will anyone help me?

[Swoop Productions 78]

i need a favour. see i recently started a youtube channel (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBlM2uS2dHi-vmOvylgofyw) and i was wondering if some very kind pony would make me some channel art. because right now i'm using youtube's gallery channel art which isn't the channel art i'm looking for.

what i want it to be like: anything as long as it has dragons on it and my channel name Luna Dragons

if you do this for me i promise to give credit on my channel desc page. and to give a shoutout in my next video

thanks for listening  ~Luna Dragons~

Edited June 28, 2014 by Luna Dragons

[eps-3-freak 16]

What kind of videos do you make?

[Swoop Productions 78]

What kind of videos do you make?

well i make videos of toontown and i'm working on videos for minecraft i also make tributes of dragons

also i must say sorry for not being online in a while i got busy with some family issues

[eps-3-freak 16]

Minecraft? funny, I wanted to do that too, I was looking for a partner to record with but I couldn't find one.

 

I took a look at your channel and this is what I have to say:

 

I saw 2 videos with artwork of dragons with music on the background. It was pretty borring because it was looking like pictures I could easily look up at google pictures.

If you have given it more creativity like: selfmade artwork, I would be impressed. people look things up on youtube to see things they can't see themself. If I see that video, I think: "I could also  put on the music I like and look those pictures up on google" and then I will do that.

Selfmade artwork is more interesting because it is something you can't see anywhere else.

The Monalissa is very famous because it's amazing and no one is able to make something that looks like it. it's one of a kind. that's why it is impresive. If you make selfmade artwork and post that,I will be impressed because I never saw it before and it can't be found anywhere else. and then I will look to your other videos too, because when I see amazing selfmade artwork, I will be thinking: "This person is impressive, I wonder or he/she has more artwork like this" and then I will search for your other videos.

and if it is selfmade artwork, you should put it in the title because I do not know or this was selfmade or just copied from google.

 

as for your gameplay.

 

you problably already know this.... you need a better pc.

your first episode was a bit boring because you were to long at one area. People want to see what they can't see themeselfs.

I bet that if you had the game: call of duty black ops 2 I am sure you won't look up any gameplays of that game(except for cheats or something like that) because you are expiriencing the game yourself. people look things up on youtube because  they can't play it themself (or the gamer is just very funny) so if you play the game, you must advance, make people see new things. I was bored when you were at same place for 6 minutes without any change but when you moved to minie's melodyland, I was like: "an new area, great, I learn more about this game."

 

That is why gameplays with a storyline are interesting. you advance, you learn new things, you see different areas, you get new weapons or powers and you expirience different things.

 

Also, you could make jokes to make things funny, like when you were stuck at that black spot in the episode: "Voices" I laughed because there was a problem, something was happening and the way you sound when you were trying to get was funny.

 

You should make jokes about the envirement and the area like when you couldn't enter a building in the same episode, you could make a lame but funny joke like: "II geuss they are not home" or if it was a restaurant: "I think they are having a lunch break". jokes makes things more funny wich also makes it more interesting.

Maybe you should also make use of video editing. In the episode "Voices" you sang: "How could this happen" From the song "Untitled". what you could do is replay 5:38 till 5:40 in slowmotion while playing the line "How could this happen to me" from the original song. that would have been funny.

 

people like to see and hear 2 things: action and comedy. so you got to keep the action rolling and the jokes funny.

and if you can't do that alone. ask a friend or another youtuber to become a partner so you can play co-op games. since you will be able to talk with eachother there will be no awkward silences and there will always be somehing to talk about, that way things will stay interesting. and try to find a game where you can avdance, like a game with a storyline or a game with online battles where you can rank up and earn new a new abilty everytime you succeed with something, something in that direction. but most important right now... you need to get a better pc.

I know... a very long message(no offense to your videos)

[Swoop Productions 78]

Minecraft? funny, I wanted to do that too, I was looking for a partner to record with but I couldn't find one.

 

I took a look at your channel and this is what I have to say:

 

I saw 2 videos with artwork of dragons with music on the background. It was pretty borring because it was looking like pictures I could easily look up at google pictures.

