My pony drawings

[Red Star 23]

Hello everypony,i started this topic to share my pony drawings,to be honest i am a total noob at drawing but i hope i will improve with time because i'm thinking of uploading a drawing or two every weak,so here are my first two pony drawings.

Red Star(pony version of me): http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/547772_104481849698860_354196409_n.jpg

 

Bloody Star(my evil alter ego pony version): http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/484125_104482453032133_947118797_n.jpg

[snizox15 14]

looks good. You probably use graph paper in order to help yourself draw these ponies, there are many pointy edges like on the legs or on the lower back of the head that could be fixed ( constructive criticism.) . I like what you did with the wings though XD.

 

I also like your second one.

[FortyShadows 217]

A drawing or two every week sounds great! You're a newbie? Everypony is one at some point. Just keep practicing. Here's some criticism:

1st pic:

-Body is too long

-Legs bend too sharply

-Head could be rounder

-Use a reference for the wings

-I like the colours and cutie mark ^^

 

2nd:

-Use a reference for the head

-Ears seem to come out the sides too much

-I'm not sure how tilted the head is.

 

Here are some things I'm not sure about for your second pic (Anyone else reading this could help me, that'd be great XD )

-Are eyes supposed to be that tilted?

-Does the mane go to both sides or just one?

[Red Star 23]

snizox15@ Yep i am a total newbie because i didn't draw anything for about 2 years and i hope i will improve my skills with time(i hope that i got the sam talent like my older sister Ivana because she can draw so pity epic stuff)

XraYZPony@ I didn't want to restart the whole body because then i would need to draw the legs again(what to say accept they were a bitch to draw), i wanted the head to look similar as my profile picture pegasus head but i did fail and about the colors of the main and hair i tried to make them more like my hair(generic emo like haircu with red hair highlights btw.im not emo -.-).