Dash-N - Fly (English cover of the original by The Living Tombstone

[Dash-N 13]

And plus, I added a personal touch to it with a third rap verse! Hope you all like it, I know I'm not the best singer, but I practiced really hard for this. 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok. 

 

Careful with your vocals. You were flat on some of your notes. Make sure you hit your notes spot on so that way you won't sound off. When you hit the high notes, make sure you're not constricting your chest. If you do, you won't have enough air to hit the higher notes. Open up your chest so the notes can come out whole and fresh. 

 

As far as the rap part...I unfortunately have to say it's a little cheesy. You told a little too much. Show the want of the pony to fly. Sometimes, it's better to have flowing subjects, rather than trying to rhyme on every verse. 

 

All in all, decent cover but your singing could use work. I can tutor you if you'd like...