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In my MLP Attack on Titan Crossover story Fluttershy ends up becoming the next Colossal Titan. However there is a slight problem I havem and that is the fact that I don't know what her design. Originally I was just going to use Armin's design from the orignal Attack on Titan Series, but now that I consider I think I'd want Fluttershy to look a bit differen. For context here's a picture of Fluttershy. And here is a picture of Armin's Colossal Titan from the Attack on Titan anime, and how Fluttershy's Colossal Titan was orignally going to look. And now a descrption of what Armin's Colossal Titan looks like which again is how Fluttershy's was orignally meant to look, but I think I'd want her version to look a bit different. In his Colossal Titan form, Armin is entirely skinless and is extremely tall, roughly similar to Bertholdt's Colossal Titan. His Titan has elongated, stocky arms reaching its knees and very muscular legs with short thick feet. His Titan's feet are shaped so that it can stand without falling over due to its proportions and height. Armin's Titan's upper body is also fairly skinny, with an exposed rib cage on the front and sides. Its face is missing a nose and almost all of its skin, which is replaced by bare bone. The eyes of Armin's Titan form are sunken in and somber, with muscle surrounding them. Armin's teeth are shown due to the lack of skin on his cheeks. However, unlike the previous Colossal Titan, Armin's Titan has lips which are surrounded by some muscle. What makes Armin's Titan particularly unique is the exposed windpipe that can be seen at its neck, with only two tendons in front of it. It also lacks visible outer ears. So yeah I'm sure I want Fluttershy's version of the Colossal Titan to look a bit different then Armin's Does anyone have any advice?

Hey guys I thought I'd share with you some Quotes of Cozy Glow from the fanfiction I'm working on. "Thanks for this Mr. Parcelsnap, you're assiantants is no longer required. Unfourntely though, I can't let you leave, so as much as it pains me. This is sadly the end for you". "As much as I kind of hate you Tirek, there are two ponies out their I hate even more". "That's one of the pros of being a famous actress. Ponies tend to give you what you want". "Noel Shine was a persona you two put on me, well I'm done being your puppet! I'm going to live my own life now"! "Seeing you powerless is like music to me". I recgonize you, but I'm not afraid you. Not anyomore". "This is where the fun begins". “I don't like sand. It's coarse and rough and irritating — and it gets everywhere.” "You can't rush art Bray". "I know what therapeutic means". "You have failed me for the last time". "In all my years I've never known true happieness, or friendship. It was always one show after another, then it was interviews, meet and greets, photoshoots, and of course.... The beatings".

Here are some easter eggs references and overhaul fun facts about My Fanfiction My Little Pony Friendship is Magic withReiner and Bertholdt. The book Apple Bloom is reading in The Ticket Master is most likely part of the Twilight series. Apple Bloom hums the song Leaves From The Vine to a crying filly. After being punched by Gilda Apple Bloom says Stan Lee's famous quote Excelsior. Applejack telling Fluttershy to trust their friends is a nod to Petra, and Levi's words to Eren Miss Cheerlie's class encounter's a Karen. Apple Bloom's Amber Eyes are a reference to the Silver Eyes from RWBY Apple Bloom going mute for a few weeks and using a Senryuu to commuicate is a referance to the Anime Senryuu Shoujo Sweetie Belle optians an energy sword similar to the one Tucker from Red vs Blue has. Apple Bloom has the abiltiy to glimpse into the Future Similar to the Attack Titan Cozy Glow's past as an actress is both a refereance to her insperation Shirely Temple, and Kaede Kayano from Assanation Classroon. Bright Mac and Pear Butter's Deaths are Similar to the Deaths of Thomas and Martha Wayne

Here I shall now give you the titles and synopis of 3 fanfictions I plan to right. Godzilla: Battle Of Equestria While swimming near the cost of the Phillipens Godzilla is transported to the land of Equestria where he senses the presence of an acient foe from his past. Now he must bring balance to this new land by defeating the evil Grogar, and ravenous Kanjira with the help of a new team up consisting of Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Toola Roola, Coconut Cream, and Petiuna Paleo Apple Family Horror On the outside the Apple Family looks like a very normal family, however unbeknowst to anypony except for the young Apple Bloom this family is hiding a dark secret. Can Twilight, and the rest of her friends save Apple Bloom from her family before it's too late, and who is this mysterious entitey refered only to as the Purple Guy? Ju On: An Equestrian Grudge Series. When someone dies in the grip of a powerful rage... A curse is born. The curse gathers in that place of death. Those who encounter it will be consumed by its fury. Those who survive will carry the curse with them...until it is reborn.

