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Plum Pudding


AmberDust
  • , No, Not Cast Mane 6 age

    Plum is a dark brown earth pony with a curly purple mane and tail. Her eyes are brilliant green.

    female Earth Pony A sugar plum. She got her cutie mark when she discovered her talent for baking and making candy. (In particular, sugar plums.)
    There's not much of a story behind it--but she didn't notice her mark until AFTER she cleaned herself up. Her friend StromJumper was the one to point it out.
    As a pony who was often conflicted with identity crises, Plum was so happy to have discovered her mark, she started crying.

    Plum Pudding is sweet and generous, giving more than she takes. She's modest and a little shy (or at least her silence makes her seem that way), but she likes social gatherings--as long as she's not the centre of attention. She doesn't talk much, but would rather listen and contribute through nods and other such things--to accomplish this, she's developed a sort of tactfulness to shift conversation away from herself.
    Plum tries to be optimistic, but its hard for her sometimes, and retaining her happy attitude in times of pain is a burden she often struggles to bear.
    Plum is soft-hearted and friendly, cautious, and a hard worker. Although she appreciates help, she's more likely to have already finished the job by the time somepony offers.
    She's somewhat of a romantic--Only somewhat--and often daydreams of fantasy and magic while she goes about her day.

     

    When she was young, she was easily depressed and very sensitive, believing that, as an Earth pony, she was unspecial. (See backstory) Bullies helped imprint that thought into her mind, despite her friends' best attempts to drive it out. She knows better now.
    Plum is rather sentimental and nostalgic, despite her sub-stellar childhood. Something about her makes her friends want to protect her from whatever harm comes her way--maybe it's because she's so cute. Maybe it's because she doesn't like standing up for herself. Maybe its because she's suffered enough already. She very much appreciates her friends.

    Likes: Bullies, rudeness, loud ponies, fighting, crowds, being alone, hot weather.

    Plum Pudding grew up in an orphanage alongside her best friend, StormJumper. The Northern village they lived in was cold and mainly inhabited by Unicorns, and because of this, Earth Pony orphans tended to stay for longer in the orphanage. (This is partly why Plum had such low self-esteem.) She doesn't know much about her birth parents, and never really asked questions about them.
    Before she met StormJumper, Plum was all alone. Because of her shy and non-confrontational demeanour, she was often a target for bullies. (StormJumper was also targeted, but she was much more hostile--towards everypony. After realizing that other ponies besides herself were being bullied, she had a change of heart and stood up for Plum. They became fast friends after that.)
    Besides StormJumper, her closest friend was a unicorn by the name of Amber Dust, who wasn't an orphan, but visited them frequently and went to school with them. Amber had a way of cheering them up whenever they were sad or lonely, and always made Plum feel more hopeful for the future. This cane from Amber's talent for telling stories of fantasy and adventure and all the great, wonderful things they'd do in the future, which Plum looked forward to every time she visited.
    Plum and Storm spent most of their free time with Amber, who seemed like an expert on making them happy and excited about life, especially in times of struggle.

     

    Among her friends, Plum Pudding gave more than she could afford to. She really loved her friends, and in the beginnong she had a bit of a fear of losing them or of not being "good enough" for them.

     

    After Plum was out of the orphanage's care and living with her new Earth Pony family, (most of whom were either builders or farmers, from South of where she grew up,) she began getting herself accustomed to the kitchen, learning to bake treats of all kinds for her friends and family. Eventually, much to Plum's dismay, her family moved back to the south, away from Amber and Storm, as their success as farmers was very limited in the cold northern climate. It took Plum's adoptive older brother, Apricot, (the biological son of Plum's adoptive parents,) a little while to get used to Plum, but he became very attached to her as time wore on, and was very kind and supportive of her as she grew up. He was definitely the defensive type, taking StormJumper's place as Plum's new guardian angel. He was also the taste-tester for most of Plum's confectionary creations.
    When Plum was old enough, and her friends had also left their hometown, she moved into a small purple house in Ponyville (a town slightly north of where her family lived) and tried to make her way in life as a café owner/baker. So far, she's purchased a building but is still working from home and selling baked goods in the local market while the building is being prepared. Plum has been keeping in contact with her friends via mail, and recently invited Amber Dust, now an explorer, to move into town, stating there were many wonders she could discover here...but of course, Plum really just wants her old friends back.

    Plum was originally intended as a background character in Amber Dust's backstory...(but I became attached to her!)

