The Bond We Share (Electronic)

[Ocean Melody 116]

This was a fun little piece to make. Hope you guys enjoy, and as always criticism welcomed.

 

https://pony.fm/tracks/37380-the-bond-we-share

[SharpWit 2,680]

Not bad. Some of the sounds are too similar I think so in the moments where there's a whole lot going on they mesh together somewhat.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok

Your main melody staled out early, which isn't a good thing. You gotta create variations to your melody in order to keep your listeners hooked to your music. This means you need to re-order your chords and travel outside of the progression. Maybe even modulate if possible. Your main sawtooth could certainly benefit from some chorus, mainly a warm chorus that doesn't affect the sawtooth too much. A plucked lead running on BPM delay would work with this piece. 

All in all, it's a good idea but it could use quite a bit of development.