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Red Eyes -Fan Fic-


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Prologue

 

 

5 Years. 5 Long Years. I've Been In This Forest Longer Then Anyone. I Hear Voices. See Strange Creatures. And... Ponys. They Don't See Me, Though. I Often Stay Hidden In My Ripped Up Clothes. I'm Going Crazy. Haha Hearing Ponys Talk English. But One Thing Keeps Me A Human. Music. Especially "Waiting For The End". Rock And Roll. I Hunt For Meat, But Everything Here Hears Me And Runs. Doesn't Help I'm Hearing A Bright White, Assassin Creed Looking, Hoodie. So I End Up Eating Apples From A Huge Forest Of Apple Trees. I Sleep In A Barn That Is Extremely Close To My Fruit. But... Today, I Was... Discovered. 6 Ponys Looked At Me As I Woke From My Slumber In Some Hay. They All Looked Straight Into my Eyes. Under My Breath I Mumbled "Why Today? Why Must My Eyes Glow Today!?!". Oh. Did I Not Say I Had Red Eyes That Glowed At Certain Times.

 

 

Chapter 1

"Bad Luck"

 

"What Is That, Twi?" Asked A Blue Pegasus. Silence. Not Only Did I Fear It. It Was Always By My Side. Like A Friend. I Grabbed My Clothes And Put On The Hoodie. A White Mare Looked at My Necklace. It Was The Shape Of A Cross, But With Diamonds At Each Edge. Her Eyes Were Stuck To The Diamonds. I Had One Thing On My Mind. Run. So I Did. Jumping Over The 6 Mares And Sprinting To A Tree House That Had A Sign Saying "The Cutie Mark Crusaders". A Shelter Is A Shelter. But As Soon As I Got Into The Tight Tree House My Eyes Started Glowing Even More. Then I Felt A Stabbing Sensation And Fainted.

 

I Awoke In A Cage Of Some Sort. And 1 Of The 6 Mares Showed Up. She Was Purple And Had A Weird Look On Her Face. She Was Looking At A Device That Showed A Picture Of A Apple. My IPod! But, She Was Bigger. Like A Giant. She Looked At Me And Pointed At Me With Her Hoofs And Said "Don't Worry, I Wont Hurt You But I Have Shrunk You, You Know For Saftey Purposes." My Eye Brow Lifted. Twilight, I Think Thats Her Name, Finally Unlocked My Ipod. My Music Blasted Into The Air And Made The Unicorn Scream. I Laughed. (You Would Too!) She Glanced At Me. An Angry Expression On Her Face. She Then Looked Happy. "You Just Talked, Right?" She Asked, The Mare Now Had Her Snout In Front Of The Hamster Cage I Was In.

 

Chapter 2

"A Chat With A Animal"

 

Now I My Eyes Were Like Lights. It Was About Midnight. I Had Problem With Sleeping Ever Since I Had Got Here. I Was 15 And Had A Great Education. I Was The Best At Science, But Loved To Draw Another Life. The Last Sketch I Did On My Planet Was A Picture Of... A My Little Pony Fan Art. Maybe That Teleported Me Here! In The Morning I Had Bags Under My Eyes And A Yellow Mare Flew Slowly Into The Room I Was Imprisioned In. The Pony Was Talking To Twilight And Looked Scared. The Purple Pony Looked At Me And Said "Time To Grow".

 

I Felt A Aura Of Magic Drop Me Onto The Wooden Floor. Then The Mares Got Smaller 'Till They Were Up To My Waist. The Yellow Pony Kept Trying To Run. Only To Pulled Back By The Same Purple Magic. The 2 Mares Talked For A Bit Until Twilight Explained That She Wanted Me To Talk to 'Fluttershy' I Put My Hood Up And Tried Shaking Hands With Her. Oh, Yeah. Hand To Hoof. Twilight Left And Told Fluttershy To Stay Calm. She Left. Silence Was Back At My Side Again. The Yellow Female Kept Trying To Dodge My Glowing Red Eyes. I Started The Conversation By Saying "So... Err... What Do You Like Doing?". "I... I Look A-After Animals...". I Eventually Gave Up and Grabbed My Ipod. And Showed Her A Video Of My Dog I Had Left On Earth. (Oh Don't Worry, She Was Kept With My Parents) Her Eyes Grew And Looked Amazed. She Then Asked "I-is She Y-Yours? Can I-I Please M-Meet Here? Only I-If You W-Want me Too.", I Then Laughed, "Sorry, I Cant Let You. She Was Left On My Planet.". "Oh, I'm So Sorry, Mr.". Twilight Ran In And Kept Bugging Me About My Home Planet.

