[Pencil Drawing] Pound Cake - Critique

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Alright, so after I drew Fluttershy(http://mlpforums.com...pencil-drawing/) I decided to draw something else. I drew one of the cutest characters in my opinion, Pound Cake.

 

Here is what I tried to draw:

 

 

 

 

 

And here was my attempt:

 

 

 

 

 

One thing, I changed the wing on the right to look better in my opinion, critique!