Phantom Nightmare

Brutal walked up to Hank, her green eyes flashing. "What's going on here?" She asked the group at large, becoming slightly by the fact that her polite greeting had gone ignored. Brutal found it hard to ever be polite, and when her efforts went ignored she certainly wasn't in the mood to continue being polite. She looked at each pony with her harsh, dead eyes, waiting for a response. She looked at the blue and rainbow pegasus, then at the creatures that seemed to split from the odd looking stallion

Brutal Legend finaly found the group of ponies, gathered around a rather strange looking stallion. She landed, folding her wings against her back and approaching the others. "Hello" She greeted the others, eyeing the two females who seemed to be with the stallion. She didn't know if this was the source of the commotion, but it was certainly an interesting group

Brutal Legend walked into Ponyville, her guitar strapped to her back and the rest of the band surrounding her. Brutal was the brightest pony there, having a blood red coat and a black and purple mane. The others, all male, were shades of blue, grey, and black, and very large in size Brutal was absolutely. They got quite a few strange and frightened looks from passing ponies, but none of them acknowledged the glances, but kept their eyes forward with a warning glare. Brutal Legend was leading the way to the home they would be occupying while staying in ponyville, and it seemed that there was already alot of energy surrounding a new flight school. Brutal paused, watching the sky as the her band mates made sure all furniture was to their liking for their new home. Opening her wings, Brutal called back to her band, telling them she would be back soon

that is fine, I think I will use Brutal Legend for this then, I have been wanting to try her out as a character, stretch her wings and all that, and she is not a villain, she is a good pony.

May I join? http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brutal-legend-r1571 If I may I'd like to join with two characters, if not that's fine I shall just go with the first http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/phantom-nightmare-r1117 I hope my characters are adequat.

Its hard yes, but its a great writing tool! It is helpful to experiment! Here is mine http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brutal-legend-r1571 Yes I named her after the game XD I think we should all just start in Ponyville or something like that

There was once a land, long long ago in the forgotten ages, where Rock and Metal ruled. It was a place where beast and demons roamed the land, living off the music of their titans. The ponies who played music had great powers, their instruments brought lightning and fire, no matter their race. The tales of this place have been lost to Equestria for eons. The music has grown softer, and lost its great powers. However, it seems a great rift is opening, allowing the present and the past to collide. A group of unfortunate ponies seem to have been sucked into the past without any explanation. Now they must battle the forces there and find a way to make it back to their own time. But it won't be so easy. Demons have slowly started taking over the earth, stretching out the claws to claim whatever they can. The small clan of ponies native to that time still fight to keep the land safe, but they will need the help of those in the future to succeed in their quest. Master the ancient music of rock and metal. Charge into war against the demons sinking their teeth into the land. Maybe once the peace and music has been returned it will be easier to find a way home... __________________________________________________________________________________ Pretty much, you are a pony who has been sucked back in time to an alternate universe where the land is forged from the power of metal. This is still in the planning stage to see what you think should be added and changed. A few rules, however NO MORE THEN 2 ALICORNS~ I am being generous here, because I don't like Alicorn oc's Please, be serious when roleplaying.I don't mind being silly in oc, but don't just fool around. Also be mature, PLEASE and thats it really!

Thanks, but I'm not interested in other's opinions, Phantom Nightmare is based off of Halloween themes and Freddy Krueger. She is an incarnation of things I love, so I am not interested in changing her due to a color wheel. also may I remind you there are ponies of one solid color and colors that clash. Thanks for the tip, but no thanks

Ah, I think I will join http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/phantom-nightmare-r1117 I apologize, that is not the best picture of her, but there she is. Just a humble pegasus with a bunch of owls. And I dont think your character is a Mary-Sue Half Note. I have seen a few Mary Sues in my day, but your character seems alright.

I actually did die my hair to resemble rainbow dash's mane recently It actually looks like her mane too, other then just rainbow hair

um, thanks for commenting Ronaan, but I need help with my own, I don't need to know about yours. No offense, but I don't care. Thank you, and next time you post, make it relevant.

Well thank you all, I will send the first chapter to those who asked for it, but I have no use for a cross over allanon, and what does the green lantern have to do with MLP?

Thank you! That is very much appreciated! I have sent you a message with more elaborate details of the story as a whole

Hello all! a very small amount of you might have seen that I am writing a fanfiction on here! It as quite literally just begun and the first chapter is rather short. But! I have big ideas for this, but I simply cannot do it alone! I need people to bounce ideas off of! I hope this isn't not allowed... I made a discussion topic, and learned that that is not allowed, but I need the help and I am very short of brony friends to bounce ideas off of in the forums. Again I don't mean to break any rules, but this isn't supposed to be a discussion topic, but a helpful one for the writing process. Which means all critiques and comments for what is currently happening go on the actually story thread. This is for planning and advice. Alright, so basically, without ruining the whole thing, which might have to happen if I am to get opinions, is that Something odd is occuring in Ponyville and all the various Doctor Who ponies will be brought together, along With my OC Phantom Nightmare. Now what I want to say first off is that I have an idea I am still quite iffy about. It is simply this; My character is a lost Princess, the Princess of Nightmares and Fear, who, through events that have yet to be determined, has been reduced to a pegasus and lost her memory. near the end she would turn into her old form to battle the main protaginist who is an Alicorn prince, (Someone tell me how to do the spoiler thing and I will post who he is and about him that way as to not ruin it even more) Now Phantom Nightmare as my character is not and never as been or will be an Alicorn, but I thought it was an intrigueing idea for a story, especially once I start refining it and making it sound less crappy. Please help and give me adviiicccce! I need it! I will ask more later, I think this is a good start.

Oh I am very sorry for your loss, I have never worked that hard as of yet any of my pokemon, but Crixus was over level 80 and before I could really get invested in the game, all of my pokemon games got stolen, but losing that Koffing sounds painful even to me.

At the moment I am heading to the elite four, trying to train up my little Dratini. Have any of you ever lost a pokemon that you miss? I miss my Scyther, Crixus, and my Typhlosion, Tyson.

(Alright! Thats fine! I understand I just was not aware entirely if it were against the rules or not, thank you for letting me know! It will not be repeated)