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  • Broken Cloud/ Fallen


    sunne

    • Age: Depends on RP. typically 17-25.

      Gender: Female

      Species: Pegasus

      Appearance: Page picture above is Broken Cloud. She has braces on the bases of her wings, but aren't visible when closed. <br />Her coat is dark gray with her mane being slightly lighter.

      Cutie Mark: Storm cloud split in half, one side dark, one light-ish... <br />Resembling her split personality and ability to survive horrible events, mostly weather. Her talent is survival.

      Personality: Broken Cloud is mostly a loner and doesn't seem to show much emotion. She greatly dislikes rude or stupid ponies and is rough around the edges, but she knows what is right and wouldn't intentionally injure somepony, unless it was for self-defense. She doesn't usually have too short a fuse, but Fallen can easily shorten it.<br /><br />Fallen is an oddball. Her way of speaking is somewhat refined for some reason, but she is entirely psychotic and loves to torture and kill. She can go from 0 to 60 (in anger) in the blink of an eye. <br /><br />She is sometimes capable of holding Fallen back, and they often speak to each other.

      Backstory: Broken Cloud was born in Las Pegasus. When she was a filly, her father was a drunk, disliked her and her mother, and beat them, often. One day, he was completely drunk from having too much apple cider, and went too far. He killed her mother right in front of her. She ran away, and she took cover in a thunderstorm, half hoping to die. She didn't, she stayed there for days. This is where she met Fallen, in a sense. She and Fallen spoke, but Fallen wasn't yet strong enough to take over the filly's body. When she did, she flew into a psychotic rage and ripped the storm apart with her small hooves, then switched back into Broken's mind, hoping to kill her and escape her body. Broken was so shocked that she continued the motion Fallen had been going through - slicing her hoof through the last bit of cloud that was left, which was underneath her. She fell. Luckily, she wasn't too far from the ground and simply broke her wings. Somepony found her and took her to a hospital in Seaddle. When she awoke, her wings were in a white brace, and she was surprised to find a cutie mark. A nurse came in and asked her questions about who she was. She lied, said she lived in central Seaddle, and that night, snuck out. She never got her own house. She just lived on the Seaddle streets, often getting into scraps and fights due to Fallen, who often won them for her, but never got as far as killing due to Broken's weak body. One day, when she was approximately eleven(she quickly lost track and didn't much care anyway) she found a sharp black dagger in a small pouch and kept it, attaching the pouch to the inside of her right brace. It turned out that it was slightly enchanted so that the blade was in perfect condition, and never got worn down. It was to scare ponies off, really, and self defense as a last resort, but Falllen took it as a means to kill.<br />She stayed there for years and never really got a <br />home. Just continued living on the streets. Once her wings were fully healed, she would hide in clouds to sleep for the night.<br />One day, Fallen flew into a fit once again and caused a massacre. It was small, the casualties only around fifteen ponies, but she fell back into Broken's mind as soon as she heard police, and Broken flew and hid in a cloud, but not before one of the police caught sight of her. Luckily, the team that had been sent consisted of Earth Ponies, so they had to call for backup. By the time they arrived, Broken had fled the city and took over the life of a nomad.

    Broken Cloud/ Fallen

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    If there's something I love in OCs, is that the character has originality. I especially love characters with weaknesses. Fallen/Broken Cloud shows great personality, a nice and long backstory, and I instantly love any OC with mental problems. And Fallen/Broken Cloud shows signs of dissociative identity disorder (I'm not sure if you were trying to go with this). I also laughed so hard at the car refference "She can go from 0 to 60 in a blink of an eye."  comedic genius!

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