Need help with a FimFiction one-shot story

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

So i want to do a one-shot story for Rain and Solar, in which they have a drinking competition with each other, the loser will pay the tab and has to do what the other says for a week. But before i give you what i have so far, i want to have help deciding on a good main and chapter title for it. So here's the story so far;

 

Rain Crasher and Solar Runner are pegasus stallions who always hang out together.  Exploring the streets f Canterlot and talking about their futures; Their day begins by going to the bar and getting their cider, often challenging each other to contests; these were a test of who can hold their liquor.  But today, Rain seems more confident than usual; Solar can only sigh in disappointment.

 

"Come on, Rain, how many times has it been? ten? Give up already." says Solar. Rain orders twenty shot glasses of hard cider, which are then brought to the table; Solar just gives in and obliges Rain to the contest. The game begins with Solar taking the first shot, and putting his glass down on the table, Rain follows through with the same action; this repeats for five rounds, leaving fifteen shots left on the table.  Rain hates losing, but Solar has been drinking longer than him; its just a matter of pride between the both of them.

 

"Careful, Rain, don't need you passing out now." Solar is taunting Rain, but is just as buzzed, but trying to make Rain slip up. Each take another shot, turning their glasses upside down on the table. Solar is surprised, Rain sure has built up his tolerance a bit; but sooner or later he'll be done.

 

"Shut up, Solar; at least i don't go around picking up mares off the street." Rain's retort is surprising, considering how drunk he is; but the crowd watches on as the two take another shot. Rain almost falls over in a stupor, and catches himself on the table; almost tipping it. Solar decides to bring it up one more notch, and takes two at once; and mocking Rain.

 

"Oh yeah? well you're just jealous of my ability to get a mare." argues Solar, seemingly holding himself upright. Only thirteen left between them, Solar slams down three shots consecutively. Rain isn't about to be beaten like this and takes two more down. Each goes one after another; getting more and more drunk by the minute. Now its down to the last shots, each takes their last drink and set them down again. Rain unfortunately goes down this time.

 

"Well, it seems you were all talk after all, buddy. But no worries, i got this." Solar seems to stagger a bit in a stupor, hardly even able to stand. He overpays the tab, but is too drunk to notice. Looking down at Rain, Solar feels lightheaded and passes out on the floor. Since Solar is friends with the bartender named Bastion, this is always left to him; a painful thing to watch his friend make a fool of himself. With some help from the staff, Solar and Rain are put into a wagon the stallions are ready to go. 

Edited May 10, 2015 by Candy Star