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I feel like this should go in resources because it's not done yet... but I'm looking for flaws that'll be harder to fix later while this thing is still half-done. XD

 

Backstory: I like picturing pegasus ponies with body types similar to birds based on what they do. Fluttershy would be more of a pheasant or other ground-nesting bird and RD, well... obviously a peregrine falcon.

 

Posted ImageI used a reference for the wings, but if anything looks off so far, I'd love to know. It's not real "MLP-style" but I like branching out and trying new stuff, and... well, that's sort of the point. Hopefully when it's done I can add a Rainboom shooting out from behind her digitally; currently there's no room on the paper. ;)

 

But yes. I'm not asking anyone to redline, but if there are any obvious flaws that need to be fixed now while it's still easy (or if I should never draw again) I'd love advice from those more experienced than me.

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That looks really great, but I'm noticing that one wing has outlined feathers

and the other doesn't. That could really be fixed anytime, but I thought I'd point it out now.


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Finland is my favorite. All the other Hetalia characters can go now.

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That looks really great, but I'm noticing that one wing has outlined feathers

and the other doesn't. That could really be fixed anytime, but I thought I'd point it out now.

 

Yeah, that other wing was like half-done when I realized the angle was all off and had to redo it. D: I'm still working on how to angle the flight feathers. Thank you for the tip, though! RD won't be Discord, I promise(though drawing him one day would probably be fun as heck). ;)

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Yeah, that other wing was like half-done when I realized the angle was all off and had to redo it. D: I'm still working on how to angle the flight feathers. Thank you for the tip, though! RD won't be Discord, I promise(though drawing him one day would probably be fun as heck). ;)

 

You're welcome. i bet drawing Discord would be a lot of fun, but it would probably be a little hard.

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Finland is my favorite. All the other Hetalia characters can go now.

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XD I love drawing snakelike dragon things; doodling dragons was how I got started with art in the first place. Curled around something would be best; I have a few ideas.

 

ANYWAY. RANDOM TANGENT.

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