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I'm the S to the H, A N K, I don't go by my full username cuz im awesome like that, I'm ShankliciousNINJAS... Why did I wait so long to post it? XD
I'm the D to O C, T O R, and you all do know I'm the true pony doctor, I'm Fizzlelicious
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Either way, the intro must include Derpy still.
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Hello all! I started writing a story yesterday, planned to be a romace/action/dark/tragedy.
The first chapter doesn't capture all the elements in one, but future chapters will.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1 - Nightmare’s Beginning
Nightmare Punch arose from his sleep. He should’ve been shocked, but he was used to this thing by now.
“Ugh. Stupid nightmares...” He sighed.
Nightmare got out of his bed and walked downstairs. He saw his parents making breakfast and then, in all of a sudden, they disappeared. Nightmare just stood in complete understanding of what happened.
“Memories... Why must you project yourself to me?” He asked himself.
He continued to walk towards the cupboards.
“Swirly Sun! Are you there?” Nightmare shouted behind him.
“Yeah! Coming in a minute, don’t worry!” Swirly Sun replied.
Nightmare looked around to see if she was entering the room but she was not.
“What do you want for breakfast, Swirly?” Nightmare asked, his hunger growing.
“Umm.. the normal, if you wouldn’t mind, please?” she said, as she finally begun to enter the room.
“Which normal? You have so many ‘normal’s” Nightmare laughed.
“Cereal - Apple Jacks to be exact, silly.” she replied.
Nightmare went on to prepare both breakfasts. He couldn’t reach the cereal and the thought then just occurred to him that he was a unicorn. He then got the milk out, along with the bowls and finally prepared everything. After making the cereal he placed all the things back and took the bowls to the table.
“Morning, by the way.” Nightmare delightfully said to Swirly as he gave her a kiss. Nightmare then sat down and began eating his cereal. Swirly looked at Nightmare and became concerned very quickly.
“Are you alright, Nightmare? You seem to be unwell..” Swirly asked, very concerned.
Nightmare looked up. He hesitated to speak. But finally came out with the words
“Ye-yeah... Well, no. I keep seeing these.. these memories. I walked down here today to see my parents cooking, but.. they couldn’t have been. Because of them.. well, you know.. dying. I keep seeing my past. It is haunting me. I am getting more frustrated every day.” Nightmare said, confessing to it all.
“Oh, wow. Do you have any ideas on why these are happening?” Swirly questioned.
“....”
“Um... are you alri-”
“Nightmares. It’s the nightmares. It’s my life. It’s... It’s... impossible."
“What’re you talking about, Nightmare? I am beginning to worry.”
“Do not. It is of something I will get to the bottom of. Don’t worry about me, I’ll be fine.”
“OR WILL YOU!?” A random voice suddenly screamed from inside of Nightmare’s head.
“What the? Agh! My head! What is going on!?” Nightmare screamed in confusion.
The world around him twisted and turned. Swirly disappeared from the room completely. Nightmare got up and tried to walk outside. He felt dizzy from all the twisting and turning. He ran outside to find nopony was around in his town of Burmareda. He began to fill up with rage and screamed in anger “Who are you!? What are you?! Turn everything back to normal!!”.
“Hehehe. You believe I control this? I, Ark? I may be evil. I may have entered your mind. But I do not control this. You do, my friend. I leave you to your.. solitude. Unless you feel to make it.. different.” The mystery voice, revealed to be a pony named Ark, finally said.
“What.. how.. I couldn’t control this. This is evil.. this is... no.. Swirly!? Serah!? Blake?! Anypony? …please.. help..”
Nightmare then just stopped. He fell to the ground. He hoped. Hope being his last resort. He hoped that by chance a pony would come by and help him out. To understand this. And in all of a sudden, the town repopulated with all the ponies. Nightmare looked up from the ground to see ponies walking by, apparently oblivious to his existence. Nightmare got up and walked into his house. Swirly was back in the house. But something was odd. Nightmare’s bowl had disappeared. “Swirly...?” Nightmare tried to call out to Swirly but she did not reply to his voice. “Swirly! Swirly!!” Nightmare screamed. She didn’t respond at all. He continued to scream, but his scream then slowly turned into crying. “Why is this happening to me!?” Nightmare shouted through his tears “The ponies are back! But why have I been dragged out of existence!? What is going on!? Help! Me!” Nightmare screamed before crawling into a ball.
