Wanted: Fanfic Beta reader [TF2]

[Laydee Kaze 400]

So erm...

I'm writing a TF2 Fanfic.

Come on guys, what did you expect?

 

And I'm interested in finding a beta reader for it.

 

What that means, is I just need someone to read through Chapters I write, and make sure I don't repeat words too often, mess up any grammar, or just generally make sure the plot makes sense and runs smoothly [such as it doesn't rush through bits and stay too long on others]

 

But there's a few requirements:

1. This is gonna be an M rated fic on FF.net, so obviously I need mature readers.

[There's no direct smut yet just a bit of kissing and that.]

 

2. I need people who atleast vaguely understand the TF2 world. It's based on the 2fort map, so knowing what that map is like atleast would be a good help. xD

 

3. Be able to have me on Skype so I can ask if I get stuck on bits and whatnot :I

 

The Fanfic is based on a RED female Scout, and a BLU Spy on the Map 2Fort. After bumping into each other a few times they start getting feelings for each other, yadda yadda... It's called Her Eternal Reward.

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8064699/1/Her_Eternal_Reward

 

I've done upto chapter 3 so far. There's one quick kiss in Chapter 3. 1 and 2 are just build up/fights/plot.

 

:3

[Vicke 3,189]

I really like the concept with TF2. Never heard a fanfic about TF2 before.

 

But i most admit that i dont like shiping with them, kind of ruining my image of them.

You should ask Lamii/Inkfeather to read it. He got to be the biggest fanfic reader out there x)

 

But i dont think he knows anything about TF2.

[Laydee Kaze 400]

I really like the concept with TF2. Never heard a fanfic about TF2 before.

 

But i most admit that i dont like shiping with them, kind of ruining my image of them.

You should ask Lamii/Inkfeather to read it. He got to be the biggest fanfic reader out there x)

 

But i dont think he knows anything about TF2.

 

Cheers Vicke :3

 

Yeah, I have to agree to some extent with the shipping... I read TF2 fics a while back and it kind of killed the Medic off for me. Then it went back to normal after seeing meet the Medic xDD

 

But I dunno, I spent a while thinking about this one, and I just felt like writing it after much thought.

 

Good shout though :3 Just don't wanna confuse people who don't know TF2 as I've missed a fair bit, in terms of detailing every single bit of the characters/map... since only TF2 players would read it [or so I presume?] I didn't think it was really needed. xD