Hey so a few days ago I talked about two new possible scenes for 28 Pranks Later where Rainbow Dash pranks Apple Bloom justifiying the CMCs part in the Zombie Prank. First I'm going with the first scenerio where Rainbow Dash makes Apple Bloom think she's almost killed Rainbow Dash causing Apple Bloom to have a very severe panic attack, to the point where she has to be sent to the hospital do to a mental breakdown. Anyways after the Zombie Prank Apple Bloom is stil pretty peeved at Rainbow Dash (At least I think she would be), and basically Rainbow Dash is forbidden from seeing Apple Bloom for about a week, until things can be forgiven.

This isn't my song It's by Alec Benjamin I just made a few changes to the lyrics. Here's the orignal song that is not by me. So no I would not like you to critque my Lyrics because it is not My Song.

Outrunning karma, that filly Shes such a charmer, all the Bugs and their larva follow Her out to Canterlot Ten-dozen hearts in a bag Their bodies lyin', she'll drag Them down to Canterlot A modern desperado And she'll race for miles through the night She runs because she knows she cannot hide She's never gonna make it, all the Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma Is always gonna chase her for her lies It's just a game of waiting from the Church steeple down to Tartarus karma There's really no escape until she dies Outrunning karma, that filly Can't run no farther, it's the Last days of Sparta, follow Her down to meet Apollo And she'll brace for battle in the night She'll fight because she knows she cannot hide She's never gonna make it, all the Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma Is always gonna chase her for her lies It's just a game of waiting from the Church steeple down to Tarturas karma There's really no escape until she dies La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la La-la-la, la la, la la La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la La-la-la, la la, la la She's never gonna make it, all the Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma Is always gonna chase her for her lies It's just a game of waiting from the Church steeple down to Tarturas karmaThere's really no escape until she dies La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la La-la-la, la la, la la

Hey guys, I'd like to talk to you about one of the OCs from my Fanfiction I'm writing. His name is Almanzo Williams. Alamnzo lives in Appleloosa with his parents, two little sisters, his uncle, aunt, cousin, grandparents, and great grandmother. He also has another aunt, uncle, and cousin who doesn't live with them. Despite living in Appleloosa Almanzo and his family are not realted to the Apple Family in anyway. He first appears when Apple Bloom returns his great grandmother's golden necklece to him, and his family. They are so greatful, that they invite Apple Bloom, and Braeburn to have dinner at there place. Almazno and his family learn that Apple Bloom is from Ponyville, and is staying with Braeburn for a few days. Unfourtnely for Al Apple Bloom doesn't say a word at all. (This is due to an injury in which she tripped and slammed her throat on the side of a desk rendering her unable to speak) Braeburn explains why she's not talking making Almanzo feel better. As the days past, and the more Almanzo hangs out with Apple Bloom the more he falls in love with her. Eventually it's time for Apple Bloom to go back to Ponyville. However before she leaves Al gives her his great grandmother's necklace. Almanzo's great grandmother was dying, and was giving away many of her valubles, however she didn't know what to do with the necklace. The Aunt that doens't live with Alamzo is very cruel, and wants the necklace for herself. She claims to want to give it to her daughter, but she really wants to sell it and make money, and everyone knows that. So after much talking they eventually deciede to Give it to Apple Bloom as they know it will be safe with her. Throughout Seasons 3, 4, and 5 Apple Bloom and Almanzo write to each other constantly, and Apple Bloom begins to return Almanzo's feelings Almanzo and his parents, and sisters Move to Ponyville in Season 6 where he reunites with Apple Bloom, and hears her voice for the first time which he thinks sounds like an Angel. In Season 7 he along with Diamond Tiara are the main ones there for Apple Bloom during Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo's feud. When it's time for the Homecoming/Prom dance in Manehatten Almanzo and Apple Bloom are given the dance floor to themselve where they share a beautiful ball style dance. The two of them then offically become a couple. Now here's where we get to the question part. In the Season 8 episode Surf and/or Turf Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo become friends again. I am curious though if Apple Bloom did get a romantic partner could Sweeite Belle, and Scootaloo become jealous if Apple Bloom was hanging out more with her partner rather then them, and if yes would they be jealous enough to try and ruin her relationship or break them up? Even if Apple Bloom was Happy?

