Torn Apart: An Equestrian Civil War short story

[longgone 873]

Alright lads/lassies, before you read I would like to say a few things. I know it isn't that good, I just work on this in my spare time. I do put effort into it but It's not a profession or anything. And having a low attetnion span, I will probably upload short stories. Anywhoo, here is the link for those of you that wish to read it. It's pretty short though, so I imagine you could read it within 20 minutes hah! So, for those of you that wish to read it, here is the link:

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53960/Torn-Apart

[KingDaddyDiscord 2]

Cool story! I enjoyed it a lot. I am also writing a story called the Equestrian Civil War, and this proves that stories like that can make it good. I hope that more people like this!