 

Chapter 3

"Earth"

 

Fluttershy And I Were quite Good Friends Now. She Even Asked If She Wanted Me To Live With Her! I Had To Decline. I Was More Of A Secret. But I Watched The Ponys Gallop In Their Town. I Would Stand On Top Of A Building With My Hood Up And Watch Them. My Eyes Were Still Lights. But Geez, They Scared So Many Ponys Out. Especially At Night. I Was Like A Beast Trying To Hunt For A Meal. I Tried To Seem Like That. But Everyday Twilight Asked Me About My Planet.

 

"What Was It Like, Was It Like This One, What Animals Were On It?!?". I Could Only Tell The Truth. But One Question Hit Me.

 

"Would You Go Back?". That Broke Me. Tears Fell Down My Face. I Replied "What Do You Think?!? I Was Brought Here By Magic Or What Ever The FUCK You Use! I Would Love To Go Back, But No One Could Give A SHIT To Start Looking For Me!". Then I Remembered... I Got Teleported Here As Soon As The Nuclear War Began. I Calmed Down And Said Sorry. I Left The Tree I Was In And Climbed The Town Hall.

 

This Time People Saw Me. They Sent Some Pegasi To Talk To Me, The Beast. They Sent 2.

"Rainbow Dash & Flutter Shy". I Was Still Crying And Was Drawing Pictures Of My Family I Left Behind, While Listening To Some Linkin Park. My Pictures Were Not Helping My Tears. When The 2 Mares Got To Me. They Looked At My Pictures. Flutter Shy Sat Next To Me. While Rainbow Dash Looked At The Pictures. Rainbow Dash Asked "Were These Your Family? Where Are You?". I Did Not Respond. My Music Was Too Loud. They Couldn't See My Tears Or My Head Phones. If Only They Did.

 

The Cyan Pony Was Getting Annoyed With Me So She Shouted At Me. I Heared Her This Time. I Got Up. Put My Hood Down And Let Them See My Tears. Flutter Shy Tried Cheering Me Up. I Kept Pushing Her Off Me. Eventually I Let Out A Howl. Every Pony Heared It And Ran For Their Lives. I Then Shouted "You Said I Was A Monster, Here's Your Wish!". I Jumped Off The Town Hall's Roof ,Nearly Breaking Both Legs, I Walked Up To A Sweet Shop. I Pushed The Door Open And Saw A Filly And His Parent Scared Out Of Their Minds. I Got Down On All 4s And Crawled Over To Them. I Then Muttered "Do Not Worry, I Don't Hurt Children Or There Parents." My Eyes Flashed Blue Then Back To Glowing Red. Until...

 

 

Chapter 4

"Luna"

 

I Heared A Voice, I Had Heared It Before, Not On This Planet Though. I Walked Out The Cake Shop And Saw My Girlfriend From Earth, Her Eyes Glowed Blue. My Girlfriend Saw Me And Ran To Me And Gave Me Hug. A Hissing Sound Was Heared As Soon As Contact Was Made. Flames Flowed Out My Hands. I Had Started The Transformation. On Earth, I Could Turn Into A Human Fire Ball, That's Why My Eyes Were Red In The First Place. My Gf's Name Was "Luna", She Could Control The Flow Of Water. She Had Not Seen The Ponys So, She Thought I Was Angry at Nothing.

 

The Ponys Emerged From The Houses. They Surrounded Me And Luna. Not Only Was Luna Creeped Out, They Were Angry At Me. Now That Had My Powers Back, I Created A Shield Of Flames. Luna Then Put It Out. The Shield Now Become Like Fog I Grabbed Luna And Ran Off Into The Forest I Use To Hunt In. I Had To Explain To Luna What Was Going On. "Anthony, Look At Me! What Were Those Horses Doing In A Town!?!" Luna Asked Me With A Angry Tone. "They Are Ponys. And They Live There." I Explained. Her Mouth Dropped. I Told Her To Hidden Behind Me. I Covered My Self In Flames And Made Myself Have Wings Of A Phoenix. I Flew Onto the Library, And Heared The Ponys Talk. Luna Got Off The Roof And Walked Straight Into The Tree's Door.

