Lnx1ynight16 657 October 21, 2024 Share October 21, 2024 (edited) My MLP fanfic is not finish yet, but I wanted to show a sneak peek to it. It will be released in fimfiction in early or mid November. Edited October 26, 2024 by Lnx1ynight16 1 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixi-Pie 58 October 21, 2024 Share October 21, 2024 Very good! I do have a suggestion: your first and second paragraph give the same exposition, I'd recommend keeping only one of them. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lnx1ynight16 657 October 21, 2024 Author Share October 21, 2024 10 minutes ago, Pixi-Pie said: Very good! I do have a suggestion: your first and second paragraph give the same exposition, I'd recommend keeping only one of them. Oh yeah… I didn’t think of that, but this is my first fanfic ever, so thanks for the advice. Story comes out in November on Fimfiction! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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