If you have given it more creativity like: selfmade artwork, I would be impressed. people look things up on youtube to see things they can't see themself. If I see that video, I think: "I could also  put on the music I like and look those pictures up on google" and then I will do that.

Selfmade artwork is more interesting because it is something you can't see anywhere else.

The Monalissa is very famous because it's amazing and no one is able to make something that looks like it. it's one of a kind. that's why it is impresive. If you make selfmade artwork and post that,I will be impressed because I never saw it before and it can't be found anywhere else. and then I will look to your other videos too, because when I see amazing selfmade artwork, I will be thinking: "This person is impressive, I wonder or he/she has more artwork like this" and then I will search for your other videos.

and if it is selfmade artwork, you should put it in the title because I do not know or this was selfmade or just copied from google.

 

as for your gameplay.

 

you problably already know this.... you need a better pc.

your first episode was a bit boring because you were to long at one area. People want to see what they can't see themeselfs.

I bet that if you had the game: call of duty black ops 2 I am sure you won't look up any gameplays of that game(except for cheats or something like that) because you are expiriencing the game yourself. people look things up on youtube because  they can't play it themself (or the gamer is just very funny) so if you play the game, you must advance, make people see new things. I was bored when you were at same place for 6 minutes without any change but when you moved to minie's melodyland, I was like: "an new area, great, I learn more about this game."

 

That is why gameplays with a storyline are interesting. you advance, you learn new things, you see different areas, you get new weapons or powers and you expirience different things.

 

Also, you could make jokes to make things funny, like when you were stuck at that black spot in the episode: "Voices" I laughed because there was a problem, something was happening and the way you sound when you were trying to get was funny.

 

You should make jokes about the envirement and the area like when you couldn't enter a building in the same episode, you could make a lame but funny joke like: "II geuss they are not home" or if it was a restaurant: "I think they are having a lunch break". jokes makes things more funny wich also makes it more interesting.

Maybe you should also make use of video editing. In the episode "Voices" you sang: "How could this happen" From the song "Untitled". what you could do is replay 5:38 till 5:40 in slowmotion while playing the line "How could this happen to me" from the original song. that would have been funny.

 

people like to see and hear 2 things: action and comedy. so you got to keep the action rolling and the jokes funny.

and if you can't do that alone. ask a friend or another youtuber to become a partner so you can play co-op games. since you will be able to talk with eachother there will be no awkward silences and there will always be somehing to talk about, that way things will stay interesting. and try to find a game where you can avdance, like a game with a storyline or a game with online battles where you can rank up and earn new a new abilty everytime you succeed with something, something in that direction. but most important right now... you need to get a better pc.

I know... a very long message(no offense to your videos)

i see your points but there things disagree with my second gameplay videobwas something i made offline for just the fact getting a new video out... and my first gameplay toontown infinite did have a story

and i did progress. also why would i need a better pc all my videos are watchable in 1080p full hd. beside my tributes which i agree with you on. i know you mean no offense and i take your opinion. but you didn't take the time to really understand the videos that i was making. and as a result you rated my videos poorly in my opinion.  anyway...... thats not why your here i do need a new banner after all....if you want to do a co op video with me i'm fine with that. and i do take your opinion and will keep it in mind when making videos. i would play call duty but my mom dosen't want me to play it. so now that the boring stuff is over now lets get down to this banner what do you suggest for it. and what do you think you can do with it.

its called toontown its a game where you do tasks complete mission go fishing play mini games and train your gags so you can defeat high cogs. in my first video toontown infinite i was training my gags. so i was progressing (sorry i just had to get that off my chest)

Edited July 27, 2014 by Luna Dragons

[eps-3-freak 16]

i see your points but there things disagree with my second gameplay videobwas something i made offline for just the fact getting a new video out... and my first gameplay toontown infinite did have a story

and i did progress. also why would i need a better pc all my videos are watchable in 1080p full hd. beside my tributes which i agree with you on. i know you mean no offense and i take your opinion. but you didn't take the time to really understand the videos that i was making. and as a result you rated my videos poorly in my opinion.  anyway...... thats not why your here i do need a new banner after all....if you want to do a co op video with me i'm fine with that. and i do take your opinion and will keep it in mind when making videos. i would play call duty but my mom dosen't want me to play it. so now that the boring stuff is over now lets get down to this banner what do you suggest for it. and what do you think you can do with it.

