FoxyCryptid 4,330 November 20, 2012 Share November 20, 2012 "Thank you for your submission. However, due to issues with semicolon use, comma use, and perspective inconsistency, it cannot be forwarded to the pre-readers. This does not count as a strike" First of all, the semi-colons are now gone, regardless of if they were a problem or not, ignore that. Second, someone tell what I screwed up about the perspective in this thing: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41315/My-Little-Highlander.- I don't even know about the commas, it's been grammar proof-read to death by several people who are good at their jobs. "You know, I don't know who or what you are Methos, and I know you don't want to hear this, but you did teach me something. You taught me that Life's about change, about learning to accept who you are, good or bad. And I thank you for that." -Duncan McLeod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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