ground beneath her paws tremble and shudder at the movement of some awe powerful magic that was for sure and the call out for people to basically high tail it was really all the reason she needed to do the same making sure she took sure steps as she tried to get away from this 'dual' and back to her dorms at least those might stand better against this magical onslaught.
  13. @Hustler If you're having issues, by your permission I can edit on your behalf and fix the 3 things I've noticed. If you can provide a link to the Cutiemark image.
  14. The direct address of Luster to her was, a little surprising especially in which the manner it was delivered, Emerald was not in any real position of power to dictate anything that went on, in fact, she was retired only a few weeks ago, she was here because of her ties to Twilight not much else she wanted a rest... now all this shit. She didn't really have anything to say she just sorta sat there looking at her a bit blankly like a deer caught in headlights. Once Luster was looking at the droid, who was a human she rose a hoof to her chin in a moments thought... "Well, this got political all of a sudden..." She muttered to herself as she listened to the pair of... sufficient words to describe what was going on and who was involved simply didn't come to her mind, even though she was an older mare. "I mean if Twi has her way that's all and good, probably the best outcome, but Luster will probably have me in jail or she'll just evaporate me with some fancy gun she's got up her tailpipe." (I think I managed something of decent note I hope)
  15. Hello, @Loud Opinion I do apologise for making you wait, I've been a little slack. Nevertheless, I'm here to help in getting your OC through to approved. I had a look through your whole entry and it's pretty good I can't really see anything that would stop me from approving this character, but maybe hold off on so many commas in future But otherwise Blue Thorn is a rather interesting stallion and I like how he is still trying to discover his purpose in life despite having a cutiemark, quite a unique idea from the characters I've read.
  16. Hello Hustler I'm Mentis your humble servant and second approver of character Lumi. I've noticed one or two things, mostly so far are only sheet errors rather than anything wrong with your writing skills and such but nonetheless, we should try to address them. (If we can't fix them, then that's a shame but it is something I noticed.) You'll need to have a look at the link for his cutiemark it seems to be broken Lumi's likes and dislikes seem to be stuck on one line, best we break those up to avoid confusion. Now for the few typos/grammar things. There is a line in the second paragraph of his backstory there is a line that is like so "though both meant well, it eventually ended with the two separation" The usage or separation is incorrect and needs to be changed to separating or something to that extent to make sure the version of the word is correct. Apart from this one thing I spotted I see nothing else wrong with Lumi, he seems a good character indeed well done.
  17. @Denim&Venom Katarina had to put her thoughts in a row after being shouted at by the teacher she was trying to help. "Ur..." As she kept thinking it over before formulating a response. She decided to address them in the order that they were shouted at her in. "I think you should be setting an example to all the other adults in this school since there are no or very few kids here really... yes censorship is silly but no one is going to think well of you swearing your head off at me. Also, we have met, several times, I'm Katarina, one of the second years so we've bumped into one another from time to time." Before she could add more Ms.Tachibana simply dismissed her and walked off to talk to someone else in a car. "Well... that was a waste of my time and she was quite rude... so much for being a good samaritan." She said under her breath as she just stood there being completely ignored. "I mean you have some points, but... I guess it's not what I'd do, but then you're not me. But you must know to be so vocal with such language must... rub the wrong way with some people, a great many people don't like such 'real education' as you put it." Kat was trying to be tactful with her words on the subject.
  18. @Denim&Venom kat took note of Ms Tachibana probably one of the most out there teachers in school when it came to her personality, not she didn't mind at all really, the fox was a nutter and she thought it quite funny from time to time. However she did have a temp when she was inflamed as it were due to her large levels of personal passions, this would include students ignoring her despite how hard she tries to get noticed. She made a gulp and steeled herself as she walked over to her, hoping to cheer her up, expecting to be target practice for some sort of spell for her efforts. "Ms Tachibana are you er ok there? You are making quite a, un-teacher like amount of expletives in the middle of the school... I mean not that you don't know that, but er... well not the best impression to leave on the new students don't you agree?" Hoping she was making sense and wasn't going to be murdered, giving a small reassuring smile, which only exposed her teeth which normally made people nervous, but she hoped it'd not bother the fox.
