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I haven't decided on a name yet, as I'm not very far into writing the fanfic, but if anyone would kindly read over it and give any critique they have that would be great. I just want an idea as to what I need to change, and if I should even continue writing, or if I should just do something else instead.

 

This is also my first real attempt at a fanfic, so I am trying some things out. As I said, I would really appreciate critique.

 

Thanks!

 

Here is a link to the live version of the story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jdoHx1UtCELHfCKvI9wr_BIQyVamZiP5teCGehzC3Ko

 

(Link may be removed/added based on the point I'm at in writing the story)

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Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.

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That's great! I had alot of fun reading it and looking forward to more ^_^

 

Thanks! I'll definitely be writing more based on how things are going now.


Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.

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