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Rainbow dash :3


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Prepare for me to be picky I'm not saying it's bad which it isn't but just a little pointers (I just want you to improve your talent)

her body is quiet short the her hair should fall completely over her neck
the ears a bit straighter and bigger and also a bit smaller then
her cutie mark is black which is kinda a letdown and she is a
also the neck a bit smaller
her mouth should be bigger in a way of it should expand horizontal so she got a bigger smile :D
the eyes don't look bad but could be a bit better
and mayby her hind legg the one in the back
make it a bit smaller because now it may look a bit that she doesn't got that small part of a ponies hind legg

 

 

Like I said I was really picky
It's great really
but you gotta try and strive for perfection :)

(I'm not that bigshot myself so)

Edited by Sensuna

Link to my DeviantART http://cresidia.deviantart.com/

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oki :3 thank you, but i had a picture of rainbowdash by my side, while i was drawing ,so i just tried to draw after the pic c; but thank you for this post @Sensuna :D i'll try to strive for more perfection c; ..i just wanted to try these new colours my little sister got for christmas :D

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Woah,that's pretty cool.I really dig this.

 

The art style looks like the show's,yet it's feels...different,for a lack of a better word.I actually like how the coloring was done and how you're able to see some of the strokes,and the texture of the color looks pretty cool too in my opinion.However,the cloud on her cuite mark looks like it blends in,might wanna consider actually coloring that white next time.Other than that,I love it.

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I love what you have done Dilja and i see forward to take a look on your new pics.

Yes the picture was really small and a little bit unclear some spots, but you got a great talent and i know you will
improve yourself a lot. Love what you have done with this and the other pictures you have made :3
I know you know hat i know i like them but i just wanted to mention it again :D

And plss make a picture of Shining Armor! :D

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