 

Chapter 5

"Love Life"

 

When She Entered EveryPony Looked At Her. I Followed Her In. A Orange Pony Told Twilight To Use That Shrinking Spell Again. All The Over Ponys Also Told Twilight To Do that. So She Did. I Held Luna Tight, and Told Her To Stay Calm.

 

We Awoke In The Same Hamster Cage As Before. But Now A Lizard Was Looking At Us. It Was Standing On Its Hind Legs. Spike, If I'm Correct. He Was Apparently Told To Guard The Cage. Now Me And Luna Were Now Shrunk For 7 Days Max. Luna Kept Making Water Balls With Her Magic, She Was Most Likely Trying To Improve Her Magic. "Hows The War Going On Earth?" I Asked. "Earth Is No More. Is A Barren Waist Land. All The Others Though Are Somewhere On This Planet, Though.". Spike Had Woke Up Before She Had Announced "Others". He Ran To Twilight And Repeated What Luna Had Told Me. He Was Gone For A Bit. So, I Walked Up To My Dearest Girl, And Got Down On My Knew.

 

She Was Surprised With This. I Had Something Special To Give Her. I Showed Her The Necklace. Her Eyes Glowed Blue. I Gave It To Her. "My Dear Girl, Will You, Luna Dawn, Marry Anthony Blaze?" Her Eyes Sparkled. She Accepted. She Jumped Into My Hands And Kissed Me On My Lips. First Kiss In 5 Years. For both of Us.

 

When The Pony And Spike Returned, Luna Was Still In My Hands. Twilight Looked Very Surprised And Asked Spike Happened. He Had No Idea. Twilight Eventually Asked Luna. She Told Her Everything. Then Twilight Released That A Marriage Can Not Go Un-Celebrated. So She Organized A Party At The End Of Our Shrunken Sentence. The Week Went Very Fast. When We Got Out, Luna Asked Where Do We Get Our Clothes. "Rarity Might Make You Some" Twilight Announced.

 

Me,Luna,Spike And twilight Headed To Rarity's Place. When We All Entered The Large Room Twilight Headed Over To Rarity And Asked Her For Clothes Firt For A Human. At That Moment Luna And Me Entered. Her Mouth Dropped.

 

Chapter 6

"Fashion"

 

After About 10 Minutes, They Returned. Rarity Asked What Kind Of Clothes. " Err... Tuxedo And Dress. If That's Possible.". I Had To Stay While Rarity Tested Clothes On Me. When My Clothes Were Done, I Left Luna To Get Her Clothes. I Walked Over To SugerCube Corners And Saw The Same 2 Ponys I Saw Before. The Filly Looked At Me Happily, So Did The Parent. A Pink Pony Stood At The Counter. I Asked For A Wedding Cake Of Some Sort. She Smiled And Randomly Started Dancing. "Oh No. Its Her."

 

 

 

Chapter 7

"Party Pony"

 

The Time I Got The Cake, She Asked Whats It was For. I Looked At Her. "What Do You Think?" I Told Her. "I Don't Know, Maybe A Cake Party!" She Replied. The Walk Was One long Trip. I Eventually Got To Sweet Apple Acres, And Asked If We Could Use The Barn. The American Pony Waited A Bit Until She Finally Let Us.

 

I Put The Cake Down And Let The Party Pony Do Her Magic. I Left Her To Head To Rarity's Place. When I Headed In Luna Was Putting The Dress On. My Heart Grew. She Was Beautiful. I Had Not Put On My Clothes Yet As It Could Get Dirty. When We Headed To The Barn The Same 5 Mares That Found Me Were Following Us.

 

When We Got To The Barn, It Was Filled With Party Objects. Food, Wallpapers, A DJ Booth And Other Things.

 

Chapter 8

"Wedding"

 

When Me And Luna Finally Got To Our Wedding Day. The Best part Was Exchanging Rings. A Pony The Size Of A Horse Was Going To Say The Royal Wedding Vowels.

 

"Will You, Luna Dawn Marry Anthony Blaze, And Stay Together Forever?" Both Humans Agreed. The Ponys Cheered Then Asked What We Do On Earth After A Marriage. So We Cut The Cake And Eventually Started The Disco. Then At Midnight. I Flew Into The Sky With Flames Blazing Behind Me. I Created A Heart Shape Then A Picture Of Luna's Beautiful Face. My Eyes Now Glowing Red And Hers Blue.

 

 

 

 

 

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