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  • Starburst

    The Ponyville Critic

    By The Ponyville Critic


      • Age: 15

      Gender: Male

      Species: Unicorn

      Appearance: He is a purple-coated unicorn, with a brown mane.

      Cutie Mark: His cutie mark as an eye looking through a magnifying glass, his talent is predicting the immediate future.

      Personality: He is fun. That is all.

      Backstory: Starburst is the son of Fire Horn and Missy Starlight.

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    Lemon

    Pardon me if I sound rude. I only want to help. But I'm a bit confused? His name is starburst yet he is predominantly dull and dark colors? I understand the tie in with the stars and future telling though. In my opinion (which you can take or leave) would be to have a navy blue body and a light orange or yellow for the mane. (Or switch that around) Something to make him pop out to a good degree and make his talent/name feel more suitable.

     

    The talent is incredibly intetesting and I love the cutie mark idea. He'd make for a great main or side character. Good job!

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