     

    Plum holds great reverence for Princess Celestia.

     

    Plum's adoptive family runs an orchard that grows all sorts of soft fruit like peaches, plums, apricots, etc. Her adoptive father (an Earth Pony named Mahogany) carves miniature statues out of the dead trees and sells them, while her mother (Peachy Keen) and brother (Apricot) handle most of the actual farm work.

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Hello Amber!

 

Plum Pudding is an absolutely adorable character, and for the most part she’s already ready to join EqE. There are just a few things to fix though, so if you can just get them fixed up Plum will be ready to be accepted :)

 

  • The part of her personality that describes her being bullied implies that earth ponies are considered inferior by the other two races more so than they might consider each other inferior. From what we’ve seen, although the three pony races have some distant history of not getting along, ponies do not seem to ever consider ponies of other races to be inferior based on race. This should be reworked to give a different reason for Plum to feel inferior as an earth pony, or for other ponies to pick on her.

  • While the backstory is technically long enough, it is still pretty short, and it would be really nice to see it expanded upon. Plum is a very endearing character, and I for one would love to know more about her. How did her and StormJumper become friends? What was her adoptive family like? What did she like about Amber that made her so happy when they were together? Where was the orphanage she grew up in and why did she decide to make Ponyville her new home?

  • I believe I also said this about Stormjumper’s application, but there is no need to sell yourself short by calling Plum’s backstory “clichéd”. I like her backstory :)
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:please: I'm glad you like her story. I'm always afraid that the "orphan" trope would be too...blinding.

I'll definitely add more to it. There's a lot of info knocking about in my head, I was just afraid of being reptitive I guess (since these three characters sort of share a backstory). :adorkable:

 

Regarding her feeling inferior, I'm going to try to defend my idea...

I know that bullying based on race hasn't yet been seen in the show sonce Hearth's Warming, but Plum Pudding grew up in different circumstances from the characters we've seen so far. She grew up in an orphanage, where parents get to decide which child they want based on their own preferences. I guess what I'm saying is that the fillies of the orphanage began noticing patterns, and the Earth ponies tended to stay there the longest. :( It's not that Plum Pudding felt like a second-class citizen or anything--she just felt unspecial. Like, the way a "blank flank" would.

 

 

Oh, I forgot to mention this stupidly important fact: She grew up in a Nothern Village mostly inhabited by Unicorns.

Whoops. -_-'

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The reasoning behind Plum's feelings of inferiority do make much more sense with that important detail, and I think they should be fine as they are. I can buy that unicorn parents would be more likely to adopt unicorn children, and that her extended stay in the orphanage coupled with her quiet nature would make her a target for bullying. 

 

The only thing I would say to fix now is very minor, that the last two points in Plum's "other" section would be better placed in the backstory section, since that would be an appropriate place to talk about the family Plum grew up with after being adopted. I'm sure they played an important role in making Plum the pony she is today, after all. Once those are moved over, I'll happily move Plum Pudding through the acceptance process :)

 

This raises an important question though. You say in this application that the image you use is meant to be a placeholder. You will not be able to edit this character page after Plum is accepted, so if you do not want her to be accepted until the placeholder image is replaced then please let us know, and mark your character as WIP to make sure that she doesn't go through until she's ready.

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I can't edit the image after she's been accepted, eh? :o Ah, well. The current one should be fine, even though the mane's not right. I don't have the energy to make another vector at the moment, and my selection of pencil crayons is a little limited...

 

I'll fix that part you mentionned when I'm off of mobile, then you can accept her, whether or not I decided to switch out the image. :P

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I can't edit the image after she's been accepted, eh? 

If people could edit their characters after it's been accepted into the database, it would defeat the purpose of the approval process.

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The only thing I would say to fix now is very minor, that the last two points in Plum's "other" section would be better placed in the backstory section, since that would be an appropriate place to talk about the family Plum grew up with after being adopted. I'm sure they played an important role in making Plum the pony she is today, after all. Once those are moved over, I'll happily move Plum Pudding through the acceptance process :)

 

Done and done! Now to fix up Storm's profile.

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Done and done! Now to fix up Storm's profile.

 

Great! I'll send her off to be looked at by the staff, but in the meantime, if you aren't going to replace Plum's image then you should remove the mention in her appearance section that the image is a placeholder.

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Great! I'll send her off to be looked at by the staff, but in the meantime, if you aren't going to replace Plum's image then you should remove the mention in her appearance section that the image is a placeholder.

 

 

Done~

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