A sad pony called Red Star

[Red Star 23]

Hello everypony this is my first attempt at drawing the whole front of a pony,i would really like to hear you guys opinion because it may help me improve my drawing "skills" BTW.I made this drawing for my girlfriend(long story short she's visiting her family in Japan over the summer) because i wanted to show her how much she means to me.

 

http://redxstar.deviantart.com/#/d5b25cq

[BuggleLugs 53]

Very cute story behind it, and as for my opinion on the drawing it is pretty well done, fronts of pnies can be kind of confusing haha only criticism i have is there is something off about the eyes.... hard to say what thought.... But WELL DONE SIR!