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Rose Quartz


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  • No Not Cast Late Adolescent

    Rose is a doe with a soft gem-like coat that is light pink in color with rose red hair as well on the tips of her ears and on her tail, also with light purple eyes. Mostly wears bright and cheerfully colored clothes, often of pastel shades. She always keeps with her a necklace made by her mother, a carved heart of rose quartz which reminds the her of who she is and motivation.

    Female Deer N/A

    Most often keeps an upbeat and happy attitude though stress may pull her down just a bit. She does have impressive amount of patience, but there are things that can get under her coat enough to make her upset. She is a romantic in heart and with a fondness of foals, yet shows love to all her friends and family no matter who or what they are. She understands the importance of high self esteem and makes sure to try and teach those she meets to feel good about themselves.

    She is always happy to help others that may be struggling in their relationships, especially couples and will offer advise when asked or when she feels it as important. Greatly enjoys potionmaking, of coming up with new recipes with the crystals she uses, experimenting to see what she can make. Is more then a bit shy, though that is more nature then anything as many deer are often timid.

    Likes: Anger and fighting, upset or distressed foals, friends or family not getting along, large crowds. Finally, being pressured into selling or giving a love potion to someone she feels who shouldn't have it.

    Rose is the daughter of the lavender doe Meadow Heart, with father unknown as her mother never spoke of him. Instead, her father is that of the red stallion Ruby Star, a crystal pony. She was born a deer as her mother before her, though without antlers as some female deer had. Yet through living in the Crystal Empire she gained a gem-like coat and was raised among ponies. Her parents had met unexpectedly, her father a wandering doctor who had met her mother during his travels. They hit it off, and even managed to get into some trouble protecting Rose while having a few adventures together before setting down in the crystal Empire.

    Their love, while misunderstood in the eyes of some, was strong and filled their lives with joy. While Ruby was not Rose's father by birth, he did become such for all intents, and the doe would also introduce him as such in the years to come. She would come to see him, and her mother, as very strong and would love both dearly. Admittingly, she was a little shy towards the the stallion when they first met so many years ago.

    Yet the rise to power of King Sombra, his dark rule, would take from them the joy and hope they had once know. With Rose just a small filly at the time, Ruby would hide from the king his wife and adopted daughter. It was hard, especially since he had to work in the mines, but some how they managed to have it work. It was the arrival of the royal sisters from Equestria and the final curse of the tyrant that would mark the empire's disappearance.

    When the Crystal Empire returned and brought with it all those who lived there, with six mares and a dragon saving everyone from King Sombra's dark rule, there was the return of hope into their hearts. Rose even remembered the Crystal Fair, how fun it had been, though she had been young at the time.

    It would take some adjusting, but Rose and her family were able to live a peaceful life after this and she would grow up. With this would come to finding a special talent for herself, despite not being able to get a cutiemark, which came from messing around with her father's potions and medicine. She would use the recipes that Ruby had on hoof, but decided to experiment and use some powered topaz. To her surprise, she was able to make something tasty and which brightened her mood greatly. From there would come many more interesting and helpful potions and mixtures.

    Though Rose loved making potions and experimenting with crystals, there is one thing that she has learned to be careful about. This being making and selling love potions since she has seen others use them to create love where it does not exist. There was even a filly that the doe considered a friend who was head over hooves for a colt in her class, she pressured Rose to make a love potion. Though she felt she shouldn't, the doe eventually gave in and did as she was asked.

    It worked for about a week before wearing off, and the colt was not happy to realize what had happened and wanted nothing to do with the filly after that. The filly even got expelled for a week, and many ponies didn't trust her. Rose felt terrible, guilt of the part she played and in what had happened. Ever since then she has been careful of who she even tells about such, sometimes even lying she doesn't know how to make a love potions or making some other excuse. She promised to only offer or sell them to couples already together, to help strengthen their love for each other.

    Feeling that she could be most useful traveling from city to city, town to town, much like her father before he settled down with her mother, selling her potions and medicines though she would always return home to the Crystal Empire. Rose would head out on her own but not without a heartfelt goodbye to her parents and a promise to always return, even monthly if she could, as well as a bag of supplies. She was nervous, even a bit afraid, yet her heart was determined and bright no matter the risk. Yet even still, while the doe would seek out a few friends and companions in her travels, she was much like her mother and the rest of her kin in being a bit shy when meeting others.