Why was this moved to cannon discussion I was writing to possible scenes for a Fanfiction and I needed help on which scene was better.

Once thing that kind of botherd me about 28 pranks later was just how willing the CMCs were with doing the prank. Especially Scootaloo who looks up to Rainbow Dash. So I decieded why not make a sceneiro where the CMCs are given a valid reason to take part in the prank. However I couldn't think of one, so I thought of too. Let me know which one is better. Scenerio one. After Pinkie Pie told everypony about what Rainbow Dash had done with the filly guide cookies as well as her plan to get Rainbow Dash back for all the pranks she had pulled during the week they all began to nod in agreement. “This is just perfect darling”. Said Rarity causing Pinkie Pie to smile. “Thanks, I figured this would be a good way to teach her a lesson about what it’s like to be on the receiving end of a mean prank.” She said as everypony began to snicker. However there were some ponies who weren’t too keen on the idea. “Hold on”. A voice called out. Everyone in the restaurant turned to stare at Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Silverspoon, Petunia Paleo, Toola Roola, and Coconut Cream. Apple Bloom being the one to speak. “What’s wrong”? Twilight asked. Apple Bloom gulped nervously but spoke up. “We think this is wrong”! She stated firmly confusing everyone. “What do you mean”? Asked Twilight. Now it was Scootaloo’s turn to speak. “It’s just that we know Rainbow Dash has been pulling some really mean pranks, but don’t you think that making her believe that she caused a plague is a bit too far, like I don’t get why you can’t try talking to her”. Applejack walked over, and bent down to the CMCs level with a small smile on her face. “We did try talking to her sugarcube, but she’s not willing to listen”. “We understand that you feel that this is wrong, but trust me darling this is the only way to open up Rainbow Dash’s eyes”. Rarity responded. The fillies however still looked unsure. So Reiner Spoke up. “You don’t have to take part in this prank, after you deliver the cookies you can go home, and wait til it’s over”. He said. The CMCs looked at each other, knowing they couldn’t stop the prank, and Rainbow Dash did need a lesson, they sighed and nodded. Later that day the fillies were playing a ball, they were laughing and giggling when Petunia spoke up. “I’ll still think this prank is wrong”. She stated as she threw the ball to Silverspoon. “Yeah, but what can we do, we are just fillies”. Silverspoon said before passing it to Coconut Cream. “Rainbow Dash’s pranks have been getting out of hand, so I kind of think she deserves this”. “I guess you have a point”. Diamond Tiara said as she tossed the ball to Toola Roola, who then tossed it to Apple Bloom. However it just landed at her hooves. “Hey Apple Bloom what do you think about all this”? Toola Roola asked,but Apple Bloom didn’t respond. “Apple Bloom”? Sweetie Belle called out, causing Apple Bloom to look up. “Huh”? The farm pony filly asked. “Toss the ball”. Sweetie Belle stated. “Oh”! Apple Bloom realized. “Sorry, she apologized and tossed the ball to Sweetie Belle, however it went over Sweetie Belle’s head and into some bushes. Apple Bloom blushed in embarrassment. “Heh heh, oops”. She said, with a nervous chuckle. “It’s alright, I’ll go get”. “AGGGGGHHHH!!!!!” Sweetie Belle was interrupted by a loud ear splitting scream. “What in Equestria was that”?! Asked Silverspoon. “I don’t know, but it sounds like somepony’s hurt”! Scootaloo stated. The fillies ran towards the source of the scream as quick as they could where they saw the pony who screamed. “OH MY GOD”! Sweetie Belle shrieked in horror. Their laying on the ground with blood pouring out was Rainbow Dash. She was laying on her back, with what looked like a large branch impaling her stomach. “Rainbow Dash, what happened”?! Scootaloo asked. Rainbow Dash had tears in her eyes. “I I was just napping, when this ball came out of nowhere. And caused me to fall, and this branch to impale me”. She told them. Apple Bloom felt herself get sweaty, as she noticed the ball she had tossed. Her vision started to blur, her breathing intensified and she let out a loud scream of anguish. “AHHHHHHH”! She cried as Sweetie Belle, and Diamond Tiara ran over to the now sobbing filly. “It’s my fault, it’s my fault, It’s my fault”! She cried. Sweetie Belle pulled Apple Bloom into a huge hug as the filly cried from sadness, and fear. “Shh, shh, shh it’s okay, it’s okay”. Sweetie Belle comforted you didn’t mean to do it”. She tried to calm Apple Bloom, but nothing was helping, as Apple Bloom could hardly speak due to how hard she was crying. Meanwhile Rainbow Dash herself was crying in pain. “Oh it hurts so bad”. She wailed. Scootaloo, Silverspoon, and Coconut Cream stayed with Rainbow Dash, while Petunia, and Toola Roola went to help comfort