Master Chief 183 May 18, 2012 Share May 18, 2012 This is my first My Little Pony fanfic so I really gave it my all. It is a re-write of Halo: The Fall of Reach, bu20% Cooler. It explains why Rainbow Dash is so fast and why other ponies have their talents... I'm not gonna spoil too much. I'm going to copy and paste what I have so far. NOTE: It is being copied from a Word Document so it may look odd. The Everfree Militia By Tyler Shaffer Canterlot Barracks; 0900 Hours; July 25th, 4500 A.D. Celestia marched up and down through the lines of children in the barracks. “You all have been brought here for one purpose. Seventy-five of you came here… And fifty of you will leave. The twenty-five of you left will be our only hope against the Changelings.” The children in the crowd suddenly shifted. Small whispers could be heard. “And at least fifteen of you will wash-out of the program.” Celestia continued. She thought of “Tango Sierra” when she said that. Tango Sierra may not make it through the augmentation. Celestia pushed the thought aside. She did not need to trouble herself. The children took advantage of Celestia’s mental absence and she had to quite them again before saying “You are the hope of all of us. Every one of you.” She nodded and the trainers walked the candidates through a hallway in the side of the large, dark, room. Celestia looked down. Sure, tango Sierra may be too weak to make it. But her brother Sierra Alpha may be strong enough, she thought. 2 Signature By PixiGlow Check Out Ponies At Play! We Do Gaming Videos and Podcasts! http://www.youtube.c...r/PoniesAtPlay1 God loved you so much he sacrificed his only blood son to right YOUR wrongs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strafe 594 May 18, 2012 Share May 18, 2012 Try and write more per edit. This is actually pretty interesting. "The Gods envy us. They envy us because we’re mortal, because any moment might be our last. Everything is more beautiful because we’re doomed. You will never be lovelier than you are now. We will never be here again." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swordfishtrombone 384 May 18, 2012 Share May 18, 2012 It is a good concept. Requires expansion. So... Write more. Although I was under the impression that the idea of a militia was that anyone could join, with no requirements. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief 183 May 18, 2012 Author Share May 18, 2012 I'm resuming work right now Signature By PixiGlow Check Out Ponies At Play! We Do Gaming Videos and Podcasts! http://www.youtube.c...r/PoniesAtPlay1 God loved you so much he sacrificed his only blood son to right YOUR wrongs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoper7 21 May 27, 2012 Share May 27, 2012 The story is great! which leads me to wonder, will they ponify Halo? Cannot Find Epic Beatles Signature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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