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  • Sunset Glow


    Midnight Scribbler

    • Age: 23

      Gender: Female

      Species: Unicorn

      Appearance: Crimson red coat, curled pink mane, Orange eyes.<br />

      Cutie Mark: A sun setting, radiating colourful light.

      Personality: Sunset is a shy pony, she doesn't mingle with large groups often, but will when the occasion calls for it. She loves to bring joy to her friends and family by bringing the warm glow of the sunset into their lives with her enchanted candles.

      Backstory: Sunset's family originated from a small village outside of Dodge City. She grew up in a fairly normal environment, and was lucky enough to befriend a rather unique individual who showed up at random one day. He was a well traveled unicorn for only being in his teen years. His name was Midnight Scribbler, and he had a lot of knowledge to share, which Sunset soaked in like a sponge. Eventually, Scribbler left the town, but promised to return one day. Sunset had spent many weeks learning about magic with him, and began to experiment on her own, finding that she could capture certain emotions and energy with her magic. Over time, she learned that she could imbue these energies within things, such as a stone or a leaf. On her 15th birthday, Sunset had become fairly practiced in her abilities, yet still lacked direction. But it was on this day that she discovered her true talent. She managed to capture the glow of a beautiful sunset with her magic, and imbued it into a candle. It began as a mere experiment, but when the candle was later lit, it shone with the same brilliance and magnitude as the setting sun. With that moment, her cutie mark appeared, the image of a setting sun.<br /><br />Sunset Glow is now known for a variety of different candles, containing enchantments for various purposes. She's an enchantress, but certainly not an evil one. She uses her magic for healing, soothing nerves and aiding in relaxation and sleep. Her work is known throughout the city by any spa or massage parlor goers. She also owns her own shop, where she sells her candles called "Magic Wax Works."

    Sunset Glow

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    http://www.eophtha.com/eophtha/Pictionary/Sunset%20glow.jpg It seems to me like you added the cutie mark as a vector to the overall work. You know you could always use a picture of a sun diving between the clouds/mountains for that... could be cool.
    "-Sunset glow- A soothing aura which calms the nerves of almost anyone who is nearby and is not immune to such effects." How about "those who are nearby and are not immune..."

    -Telepathic- can speak through thoughts to another. Is there a distance limit to this spell that i should know about? This doesn't mean she can read thoughts right?

    -Torchlight horn- Self explanitory, it makes her horn like a magical torch. Why do i think this spell will end up burning her own mane? But what am i saying... it's magic right? Just seems to me like it could burn her mane.

    All in all nice character... simple... good. You should mention where her parents are, if she has any other relatives, e.t.c. Always be careful not to make her appear overly dramatic. These chars tend to kill the fun of the RPs if their dramatic-ness stays too much.

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    Thanks for all the feedback on my OC's :)

    The torchlight thing, Snips and snails even use in the show. XD And yes, she could read thoughts, but only as she's casting the spell, and only with a single target. I'd imagine the range would be within 100 ft. That seems fair.

    I'll add some details soonish. :)

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