Apple Bloom who was now a blubbering crying mess her tears and snot covered Sweetie Belle’s chest, but she didn’t care. She hated seeing Apple Bloom like this. Back with Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Silverspoon, and Coconut Cream were trying to think of what to do. “Should we take it out”? Coconut cream asked, referring to the branch that was in Rainbow Dash’s stomach. “No”! Said Silverspoon. “If somepony is stabbed or impaled then you should try to remove said object from them”. She stated. “Then what do we do”?! Coconut Cream asked. Scootaloo gasped. “We have to get a grownup, they’ll know what to do”. She stated. The others nodded in agreement. “Petunia and I will go”. Said Toola Roola. The two of them began to run off when all of a sudden they heard laughter. The filles all turned to see Rainbow Dash getting up. She was laughing hysterically as she pulled the branch out revealing that it and the blood had been fake. “Gotcha”! She laughed as she flew over to a still crying Apple Bloom who looked up and the Rainbow haired pegasus with a look of extreme sadness. “Oh Apple Bloom, you should have seen the look on your face when you thought you killed me, Oh man priceless”. Rainbow Dash laughed. Apple Bloom sniffled. “Why”? “Hmm”? Rainbow Dash raised an Eyebrow. “Why would you do this to me”? Apple Bloom asked as tears streamed down her face. “Uh, duh, because pranking other ponies is funny”. Rainbow Dash stated. “Now if you’ll excuse me I have another prank to plan”. Rainbow Dash said as she flew away feeling triumphant. “Ugh I can’t believe her”. Said Diamond Tiara. “Yeah, that one was way too far, I mean she knows Apple Bloom has anxiety”! Sweetie Belle exclaimed angrily. Scootaloo meanwhile watched as Rainbow Dash flew away. Suddenly a wicked Smile appeared on her face. “Hey girls”. She said quietly, causing the others too look up at her. “How does that zombie prank sound now”? She asked Scenerio 2 The CMCs were walking across town discussing the prank. “I get why doing this is necessary, but I just Feel that this is wrong”. Sweetie Belle stated. “I agree, I know Rainbow Dash is going a bit far with her pranks, but don’t the others think this is a bit much. Scootaloo replied. “There’s nothing we can do except wait for it to be over, and maybe hopefully Rainbow Dash will learn a lesson”. Apple Bloom said. The CMCs kept on walking when all of a sudden Rainbow Dash landed in front of them. She had a strange look of panic on her face. “Apple Bloom, quick, it’s an emergency”! Rainbow Dash stated. Immediately a million different scenarios started to play in Apple Bloom’s mind. “What happened”? She asked nervously. “It’s Granny Smith she suddenly collapsed and is in the hospital, you need to go there now”! Rainbow Dash exclaimed! Apple Bloom gasped, and instantly ran towards the hospital with Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo following her. Apple Bloom of course had a feeling this might be a prank, but there was no way she was going to take that chance. The CMCs made to the hospital, and Apple Bloom rushed over to the desk. “Nurse Redheart”! She yelled, causing the nurse to look down at her. “Apple Bloom what’s wrong”? Ellie asked. “My Granny Smith did she come into today”? Apple Bloom asked. “No, why do you ask”? Ellie asked. Apple Bloom sighed in relief as she realized it had been a prank. “No reason, I just made a mistake, sorry for bothering you”. Apple Bloom apologized. Elie nodded as watched as the CMCs left the hospital. “What now”? Asked Scootaloo. “We head back to my house”. Apple Bloom stated. The CMCs did so, and as soon as they walked through the door, they saw Granny Smith was alive and well, as well as Big Mac, and Applejack. Apple Bloom went over and hugged Granny Smith who was taken aback by this. “What’s this now”? Granny Smith asked. “I’m just glad you’re okay”. Apple Bloom stated as she looked up at her grandmother. Granny Smith noticed that Apple Bloom’s eyes were red. “Apple Bloom dear, have you been crying”? She asked Hearing that caused Applejack, and Big Mac to walk over to. “Sugarcube what happened”? Asked Applejack. “Rainbow Dash pranked her by telling her that Granny Smith had collapsed and was in the hospital”. Scootaloo answered. This caused Applejack to get very angry. “Why that, I can’t believe she would do something like that to my little sister”. She grumbled. “Eeyup”. Growled Big Macintosh. Just then Apple Bloom spoke up. “Applejack, you said something about a zombie prank right”. She asked her elder sister. Applejack, seeing the look on Apple Bloom’s face, gulped. “Yes”. She said nervously. Apple Bloom only made that face when she was really ticked off. To describe it was kind of difficult. Basically Apple Bloom would become very calm. She would speak softly yet firmly, and her eyes would appear to stare into your soul. “How are we going about this”? Apple Bloom asked.

