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My first try at Fan Fiction


almozayaf

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I'm not a native english speaker so that will have all kind of grammar and spelling horror

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1muhef-xv2CBIlWRAqyY7e91SUG7WdzyU6jKiKdacStA/edit?usp=sharing

 

I plane to fix it later with, but want a beginner opinion. (what kind of mistakes i do, what i need to do to improve ...

 

It only 1300 word, so it will not take you time.

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