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Noone 3 Posted August 26, 2013 Share this comment Nice character and picture. To improve I think you should go into more depth about how he became an Alicorn. Also you should Go in more detail about how he had achieved his cutie mark. But apart from that, nice character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comet: A Tale Of Three Friends 13 Posted June 9, 2017 Share this comment i can see him being a more balanced OC if he was just a unicorn i say unicorn because you mentioned the dark element within equestria, and to me that sounds like a type of dark evil/misgives magic but this is you OC so take my advice how ever you may hope i helped <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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