“Hehehe... you wanted no more solitude. You got it, didn’t you?” Ark taunted.
Nightmare stopped everything. He got out of his ball position and stood back up.
“You! This is your fault! Why do you feel you have the superiority to rule over me!? Well!? Well!?!” Nightmare screamed, his rage increasing by the second.
“Oh, don’t you see? I have told you once, must I tell you again?”
“I can’t possibly control this! It isn’t possible!”
“Look around you now.” Ark instructed.
Nightmare stopped looking upwards and begun to notice that the house he was in had lost all its floors and its roof. The whole house was badly damaged. He then looked around him to notice that the whole town had been destroyed. It was the apocalypse. Zombie ponies roamed the street. They all begun to notice Nightmare and ran towards him.
“I guess you definitely have no more solitude now, hehehe. Hahaha! Hahaha!” Ark laughed maniacally.
“Oh my Celestia! Help me! Don’t attack me! Stop! Now!!” Nightmare shouted in pure fright.
As he said those words the zombie ponies stopped in their position, as if they were frozen.
“Heh. You see, Nightmare. This is all controlled by you. You’re the master of this world, I guess would be the correct term.”
Nightmare then began to think things to himself, seeing if they would project. He thought of a world with only him and Swirly Sun. The world then started to melt, revealing a world with Swirly awaiting Nightmare’s visit. Nightmare walked towards Swirly but something seemed wrong. She did nothing.
“Oh, woops. I guess I forgot to mention one thing. You’re not the only one with control here. I am too. Hehehe.” Ark said as Swirly turned into flat cardboard and fell over. “My turn.”
The world Nightmare was in once again melted to reveal a land of horror. Dead ponies were strewn everywhere. Blood was splattered over all the streets and the houses. Ponies’ guts were hammered onto the walls spelling many words. “Do you like horror films, Nightmare?” Ark asked, rhetorically. Ark began to project horrors that were unspeakable right in front of Nightmare. Nightmare couldn’t resist. He was forced to stay and stare at everything shown.
Nightmare Punch woke up and shot up. He then came to realisation of what happened and lazily got out of his bed.
“Ugh. Stupid nightmares...” He sighed.
Do you like it? Please leave some feedback in the comments. Thanks!
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None of you knew Deadmau5 was a brony before this? I knew this.. a while ago.
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I'll keep all of this in mind, thanks.It's quite nice, but like Krystal said, it's repetitive, not that it's a bad thing, but it was used in a messy structure and a mediocre worded poem, when thinking quality.
It shows nice emotions, but I recommend trying to use a certain structure for your writing, especially when using such a repetive technique. The emotions are very sudden, they are shown straight out, but again, this should compliment a structure that you seem to lack. Powerful emotions without a build-up is hard to work with, and without a complimenting structure or technique, impossible to pull off in success.
It's a nice piece and some interesting thoughts, keep up the work and make sure to experiment and think a lot about your works.
This will help me out in later poem attempts.
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That was... extremely repetitive.
And the grammar could use a little work.
And if you are going to have an anger attack within the poem, build up to it.
It's like going to a surprise party and the surprise happens in your car.
Build up to it!
Other then that, I enjoyed it!
It wasn't really supposed to be an anger attack. It was more of a point.
I forgot I used the caps lock at the time as well. I normally do that when I'm making a line.
Forgot to undo that bit, I guess.
I wanted repetition to be there, as well. I was fully aware of it.
And looking at it, I realise my grammar mistakes (will be rectified now).
But, thanks for the advice.
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She, the one whom I loved.
She, the one whom I loved.
I, the one whom she loved.
We, the couple of perfection.
We, the couple with a connection.
