Applebloom bad hair day Drawing

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

Direct Link: http://leonbrony.dev...t=10:1347991298

This is my third fourth Applebloom Drawing and counting the wallpaper 5th overall art(I am also making another applebloom wallaper) of her. I recently realised how awesome and cute applebloom is

Anyway this is overally I think my 13th drawing not completly sure.

 

All Critics,feedbacks and comments are really appreciated I strive to get better so I really appreciate all comments

 

The drawing is based on this

http://spikesmustach...bloom-320074429

Edited September 18, 2012 by Trixies #1 Assistant Leoc

[Vicke 3,189]

You have improved! There are still a lot more to improve!

 

Her right back leg looks a little misshapen, its really thin on the top and looks normal on the lower part.

Her plot is gigantic, a little smaller should do the trick.

I love the hair and the face.

 

But you have improved a lot.

And a big plus for sharing that you looked at a picture and giving him credit. A lot of people deny they do it, even if you throw proof at their face.

Edited September 18, 2012 by Vicke

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

You have improved! There are still a lot more to improve!

 

Her right back leg looks a little misshapen, its really thin on the top and looks normal on the lower part.

Her plot is gigantic, a little smaller should do the trick.

I love the hair and the face.

 

But you have improved a lot.

And a big plus for sharing that you looked at a picture and giving him credit. A lot of people deny they do it, even if you throw proof at their face.

 

Thanks for the comment Vicke *Kisses* XD

 

Yea I see what you are talking about both for the leg and the plot|(damn those plots always come out huge when I draw maybe it subconsiously XD)

 

I fixed some stuff an reulpoaded is it better ?

[Vicke 3,189]

Thanks for the comment Vicke *Kisses* XD

 

Yea I see what you are talking about both for the leg and the plot|(damn those plots always come out huge when I draw maybe it subconsiously XD)

 

I fixed some stuff an reulpoaded is it better ?

 

*Deep tongue kiss*

You know what they say. The bigger they are, the better is it!

I can't see any new image. Just the old one.

Try adding it in a new post.

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

*Deep tongue kiss*

You know what they say. The bigger they are, the better is it!

I can't see any new image. Just the old one.

Try adding it in a new post.

 

XD

Changed it to attachment since Da link was bugging. Though you could always just have clicked the direct link to go to the DA page XD

Btw for what ou said before I find no meaning into not admitting that you copied something especially at such an early stage as I am. It's not shameful admitting that you are trying to learn. And looking and drawing is the first step

The tail should have been a tad bit higher but I couldnt completly change it cause it will leave to many traces back :/

Edited September 18, 2012 by Trixies #1 Assistant Leoc

[Vicke 3,189]

XD

Changed it to attachment since Da link was bugging. Though you could always just have clicked the direct link to go to the DA page XD

Btw for what ou said before I find no meaning into not admitting that you copied something especially at such an early stage as I am. It's not shameful admitting that you are trying to learn. And looking and drawing is the first step

The tail should have been a tad bit higher but I couldnt completly change it cause it will leave to many traces back :/

 

Yeah, noticed the tail problem.

And i'm giving props to you mate. Don't be ashamed of it.

 

Also, her left hoof looks broken. Like she snapped it xP

 

EDIT: Also, looks a lot better now. Check the dA link.

Edited September 18, 2012 by Vicke

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

Yeah, noticed the tail problem.

And i'm giving props to you mate. Don't be ashamed of it.

 

Also, her left hoof looks broken. Like she snapped it xP

 

EDIT: Also, looks a lot better now. Check the dA link.

 

Here it is the final version fixed legs lenght hoof shape the broken limb problem and the tail(kind of not completly but looks alot better )

How does it seems ?

[Vicke 3,189]

Here it is the final version fixed legs lenght hoof shape the broken limb problem and the tail(kind of not completly but looks alot better )

How does it seems ?

 

Looks better!

But i still have this odd feeling that there is something wrong with the leg. You fixed the broken hood but did you add some lines by the belly or something?

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

Looks better!

But i still have this odd feeling that there is something wrong with the leg. You fixed the broken hood but did you add some lines by the belly or something?

 

Nope I didn't touch the belly at all. And yea I get the strange feeling too that something is missing but I can't quite realise what it is :/

[Vicke 3,189]

Nope I didn't touch the belly at all. And yea I get the strange feeling too that something is missing but I can't quite realise what it is :/

 

Neither can i!

Anyhow, great job on the improvements! Keep it up Leoc!

I'll just go ahead and subscribe to you as well. You do happen to have a few impressive uploads on your channel.

[Trixies Apprentice L 493]

Neither can i!

Anyhow, great job on the improvements! Keep it up Leoc!

I'll just go ahead and subscribe to you as well. You do happen to have a few impressive uploads on your channel.

 

I didn't know you have a deviart account