LOLA Comic(Release in parts)

[BronyPony 575]

So, as before, I said I would be making a comic about LOLA. I finally have a part 1 of the comic finished.

 

Story:

 

After recent threats being given by unknown senders, Princess Celestia finally formed a top secret group called LOLA, or Lethal Operations Legal Authority. This group would help to retrieve intel from enemy territories. Thus, the scientists involved in the group began testing with experimental ponies that originally volunteered for the project, but they had to be selected by the scientists before entering the operation. However, something went terribly wrong. The organization began kidnapping ponies instead of taking volunteers, causing corruption in the program. The leader of the organization recently had an agreement with Princess Celestia so he could have almost total authority over the organization. This leader had a different vision in mind for his experiments. His goal was to discover the power that has been unknown to all ponies, but the one thing he knew about it was its strength. Many of the experiments had failed, leading to the termination of the ponies involved. Though, one day a pony that was experimented on showed a great potential for success in the experiment. She was then tested and soon sent on her first mission.

 

 

Here is the list of parts done in the comic so far:

 

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2590/lolascene1.png - Part1

 

Hope to get some feedback from people.