The Magic Inside - cover

[Thunder Note 2]

Hello everypony,

Recently I've made a GarageBand cover of a song called The Magic Inside. It took me some time (or more) to finish it. Considering that GarageBand is somehow similar to making MIDI songs, I think that the net result is quite good. Tell me what do you think about them. I'm looking forward for some suggestions

I hope you will like it.

 

Here's a link:

https://youtu.be/KjmO0GssasA

 

Also check out my other songs. I would appreciate it a lot!

Edited January 7, 2017 by Thunder Note

[Kiri 7,290]

I just gave your cover a listen, and I think you did a great job! Keep up the good work. ^^ The link in your post is to a different song, so I just thought I'd let you know.

 

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[Thunder Note 2]

Omg thanks haha

I'll fix it

 

Also thanks for the reply!

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok. 

 

It's a decent track. However, your instruments are starving for human enhancement. If you can, add some humanization to your track by adjusting attack and decay to make it more natural sounding. Also, it is best to only give one instrument the lead melody, for increased variance and complexity. An arpeggiating harp would work great with the piece in certain areas. 

 

All in all, it's a good track, but it could use quite a bit of work with arranging and humanization. I'm here if you need me. PM me any time if you have any questions about what I said.