  19. Kat after having made her way back to her dorm was in the process of study but gave up on one thing she yet despite all her seeming skill had yet to master and that was having a go at messing with metal in any way since it was an extension of Earth magic, however the poor cat simply didn't have the knack for moving it yet which annoyed her beyond belief. She put on a coat and headed back outside to get something to eat heading towards the school's cafeteria for something to chew on, and to hopefully clear her mind of the mental block the metal always seemed to cause her. She looked around as she was walking outside, she always enjoyed what the school looked like the older buildings, mixed in with the more modern architecture, it was to her just a joy to walk through no matter what time of year it was. (I'm leaving my post open for people to steal me :P)
  20. Kat always enjoyed the first year talks on the first day of the year, it was just as good as last year's when she joined herself. It made her smile thinking to what effect the speeches last year had on her for the first few months it seemed, at least from what her memory was telling her. She picked up her pack that was sitting at her paws (feet) and headed off to one of the libraries, she'd talk to the teachers she wanted to at a later time, they did have all year no need to rush. The cat was walking through the school taking in the sites as normal after leaving the main hall, even after a full year she'd never gotten over how nice the school looked. It seemed like every day was her first even though she knew most of the buildings she could enter or had to for classes very well. Though she liked exploring and knew most of the buildings well, except for the teacher areas as she could go there. She was whistling a little as she walked.
  21. @Denim&Venom She sucked in a breath of relief. "I'm happy that we sorted that out, but did it really take the staring contest in order to make that happen?" She was a little, well she didn't know she almost felt ambivalent about the whole situation.
  22. @Denim&Venom, @Arid_Blitz , @Duality Katarina was one of the many, many students who were in the main hall for the first year address, watching the teachers new and old come up and tell them all who they were and what they did. Of course, the Sabre had seen and heard most of if not all the rules the previous year when she joined the school to learn how to mover earth like it was made of air and she was pretty good at it. The only real reason she was there was to see who was new on staff and who was no longer with them. It was a good way to see who the teachers were before classes started, not that it really mattered, but it was something she liked. "Well that was interesting I suppose, well some of the new teachers are anyway..." She said to no one in particular as she stood watching with the rest of the student body. Her thoughts changed to her new geomancy teacher the girl... well a horse it seemed. It was nice to have a few none humans around from time to time, made her feel more comfortable, not that humans made her feel uncountable, just she did get some racist remarks from time to time and it was mainly from humans against her or what she was. "I look forward to meeting you miss Angelscape." She finished her random thoughts and looked for what was next to come at the assembly.
  23. For shows I'd like to say RWBY is something I like more. Not by much more but I love it's universe just a wee bit more.
  24. @Ponimatronic I might elaborate a little further actually being a Sectional Staffer. (Though @Jeric was an Admin (if my memory serves me correctly) so he knows his stuff.) To expand on his answer a little more. You'll see various sections of the site like MLP:FIM, Roleplay World and Octavia's World as examples. A Sectional will look after a certain section, for example I am a Roleplay World sectional. This means I have to make sure everything there is all ship shape. My job mainly includes reviewing OCs for EQE as well as making sure that people post this in the right area and that people don't just post in closed RPs and so on. A Sectional for another area would do other things. No idea what, I can make a guess but I'd not know as I only work within Roleplay World. TL:DR: In this long winded answer, Sectionals do the little moderation tasks like moving topics, reporting violations to Global Moderators, keeping and eye out to make sure users follow the rules and other sectional specific tasks. We're the front line soldiers making sure things run smoothly on our little front line. Hope that made sense, I go a little overboard when I answer stuff like this.
  25. I honestly don't think I've had to use Google for looking up so many word's definitions for any other application... Hello I'm Mentis and I'll be your second reader today. What can I even say? Your English skills are exemplary. I can't think of anything that needs changing. Any Roleplay will be lucky to pick up this character as she is so, damn well written. I can do nothing more than see your character approved and may you enjoy using her as much as both Randimaxis and myself took in reading her.
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