its called toontown its a game where you do tasks complete mission go fishing play mini games and train your gags so you can defeat high cogs. in my first video toontown infinite i was training my gags. so i was progressing (sorry i just had to get that off my chest)

 

I didn't say you weren't progressing, did I?... let me think... as far as I know I said that progress is the thing that people want to see, not that you didn't do it.

I did say that you were stuck for to long at one place, but I can't seem to recall that I did say you didn't make progress... if I did, I typed wrong... my apologize if I did make that mistake.

 

what?... you thought I wanted to do a co-op video with you?... did I really give that impression?... hmm.... it's fine with me but i wouldn't know wich game to play.

 

and beside, you have no use for high def if you have low frame rate. I don't know or it was the fault of the game or the computer but people don't like it to see things that lag.

 

you can react to everything. if there is something you dissagree with, you can say it out loud. everyone make mistakes. it is important that people help to correct other people misstakes.

[Swoop Productions 78]

I didn't say you weren't progressing, did I?... let me think... as far as I know I said that progress is the thing that people want to see, not that you didn't do it.

I did say that you were stuck for to long at one place, but I can't seem to recall that I did say you didn't make progress... if I did, I typed wrong... my apologize if I did make that mistake.

 

what?... you thought I wanted to do a co-op video with you?... did I really give that impression?... hmm.... it's fine with me but i wouldn't know wich game to play.

 

and beside, you have no use for high def if you have low frame rate. I don't know or it was the fault of the game or the computer but people don't like it to see things that lag.

 

you can react to everything. if there is something you dissagree with, you can say it out loud. everyone make mistakes. it is important that people help to correct other people misstakes.

 

I didn't say you weren't progressing, did I?... let me think... as far as I know I said that progress is the thing that people want to see, not that you didn't do it.

I did say that you were stuck for to long at one place, but I can't seem to recall that I did say you didn't make progress... if I did, I typed wrong... my apologize if I did make that mistake.

 

what?... you thought I wanted to do a co-op video with you?... did I really give that impression?... hmm.... it's fine with me but i wouldn't know wich game to play.

 

and beside, you have no use for high def if you have low frame rate. I don't know or it was the fault of the game or the computer but people don't like it to see things that lag.

 

you can react to everything. if there is something you dissagree with, you can say it out loud. everyone make mistakes. it is important that people help to correct other people misstakes.

its okay i do agree with the frame rates (see the reason they are like that is because the game is Private server of a game that shut down... this cause extremely lag as the server isn't very good right now) but we're not here to talk about my bad frame rates we're here to make a ideal banner. for my channel. so what do you have in mind?

[eps-3-freak 16]

its okay i do agree with the frame rates (see the reason they are like that is because the game is Private server of a game that shut down... this cause extremely lag as the server isn't very good right now) but we're not here to talk about my bad frame rates we're here to make a ideal banner. for my channel. so what do you have in mind?

I am not a great desinger myself, but i have a friend who is amazing at desinging things. I will contact him and ask him to make something and then you can judge yourself.

does that sound like a good plan?

but I will need your e-mail adress so I can send it over to you. I will get the picture first and then I will send it over to you. is that alright?

[Night Breeze 17]

i can make u one as well if you like

[Swoop Productions 78]

i can make u one as well if you like

i don't know what to say.........but okay i could use both of them (i'll will most likely use one first then use the other (later in my channel's life) )

[Swoop Productions 78]

I am not a great desinger myself, but i have a friend who is amazing at desinging things. I will contact him and ask him to make something and then you can judge yourself.

does that sound like a good plan?

but I will need your e-mail adress so I can send it over to you. I will get the picture first and then I will send it over to you. is that alright?

sure i'll send it by pm. don't worry about it