You guys remeber the fanfiction I've talked about before, and I've asked for advice on things I want to do for it before. Now I'm asking for more advice. You see the story is a rewrite of the entire series with some changes to it. One of those changes is putting Apple Bloom in episodes she wasn't in. Apple Bloom is one of my favorite characters in the series being my favortie crusader, and my third favorite character overall which is why I'm giving her a larger roll then what she had in the original series, and I did that by mainly putting her in episodes she wasn't in. Now I'd really appriecate it if anyone could go and look at the episodes I put her in, read them, analyis her roll in those episodes, and let me know which ones she works in, and which ones she doesn't really work in. Here is a link to the story. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/441495/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-with-reiner-and-bertholdt-season-1 And here are the episodes. The Ticket Master Applebuck Season Griffion the Brush off Boast Busters Look Before You Sleep Swarm of the Century Winter Wrap Up Fall Weather Friends Feeling Pinkie Keen Green isn't Your Color Over a Barrel Owl's well that ends well Party of One (Unfinished) If anyone could please tell me which episodes she works in and which ones she doesn't then that would be really nice.

Here is a scene from my fanfiction. It's a new scene from the Season 4 Episode Castle Mania. Lightning flashed lighting up the lower section of the abandoned castle as the CMCs thrudged onwards, Scootaloo leading the way, followed by Sweetie Belle, and a trembling Apple Bloom. They had been walking for a while, and it got to the point where Sweetie Belle had to speak up. “Scootaloo are you sure we’re going to find any ghost down here, I mean we’ve been walking for like fifteen minutes now, and we’ve seen nothing so far”. “M Maybe that’s a good thing”. Apple Bloom stated, her lips quivering, but Scootaloo was adamant that they continue on. “Don’t worry, a ghost will definitely show up eventually, and when one does we’ll catch, and get our ghost hunting cutie marks.” She exclaimed. “But why do we need ghost huntin cutie marks, can’t we get cutie marks in somethin less dangerous”? Apple Bloom asked. Scootaloo just laughed. “Come on Apple Bloom where’s your sense of fun”. “I don’t really think disturbing the dead is what you call fun”. Apple Bloom muttered as Scootaloo continued. “Well come on then, let’s go catch a ghost.” “And how do you know there are ghosts here”? Sweetie Belle asked. Scootaloo turned and smiled a sinister smile. “Because I heard the story”. Scootaloo stated. “What story”? Sweetie Belle questioned, one eyebrow raised in suspiscosion. “The story of the bandits who lost their lives down here.” Scootaloo replied. “Wh What happened”. Apple Bloom asked. “A long time ago a group of thieves came into this castle, and stole some valuable jewelry. However when they tried to escape, they ended up trapped down here in this maze. “Maze”? Apple Bloom repeated. Scootaloo nodded. “Yep. Legend has it that they all ended up going crazy from lack of food and water, until they eventually snapped, and ate each other”. Scootaloo stated. :Now they wander down in this area, just waiting for more ponies to feast on”. Just then the room became pitch black. Apple Bloom let out a shrill scream of terror and shut her eyes. Soon there was light again, and Apple Bloom opened her eyes again. But when she looked around Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo were gone.Beginning to panic, Apple Bloom frantically began to look around for the two filles. “Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo where are you, I don’t wanna be alone down here! Please come out”. She pleaded as tears streamed down her face. All of a sudden she heard a voice. “Fresh meat”. “Hello”. Apple Bloom called out. “Fresh meat, tasty filly flesh, Be. My. Victim”. Just then a ghastly creature emerged from the darkness. It looked like a pony, but It was missing