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I know the concept of a DJ pony is very overdone, No offense to anyone with a DJ OC :P

 

Anyway, I made one for a role play I'm joining. Her name is Afterglow and I have made a headshot drawing of her, No full body image though.

 

I don't have much except for name (Afterglow) and that she is a DJ and Earth pony... Not much to go on right? I'm just all out of ideas when it comes to writing a DJ OC, So i'm turning to you fine people for help :P

 

So, Anyone got any ideas? ^^ (Critique wanted on the design as well!)

 

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(Yes, It's her cutie-mark to the right)

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Off of what you have given me I have a few notes.

1. maybe shorten the hair in front a tad.

2.what is her cutiemark or do you not have one yet

3. I love the shading with the pallet you have chosen.


Off of the limited information I have I do have a few things to say.

1. I love the shading mixed with the pallet you have chosen for her

2. the hair in the front of her face seems a tad too long

3. If you need assistance in filling out the information on her backstory PM me.

 

by the way here is a sample of my ability to write.

 

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/terra-woodsland-r9130


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@@Terra woodsland,

 

First off, I'm happy wit the hair and I probably won't change it. And I did write that the symbol to her right on the image is her cutie mark :)

 

Thank you, I like her pallet as well, sat up till 5 AM drawing just that headshot xD (Took 4.5 hours)

 

I don't exactly need help with the writing itself, But rather how I want to build her backstory and personality. Her is a example of my writing: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/audacia-ventus-daring-wind-r8858 

 

And by the way, I like your writing style!


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Thanks I attempt to make something that people will enjoy reading as much as I enjoyed writing it.


interesting idea. the only time I have ever hear of a pirate pony was in a review of one of the comics. I like your style of writing and together I think we can make one h*yay* of a backstory for Afterglow.

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