Visiting Time

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Spike leads the Sparkles down a plain cold corridor to the visitors center of Canterlot Royal Prison. Upon entry, Twilight Velvet bursts into tears upon seeing her daughter clad in an orange jumpsuit, being escorted by her brother who unwillingly also acts as her jailor. As Twilight watches her family burst into tears, Princess Celestia gives her an angry look. "This is what you have brought upon you and your family." Celestia said vengefully to her former star student. Shining Armor struggles to hide his emotions as he tries to remain loyal to his princess even though he is forced to jail his little sister. 

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The window isnt very convincing with a 100% black wall. Making it a dark gloomy place isnt bad but the way you executed that is. The wall would be better as a dark color but 100% black is overkill. You could also try using a gtadient on the window to make it look like its reflecting light so it doesbt just look like a rectangle in pitch black darkness. You could also try making the light in the room an overhead interigation lighting meaning the lighting used in interagation rooms to give it a scary kind of effect (in movies and stuff) basically done by having the light source directly overhead which means the shadows should have a lot of contrast since the closer a light source is to the subject the harsher the shadow will be.

Edited March 8, 2016 by Emerald Meteor