part of its face, and its intestines were hanging out of its body. It also had gnarly sharp teeth that were pointed like a shark’s. “Fresh meat”. It snarled as Apple Bloom screamed at the top of her lungs, and ran in the opposite direction. “Sweetie Belle! Scootaloo! Where are you”! She cried as she continued to run, the creature following behind her still snarling “Fresh Meat”! No! Applejack Help Me! Apple Bloom cried out for her sister. Apple Bloom kept on running until she came to a dead end. She was trapped, nowhere to go, and the monster was right there. She trembled in fear, tears were streaming down her face. “No please! Applejack, Big Mac, Granny, Twilight, Anybody”! She cried. The monster kept closing in on Apple Bloom, she could feel it’s breath, as it said once more “Fresh. Meat”! Apple Bloom was terrified, and in her fear cried out once again. “DADDY!!!!!!!!” All of a sudden she heard laughing. Apple Bloom looked at the monster, as it took off its head to reveal Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle behind her. Apple Bloom could only stare in shock, confusion, and hurt, as Scootaloo spoke. “Sorry Apple Bloom, me and Sweetie wanted to test your bravery, and so decided to dress up as a monster to scare you. I must say you freaked out a lot harder than I thought you would, but hey now that you know it’s us I’m sure we can laugh about this, right?” Scootaloo said as Sweetie Belle nodded with a smile. They then turned to Apple Bloom, and expected to see her start laughing, and saying how they got her. However, Apple Bloom had a very angry look on her face, and tears were still falling. This confused both Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. “Apple Bloom? You okay”? Sweetie Belle asked. “Okay?! Okay?! Apple Bloom exclaimed. “That wasn’t funny! You two nearly gave me a heart attack, I thought something terrible had happened to both of you when that thing appeared”! Apple Bloom stated while sobbing. Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo just stared at her in shock. Seeing this, Apple Bloom turned around and started walking away. “Hey, where are you going”? Scootaloo asked. “We still need to get our ghost hunting cutie marks. “I never wanted a ghost huntin cutie mark! I never wanted to come here. I’m going home”! Apple Bloom stated. “But”. Scootaloo was about to call out, when Sweetie Belle put her hoof on Scootaloo’s shoulder. “I think we should leave her alone for a bit right now, she seems really upset. Plus what we did was kind of messed up”. Sweetie Belle stated. Scootaloo sighed. “Yeah, I guess you’re right, but now what do we do”? “We need to find some way to make it up to her”. Sweetie Belle replied.

Okay. So this is another question about the fanfiction I'm writing. However instead of this being a scene I'm thinking about doing, it's about something I already did. So in my rewrite of Over a Barrel I had Apple Bloom break her leg after being knocked of the train by the bufflo. So in the recent chapters I've written Apple Bloom has been using crutches due to her injury. So in the next chapter, and orignal episode titled Distress, Twilight decieds to take everyone on a hiking trip including Apple Bloom. Due to her injury Apple Bloom needs extra help. This causes Rainbow Dash to start complaining about all the stops they have to make, and how they have to go the longer route instead of the shorter one. It gets to the point where Rainbow Dash yells at Apple Bloom and makes her cry. So my question is would Season 1 Rainbow Dash do something like this? I should mention that Rainbow Dash doesn't yell at Apple Bloom because of her injury Rainbow Dash yells at her because Apple Bloom accidentally looses the map the group was using to get to their final destination. Twilight ask Apple Bloom to hold it when they come to fork in the path and she goes to see which path is more suitable for Apple Bloom. As Apple Bloom is holding a map a bird flies out of nowhere and startles her, causing her to drop the map into a river and it gets swept away.