    Her skill and talent lies is potionmaking, particularly when using gemstones to do so and when making potions that bring more positive emotions or healing. This includes love potions, but she is careful who she sells such to and does not often make them unless she felt it is needed.

    Also, Rose's personality and inspiration is taken from that of the rose quartz crystal. Its meaning and uses, whether for healing or spirituality/meditation helped to create who this character is.

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Hello,

 

Before anything else is addressed with this character, one fairly large change will need to be made. Your character can be a deer, or a crystal pony, but she cannot be both. There is no cannon support for hybrid creatures other than mules, so I would confidently assume that hybrids that are inviable in the real world are inviable in Equestria as well. Your character can be the adopted child of inter-species parents, but she cannot be part deer and part pony.

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This is a magical world of candy colored ponies, a shapeshifting race of love eaters, a spirit of chaos, a shadowy tyrant of fear, sibling diarches who control the movements of the sun and moon with one traveling into the dreams of her subjects, a pool of water that allows one to make a copy of them self, as well as magic that can do all sorts of amazing things, to name but a few aspects of this universe... yet you believe it is impossible for mixed race couple to come together and have a child?

 

That just doesn't make any sense, especially just by going off of the excuse that there is no canon support for something. This doesn't mean it can't be something that can happen, just perhaps that it wouldn't be common.

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No, no... I think you misunderstand - it isn't because it's non-canonical; it's because it's genetically impossible.

 

Deer and horses are incompatible for creating offspring.  They don't have the same type of genes needed to create children, which makes cross-species breeding impossible.

 

In short, it's not because one doesn't already exist... it's because one physically can't.

 

(I hope that helps clarify things!)

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Yet again, this is a magical universe and it is fairly common in fiction for different races or sentient species to be able to breed together. Half elves, half vampires, even half dragons have been shown in fantasy so I argue just because deer and horses/ponies cannot breed in real life doesn't mean they can't in a magical land such as Equestria.

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Also, if we were to agree that it is impossible for a moment... what of magic? Perhaps I may offer the possibility for consideration that there is magic existing that might allow a pony to have a child with a non-pony.

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Sighs, I guess I could change a few small details here and there for her to only be deer, though they would be such that they change very little that is important if anything about her. Like Ruby Star is Rose's stepfather, but since he is the only father she knows he is in all ways important her father. She would introduce him or speak of him as her father.

 

Also, she would create a potion that give her coat a shine and appearance like that of a crystal pony. That way she could be more like Ruby, if not by blood then their bond and her wish to be like him. As such the Appearance section of the bio would only have a slight rewrite of the wording, otherwise her appearance will be the same.

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So far, so good!  A few more things, if I may - but relatively small ones, I promise!

 

A cutie mark is not available for deer... at least until they do so in the show.  It will have to be changed, sorry.

 

Description - second sentence - the word 'mare'.  Just a quick fix; left over from earlier, I'm sure.

 

In Rose's backstory, you mention that the pairing of her parents is "unpopular"; as we've never really seen any form of racial bigotry from the denizens of Equestria, we aren't sure that's viable - perhaps the word "misunderstood" would work better, as others may just find the couple highly unusual.

 

"Finally, being pressured into selling or giving a love potion to someone she feels who shouldn't have it.

 

^The line above is simply SCREAMING for a story!^

I think it would enrich the character as a whole if you added in some reason or event that made this such a prominent dislike to point out.  Little things like this can really help show how a character's personality truly is.

 

Other than these few things, I am quite happy to see Rose coming along so well!

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But... but, I don't want to give up her having a cutiemark. :(

 

Sighs, on the rest I can certainly have that all fixed up. I can add some detail on the dislike for selling or giving away a love potion to someone she feels shouldn't have it into the backstory.

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This makes Luna happy, and so I shall move thee into second approval, to await the careful eye of my fellows-in-arms.

 

And thanks for working with us to make this character EqE ready!

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Also, since I had forgotten to say anything before. You welcome, she isn't quite how I envisioned her but Rose is still in a position that I would be fine to play her if she meets approval.

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Dear Princess Celestia,

 

Today I learned that perseverance pays off.  Hard work and diligence may be difficult, but in the end it's always worth the effort.

 

That being said, I'd like to introduce you to a new subject; she's so bright, she absolutely shines.  I hope she has many adventures, and that she proves to be an asset to all of Equestria.

 

Your faithful student,

Randimaxis

 

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