We, the ones who should've stayed together.
We, the ones who were ripped apart.
Evil, peril, DEATH.
Death, hatred.. her.
She, the one whom I loved.
I, the one whom she loved.
She, the one who didn't deserve it.
She, the one who didn't want it.
She, the one who was in happiness.
She, the one who was in pure love.
Love, couples, HAPPINESS.
Happiness, joy.. us.
She, the one whom I loved.
I, the one whom she loved.
Us, the couple who shouldn't have split.
Us, the couple with a love thought to have been forever.
Me and her.
She and I.
The couple.
The happiness.
Where did it go?
Why did it end?
When was this foretold to happen?
Who planned all of this?
How comes this must've happened?
Where, why, when, who, how?
The unanswerable questions of us.
Me and her.
She and I.
By: Derpy.H
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Ok, thanks all. I'll keep these. Thank you!
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I am wondering. Will you be making a Derpy one? :3
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Okay, so I am just making myself a little comic featuring Derpy Hooves and ONE OC.
I want one of your OCs to be in this!
A few rules I want to make.
NO ALICORNS
NO PEGASI (Im not great at drawing pegasi.. so.. it's hard enough having Derpy!)
PONIES ONLY (So, earth pony or unicorn)
Basically, First come First Served.
The person who gets their OC in this comic will be informed of the comic's creation.
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Oh. That kinda sucks, then. Shame. Thanks, anyway!Well. I don't have ANY idea how. But when I said that. I was serious. It's a "kerrrrrshkkkkeeeeeee(BANSHEE)uuuuullllllkrreeeee". It's like a dial-up modem. But I'm pretty sure you can remotely understand the dial up modem is telling you to put it out of it's misery.
First clip in! This is good, thank you "Parties like Pinkie"
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Okay, you will receive the questions shortly.Voice.
I said to isobel: "That's good. I'll add you to the list. Im just checking over all my questions and they will be sent to you, pronto! Also, quickly. Are you planning to do VIDEO or VOICE?"I don't.
Unless I misunderstood.
Are you saying "I'll send you the questions if you don't mind?"
I just need you to answer that for me.
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Okay, just before I send you the questions - are you using VIDEO or VOICE?Participating. But if you do ever need help on anything else, I'll be there for it.
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That's good. I'll add you to the list. Im just checking over all my questions and they will be sent to you, pronto! Also, quickly. Are you planning to do VIDEO or VOICE?Awesome
I'm definitely in!
Quick question: When you say "help", do you mean by participating or something else?Ok. Tell me what to do, and I'll do it when I've got the time to spare.
Same thing as I said to isobelthegreat. If you wouldn't mind.Can I have a PM of the questions so I can start?
I love documentaries!!!
Could you send me a quick clip so I can see what it sounds like, if you wouldn't mind.I have a mic, but I'm not so sure you'd like that sound quality. It's like someone dropped the bass down a well and had beaten it with a dead Skrillex that was beaten by a dead fish, that was beaten by a record.
It's bad.
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Sure, if you don't mind.Yeah, I can help, it might take some time though so... Yeah. Tell me if you want my help.
Hmm... I guess I could add some more questions fitted to pegasisters. So.. sure, I guess.I'd like to do it, but I'm a girl. I know you want guys, but would you mind if there's a pegasister in your documentary?
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Gee, I kinda want to do this now! I'd just need to find my headset, what sort of questions would be asked?
If you would like, I can send you a pm of some of the questions!
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I could very easily be convinced to help with this.
Well, that's good. I can use all the people I can get!
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Bronies - A Documentary
Planning
Hello everyone! I am posting this topic as I need people to help me with a documentary I am creating.
This involves both males and females.
What will happen is that I will give you a set of questions that relate to bronies and what bronies do, and normal questions as well.
Example #1: Who's your favourite pony?
Example #2: Does your family know you watch My Little Pony?Back to the point, if you are willing to participate I have some criteria. Here's a list of what you need.
1) A microphone
2) (Optional - Depends on whether doing video or not) Webcam or any video recording device.Now, for number 2. As it said, it is optional. This is where the main part of this documentary comes in.