Okay so I've talked about this whole Crusader falling out/feud arc in the fanfic I'm working. I've haved trouble on figuring out a reason for their falling out though. Orignially I was set on the idea, that Sweetie Belle would have an anniversary hangout with Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo, but Scootaloo doesn't show up due to her cousin who she hadn't seen in a long time. That was my plan for a while, but now I think I thought of a different reason for their falling out. Okay so here's the new idea. Ponyville Junior High (Ponyville Schoolhouse in this AU Fanfiction) Has a special event happening in Manehatten. (Think of it like a Prom, or Homecoming Dance) And Miss Cheerliee puts Apple Bloom in charge of planning the event. So everything is up to her. Of course Apple Bloom can't really think of anything so she goes to Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo to give her some advice. Unfourtently however Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo can't agree on what to do, and so they get into a huge argument. So then there would be a series of moments where Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo would each try to get Apple Bloom to go along with their differeing ideas. In the end Apple Bloom will come up with her own plan, that makes everyone happy. Well accept Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Now I know your going to say Apple Bloom should just combind both their ideas into one to make them both happy, but that's not the route I want to go. It's too predictable. So I plan to go the bittersweet route. Where Apple Bloom gets to finally do what she wants to do for once, put in the process possbily loose her two best friends. (At least temporarily) Now I just have some questions. The only thing I can't think of are what the ideas should be. So if anyone has suggestions then. What should Sweetie Belle's idea be? What should Scootaloo's idea be? and What should Apple Bloom's idea be? Also should I go with this version or should I stick with my orignal plan of Scootaloo not coming to a thing Sweeite Belle planned because of her cousin?

Here's Spike's apology to Apple Bloom The next moring Spike was walking across town again when he spotted Apple Bloom with Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. Seeing the three filles Spike walked up to them. When they saw him Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo glared at him, it was clear Apple Bloom had told them what he had said, and they weren't too happy with him. Spike sighed. "Hi Apple Bloom, can I, uh talk to you"? Spike asked. "I don't know, can you"? Scootaloo responded coldly, a reaction Spike was expecting, but Apple Bloom put her hoof up. "Scootaloo let him speak". Apple Bloom stated. Scootaloo nodded her head in understanding as she and Sweetie Belle left. Apple Bloom looked at Spike, and smiled. "Hi Spike, what do you need"? She asked as the sun sparkled down on her. "Goddess". Spike said intetrnaly before looking striaght at Apple Bloom. "Listen, I just wanted to say I'm really sorry for what I said to you yesterday, I was angry, and wasn't thinking striaght. "You were right I let my jealousy get the best of me, and I took my anger out the ponies who care about me most. I just really hope you can forgive me". Spike said praticaly begging. Apple Bloom smiled, grabbed her crutches, limped over to Spike, and gave him a big hug. "I forgive you Spike". She stated as Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo joined in the hug as well.

Well here's an aftermath with Apple Bloom talking to Twilight after Spike runs away. "Spike! I don't know what upsets me more—that you deliberately tried to set up Owlowiscious, or that you actually thought this pathetic attempt would work! You've let your jealousy get the best of you, Spike. I am truly disappointed. This is not the Spike I know and love." She scolded befoe walking out of the house with Owlowiscious. Tears filled Spike's eyes. "She... She doesn't love me anymore." He whimpered. Later that day Twilight, and Owlowiscious returned to the libabry. "Spike we need to talk". Twilight called out. However she got no response. "Spike? Where are you"? Twilight asked as she searched the house. "Where could that dragon be"? Twilight wondered She then went up to his room where she saw all of his stuff was gone. That was when she realized what had happened. "Oh no, Spike must have run away. He really thinks I want to replace him! I need to find him"! Twilight declared as she ran out of the libabry. "I'll see if Applejack has seen him". She said as she ran off to Sweet Apple Acres. Arrving at Applejack's house Twilight was about to knock on the door when she heard what sounded like singing. She followed the voice to an area she had never scene before. It was like a magical enchanted forest. Their was a small lake, blue and violet flowers everywhere, and the way the trees blocked the sun made it seem like it was nighttime instead of day. Twilight looked around, and spotted Apple Bloom. She was standing the best she could with her leg. It was when Twilight relaized that she was the one singing. Once Apple Bloom was finished, she turned and found Twilight standing there. She gasped in shock. "Miss Twilight, what are you doing here"? She asked. "Well I came to find your sister, but then I heard you're voice, which first of all that was amazing, but secondly what is this place?" She asked. "This is my sercet area I come too when I want to be alone. Nopony knows about it, not even Applejack or Big Mac, or Granny Smith". Apple Bloom stated. Twilight gave Apple Bloom a knowing nod. "I won't tell anyone about this, not even Applejack". Twilight said firmly. Apple Bloom smiled knowing she could trust Twilight. "Now can you help me"? Twilight asked. Apple Bloom nodded. "Sure, what's wrong". "Have you scene Spike"? Twilight asked. Apple Bloom turned away. "I did a few hours ago, he had stolen a toy mouse, and was planning to use it to frame Owlowscious". Apple Bloom told Twilight. Twilight sighed. "Yeah, I caught him in the act, before he could finish." Apple Bloom looked up at Twilight. "I'm sorry, I tried to stop him, but he yelled at me". Apple Bloom told Twilight what Spike had said to her. Twilight was shocked and gave Apple Bloom a soft hug. "I'm so sorry he said that you." Twilight stated. "It's okay, I'm sure he was just upset, I mean he still thinks you want to replace him". Apple Bloom stated. Twilight sighed. "I know, he ran away, and I'm really worried about him". Apple Bloom gasped in shock. "Oh no! I'm sorry I didn't see him after he yelled at me, but I hope you find him. He's such a little dragon, and it would be awful if something happened to him". Apple Bloom stated with worry in her voice. "I know, which is why I have to find him, but I don't know where to look". Twilight replied. Apple Bloom thought for a few moments. "Try the Everfree Forest". Apple Bloom said. "You're right! Thanks Apple Bloom"! Twilight stated as she set off to find Spike. "Twilight"! Apple Bloom called out. "Yeah Apple Bloom"! Twilight asked. "Make sure you tell Spike I forgive him"! Apple Bloom said. "I will"! Twilight repled.

