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    critique wanted OC Update

    Okay so I updated my OC but I still need help with the name. I updated my propic already and I wrote a work-in-progress bio&backstory ("Blue" is a placeholder name). Backstory: Blue was born and raised in Manehattan with her parents and two older siblings. Her siblings were extremely abusive and blamed her for their parents divorce. At school she excelled academically but was bullied for just about everything. From this, Blue developed depression and anxiety. She had multiple escapes but those are only temporary. So she built a pair of wings so she could fly away from the tormenting environment. Blue currently moves from place to place every couple of weeks but likes to stay around Ponyville since she finds the ponies there particularly fascinating. Bio: Gender: Female Species: Unicorn Age: 17 Personality in general- Introvert Fatal flaw- Never thinks she’s good enough Likes- Music, movies, learning, exploring Dislikes- Family, social things, herself Place of residence: Doesn’t have a set place Occupation: None Talents: Writing/storytelling, most other things creative Hobbies: Listening to music, reading, writing, creating So if I could get feedback and help with a name I'd appreciate the help! (Reminder that while my OC is self-based I did exaggerate some things)
  2. @Chrylestia600 @Hazard Time thank you both for the advice! honestly I thought of the character on a caffeine high but she is very self-based. I just wrote down what first came to mind but I'm changing things and working on the backstory now. to answer some questions though: like I said, she's self-based so the self-esteem and depression directly stems from me. with the alicorn thing though I just have an interest with and stuff so i kinda wanted to make it like she just recently became an alicorn and is still learning. as for the writing/storytelling, that's really the only talent i got irl so i'm thinking about making it something like she can literally make her stories come to life. Like I said, i wrote this on an energy high so i know it doesn't make sense. I'm working on that now though and I'll be posting the backstory and changes soon. thanks for your help though! Also if anyone has name ideas that would be immensely appreciated!
  3. @PrincessOfCompassion thanks for the advice! i really haven't thought her out extremely yet so I don't really have details but I'll take what you said into account. Thanks so much for the help! I really am new to the OC thing so any other tips would help greatly! =)
  4. I'm working on a self-based pony OC but I've never been good at characters so I need feedback and some help. I have somewhat of a bio and a picture. Gender: Female Age: 17 Species: Alicorn Hometown: Manehattan Current residence: Canterlot/Ponyville Occupation: Student under the 4 princesses Cutie Mark: Blue book w/ black pen Special Talent: Storytelling/writing Friends: Doesn’t have any even though her mentors keep telling her to find some Personality: Introverted and likes learning and creating things Flaws: Very low self-esteem, worries a lot, depressed 90% of the time How did your OC get their cutie mark? By getting a really good grade on a writing assignment in school How did your OC get to where they are today? She ran away from home and Luna brought her to Canterlot, sensing she had potential Powers: All the basic pegasus and unicorn powers I really need help with coming up with a name and more of a backstory(I guess?). I'm slightly new to this too so advice/feedback/etc is greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance.
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