You can choose your method - Video or just voice.You can choose. But, I prefer that you do video if you have the availability to do so.
This documentary will take people through what many men see in the show, what they think of it and etc.
PARTICIPANTS
Parties like Pinkie - Voice - Voice provided
isobelthegreat - Video - Video not provided yet.
Swordfishtrombone - Voice - Voice not provided yet.
P.S. This isn't for a school project but will be used if needed at some point.
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Thank you! I plan to! (Currently trying to get a Tablet :3)Nice drawings! keep practicing and keep up the good work!
New Note: I have released a new drawing!
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Hey all! I have done some drawings recently of some random stuff. I hope you like it all!
Drawing #1
This is the Ghost-Type evolution of Eevee I made.
http://oi48.tinypic.com/1yjrqo.jpg
It is named "Souleon".
Here is the info of Souleon.
Eye closed: Souleon is unable to open both eyes as it will die if it opens both of them due to the Souleon being unable to handle seeing the ghost-world fully.
Faces in the fur: The Souleon contains its emotions in its ghostly fur and some appear at the top of it's fur.
Mouth: It is said that if the Souleon opens it mouth it will suck the spirit out of the opposing pokemon.
The triangle at the bottom of its fur: The triangle part of its fur contains its full soul and if the triangle gets too damaged it releases the soul of Souleon and Souleon dies.
Drawing #2
This is the evolution of Spiritomb I made.
http://oi47.tinypic.com/zt9dp4.jpg
It is named "Spiritrap"
Here is the info of Spiritrap.
Spiritrap is the evolved form of Spiritomb. Much like Diglett, Spiritomb gains 2 more entities after evolving. Spiritrap's two extra entities unlocks Spiritrap's full potential and turns it into a Pure Ghost-Type Pokemon. (Still working on more info to add)
Drawing #3
This is a Ghost-Type Pokemon - a Ditto-based one I made.
http://oi46.tinypic.com/6eoh05.jpg
It is named "Spiritto".
Here is the info of Spiritto.
Spiritto is the ghost form of Ditto. After death, the Ditto turns into a Spiritto. Spiritto has the urge to steal souls from any living thing it can get the soul from. Its eyes are said to contain its victim's souls.
Drawing #4
This is a Ghost/Dark Type Pokemon someone from the PokeCommunity came up with.
http://oi45.tinypic.com/315xutf.jpg
It is named "Umbriel". The design isn't exactly the same to the original creator's version. I just wanted to draw it and add a bit more to it.
Here is the info of Umbriel.
Umbriels' body is made up of a dark gaseous substance. This gas would immediately dissipate if not for the bandages and the skull that it keeps wrapped around it's body. It is usually seen stealing from trainers in dark caves and ruins.
Drawing #5
Finally, not a pokemon!
http://oi49.tinypic.com/2cf5n9l.jpg
My drawing of the "Awwwwwwwwww yeeeaahhhhhhhhhhhhh" meme.
Drawing #6
One last pokemon :3.
http://tinypic.com/v...pic=14ak8p1&s=6
It is named "Humaunter"
Info for Humaunter.
It is said over hundreds of years ago, old generations of Haunters had more anger than the current Haunters. It is believed that if the Haunters believed it was being neglected it would consume it's trainer's living essence and merge itself with him so he could be with his trainer forever.
Drawing #7
Drawing #8
I hope you liked all of these! Please leave some feedback on this stuff, if you wouldn't mind! More things will be coming into existence here later, too!
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Portal Power - 1 1/2 Hours of Portal 1
in Media Discussion
Hey, guys. I recently (by recently I mean today) made a video. It's of a classic video game. Portal. Because Portal is awesome.
http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAK8g-qvvM0
Enjoy!
Hoping you like it!
Please subscribe to keep an eye out for my future videos!
I am keeping my facebook updated so check out any updates there: http://www.facebook....116239515183869
May also open up a twitter soon as well. I do have one already but... I am not using it currently.