"Come along, Opal. Let's hurry up and get to Fluttershy's tea party." She said. Once they were gone Spike snuck up to the windows. He had to make sure Sweetie Belle wasn't there either, Once he looked through all the windows, and saw that the cost was infact clear he snuck in. Once inside Spike looked around until he found exactlay what he was looking for, a mouse toy. Spike went up and grabbed in grinning devilshly. "So lifelike. And when Twilight discovers it shredded up on her floor, she'll think mouse-eating Owlowiscious is to blame. And I'll be number one... again! Muhahaha!" He laughed and left the Boutique. However once he was outside he was spotted by Apple Bloom who was giving him a confused look. "Spike, what are you doing with Opal's toy mouse"? She asked. "Oh uh, Sweetie Belle let me borrow it for something I'm doing". Spike tried to lie, but Apple Bloom saw right through it. "Sweetie Belle is with her parents today, and I know Rarity didn't let you borrow it since I saw her heading to Fluttershy's a few momments ago." She informed him. Spike sighed. "Well if you must now, I'm going to set up that damn bird, and make Twilight think he killed a real mouse, and then she'll get rid of him once and for all!" He exclaimed. He then looked up at Apple Bloom who had a horrified look on her face. "That's wrong! You can't do that to Owlowiscious he's Twilight's pet, and she loves him"! Apple Bloom exclaimed "Exactaly! She loves, him, and not me. She's trying to replace me, and I refuse to let that happen"! Spike snapped. "SPIKE"! Apple Bloom screamed causing him to look up. "That's not true! None of what you are saying is true, Twilight will never replace you! You are letting your jealousy get the better of you, and it's making you think irrationally"! Apple Bloom argued. "You don't know anything". Spike said under his breath. "W what"? Apple Bloom asked confused. "YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT'S IT'S LIKE! YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IT'S LIKE TO BE REPLACED, OR BE UNLOVED"! Spike shouted. "Spike please stop. You're scaring me". Apple Bloom pleaded eyes filling with tears. "AND YOU KNOW WHY YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING, BECAUSE YOU. DON'T. HAVE. PARENTS"! Spike yelled. He stood there for a few moments when all of sudden he felt a sharp pain strike him in the side of the cheak. He fell to the ground hard. He looked up and saw Apple Bloom staring at him angrily with tears streaming down her face. Spike then realized she had just slapped him as he held his cheak. "HOW DARE YOU"! Apple Bloom screamed. "YOU HAD NO RIGHT TO BRING UP MY PARENTS, ALL I TRIED TO DO WAS HELP YOU REALIZE THE MISTAKE YOU'RE MAKING, AND YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT"! Apple Bloom shouted before she coloapsed to the ground, and began sobbing. Spike looked around, there were quite a few witness. Some glared at Spike, while others went to comfort Apple Bloom who was still crying. Spike groaned, got up, and walked away. "Whatever, I have an owl to frame". He muttered to himself.