Pre Thought's On Equestria Girls Opinions Appreciated

[GoldenCal 52]

 

I'd greatly appreciate critique on this What do you think 

I'm also planning a Rainbow Rock's Collab as well so there's that to look forward too 

 

[Smokie-Horse 83]

Ooh, a British accent. +1 to overall opinion of video. And sucks to not live in America. Sometimes.

 

But in all seriousness, I think you're on the right track here. You don't "um" at all, you explain everything calmly and thoroughly and you don't mention exactly the same points two or three times over at different points in the video (and have I been seeing a lot of people on Youtube doing that lately...). The other cool thing is that your opinions sound rather straight and factual, which makes them considerably harder to hate. And yeah, I agree with you quite fully about how sending your problems off-planet isn't the best way for a cosmic ruler to run her country. Especially considering how well it went the first time.

 

Anyway, as a guy who's never seen your work before, maybe you could briefly mention the identity of whoever it was that hit you somwhow? It just seemed a little bit sudden and strange, and while it would be pretty easy to look at your main channel and find that out, not everyone on YT has the patience to do that. The other thing that occurs to me is that perhaps you could mix up the YouTube brony commentary format by having the video clips that come with audio full-screen (like the point at 2:55), which would just mix up the visuals a bit. I mean, even if a picture's moving slightly it can still get a bit samey.

 

But other than that, was good video. I am so dreadfully fond of the sound of a considered opinion.

Edited October 4, 2014 by Smokie-Horse