Im writing my first fanfic!

[Mr WubWorthy 21]

Hello there! I writing FiM fiction and wanting some help or advice. Im thinking of the plot and so far Ive come up with is this Halo/Pacific Rim crossover. Also, if one, or all, of your OC's would like to be in it then leave details of it below. Please no Mary Sue alicorns, I will accept alicorns, just no Mary Sue ones. Thanks!

[Tia Is Best Pony 310]

Hmm.. suggestions? dont use "said" too much it gets stale, also try to make set times for your writing so you don't get desecrated good luck though!  

[Poetic Justice 170]

If you're looking for proof-readers and such, I'd love to help you out. If you wanna read some of my stuff, I guess I can stick a link somewhere in here. Lemme know if you would like my help.

[Yellow Diamond 7,568]

Hmm.. suggestions? dont use "said" too much it gets stale, also try to make set times for your writing so you don't get desecrated good luck though!  

 

That depends. Using "said" is in part a matter of taste, but you might fall into the trap of overusing Said Bookisms, which can often be very distracting to a reader. If at any point "said" is used too frequently, then the problem probably rests with "talking heads", or delivering nothing but a constant stream of dialogue apart from description.

 

In any case, I wish you the best of luck, !

[Mr WubWorthy 21]

Thanks for the advice everypony!