ZippyPC 48 June 30, 2015 Share June 30, 2015 Ok, my story can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261387/my-little-witchcraft I enjoyed writing it, but as time passed I felt it wasn't worth it. I would like some ideas maybe, or constructive criticism if anyone can give any. Also, should I change the name? I couldn't think of anything better. I wanted to make a story with a steampunky/apocalyptic feel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love Doctor Blaze 536 July 2, 2015 Share July 2, 2015 i dont know if your story is worth finishing since i haven't read it. But from what i have read in the plot As for a new titile how about: Witchcrafts aprentince, witchcraft in a whole other way, witchcraft is magic, The young cauldron. XOXO Blazedtime My OC'sBlaze Pulse https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/echo-blaze-r8503 John. The classy assasin: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/john-the-classy-assassin-r8916Crescendo star::https://mlpforums.com/page/eqw-characters/_/approved/crescendo-star-r342Sappy Lappy https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sappy-lappy-r8930 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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