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Rosa Thorns and Dark Mist/Tainted Mist


Tom Snyder

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I don't have an image of Rosa Thorns, so i can't really say what she looks like; but is a unicorn mare. I'm doing my fic, Dark Origin(took the "S" out of it since its only one character's life); and I am going to share a bit about her and the conflict she will have with Dark/Tainted Mist. So here goes:

 

Rosa Thorns is an oc as you all may not know, this will be the pony that everyone will grow to hate in the story(It needed something like this). She is known as the Director/Commanding officer of the facility that houses subjects from all over Equestria, to which she performs her experiments on them all; some have gone mad, and are disposed of later on.

 

Rosa has no sympathy or feelings towards other ponies and only cares about herself and her ambitions. greed and the potential power she wants have made her delusional and unaware of any danger she may face. But her chance meeting with Dark Mist allows her to proceed with the project, Dark Mist(Its a coincidence for the name). She trains Dark Mist in dark magic to be the perfect soldier to help her take Equestria for her own. 

 

But there's the problem of getting Tainted Mist, Dark Mist's other personality to follow orders; thus delaying the project. But as the days pass, everything seems to run smoothly; that is, until Dark Mist suddenly loses control and Tainted Mist comes out. Dark Magic comes flooding out of her, overloading the collar meant to restrain her; leaving Rosa shaking in fear. 

 

Now the tables have turned against her, as Solar Mane had warned of before. But at the time she was ignorant of the signs and scoffed at his warnings. Tainted Mist then proceeds to terrorize her through illusions and moving her to a desolated version of the facility made through illusion magic. This allows Tainted Mist into her element; using the darkness to prey upon Rosa and make her go either mad or insane.

 

Rosa pays the price with her life, leaving Tainted Mist to attack the staff; but when it comes to Evening Mist; Dark Mist's mother, she hesitates and loses control. Dark Mist is shaken by these events and runs off toward Trottingham, to see Crimson Sketch; her best friend. When she asks him to leave Equestria with her, he refuses after what happened at the facility. Dark Mist finally gives in to the sadness and anger and tainted Mist is there to stay; replacing Dark Mist completely and disposes of Crimson Sketch as well; the only one who could have saved her.

 

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So that is the explanation to Rosa and Dark Mist's conflct, though i hope this was enough for you guys to understand. But if you have questions, feel free to ask away. 

 

 

 


Here's a link to the story if you wish to read it(warning: Dark and Violent): https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11159854/1/Dark-Origns

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