Outline for Memoir of Season 6 Thief PMV looking for feedback

[TheWhiteBowser 187]

So I'm a well established PMV creator on youtube and over the next week or so I'll be logging away at Season 6 looking and splicing out scenes that look cool for my Memoir of Season 6 PMV. While I do that though I want you guys to look at this outline I made for the PMV. You guys can critique or give me ideas for which scenes could go where or maybe say change it up a bit here and here. Really this is the first time I have written a script for one of my PMV's so I want to hear what everyone thinks of it.

 

Here is the song my PMV will be based on if anyone wants to know.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tC6tJP5lWQ

 

 

KTFX stands for Kinetic Typography effects. The rest should be semi-self explannatory. As the episode next to the line tells you where I will be looking for a scene to fit that line.

Here is the outline:

 

 

Memoir of Season 6 – Thief PMV [Outline] (Imagine Dragons)

[introduction]

[intro] WhiteBowser credits, with flashes of funny faces from various episodes

[Opening Jingle] Beat scenes, one important scene from every episode

 

[Part 1 - Episodes 1-12]

If only you, (Starlight flashback episode 1)

You could see (Starlight’s crying with Sunburst, episode 2)
The darkest place that you could be (Trixie’s suicide attempt episode 6)
Oh maybe then you'd understand (Zephyr Breeze confession episode 11)

[interlude]
From desert heat (Applejack’s Day off episode 10)

[Cross Dissolve]

To cobbled streets (The Gift of Maud Pie episode 3)
From broken home to the city beat (The Saddle Row Review episode 9)
There's so much more than you could know (On your Marks episode 4)

[interlude]

[Flash and Fade-Out]
So take me (Newbie Dash episode 7) [“So take me” KTFX]
Back ! (episode 7) [“Back” Flash with KTFX]

When I believed (Newbie Dash episode 7) [“Believed” KTFX]
Back when I was unafraid (Hearth’s Warming Eve tale episode 8) [“Unafraid” KTFX]
Just like a thief (episode 8) [“Thief” KTFX]
And all the heights (Gauntlet of Fire episode 5) [“Heights” KTFX]
That I could reach (episode 5) [“Reach” KTFX]
Back when I was unafraid (Spice up your Life episode 12) [“Unafraid” KTFX]
Just like a thief (episode 12) [“Thief” KTFX]

[interlude]

 

[Part 2 - Episodes 13-24]

If I could live a thousand times (Stranger Than Fan Fiction episode 13)
If I could make a thousand tries (The Cart Before the Ponies episode 14)
Maybe then I'd get it right (The Times are a Changeling episode 16)

[interlude]
The more I see, (Episode 21 Everything Little Thing She Does)

[Transition]

the more I know (Episode 22 P.P.O.V.)
That everyone just wants a show (episode 24 Top Bolt)
No we don't want to see the truth (Dungeons and Discord episode 17)

[interlude]

[Flash and Fade-Out]

So take me (Buckball Season episode 18)  [“So take me” KTFX]

Back! (Buckball Season episode 18) [“Back” Flash with KTFX]
When I believed (The Fault in Our Cutie Marks episode 19) [“Believed” KTFX]
Back when I was unafraid (28 Pranks Later episode 15) [“Unafraid” KTFX]
Just like a thief (28 Pranks Later episode 15)  [“Thief” KTFX]

And all the heights (Viva Las Pegasus episode 20) [“Heights” KTFX]
That I could reach (Viva Las Pegasus episode 20) [“Reach” KTFX]
Back when I was unafraid (episode 23 Where the Apple Lies) [“Unafraid” KTFX]
Just like a thief (episode 23 Where the Apple Lies) [“Thief” KTFX]

[interlude and Fade-Out]

 

[build-up]

(Show all the sad faces and bad moments with Starlight in a combined art piece image scrolling down, overlayed with several beat scenes)
When the stars look down on me
What do they see

When the stars look down on me
What do they see

When the stars look down on me
What do they see

When the stars look down on me
What do they see

When the stars look down on me
What do they see [“What do they see” KTFX]

[build-up]

[interlude and Fade-Out]

 

[instrumental]

(Shooting Star Animation, show all the Good Deeds Starlight has done)

 

[Finale, Scenes from episode 25 and 26]

So take me back
When I believed
Back when I was unafraid
Just like a thief
And all the heights
That I could reach
Back when I was unafraid
Just like a thief

 

 

 

Edited October 16, 2016 by TheWhiteBowser