I'm getting there!

[Saeda 19]

I really shouldn't leave such long gaps in between drawing :s But I still think my third one is much better than my second one was, so I am slowly improving, yay!

 

The stallion look a little odd in the face, but I can't put my finger on it...

 

Edit: Changed the stallion slightly when things were pointed out to me, I think he looks better now.

Edited January 22, 2013 by Saeda

[Concord 1,982]

Hello!

 

These are very nice! I especially love pleasing to the eye the colours are. The green one doesn't look right because of the Eyes (I don't think stalions should have fluttershy eyes.), The snout, ( Try extending it a little more) and the hind leg. ( Looks a little boneless.)

 

Also, is that a cap or his mane on the green one?

Edited January 21, 2013 by Concord

[Saeda 19]

Hello!

 

These are very nice! I especially love pleasing to the eye the colours are. The green one doesn't look right because of the Eyes (I don't think stalions should have fluttershy eyes.), The snout, ( Try extending it a little more) and the hind leg. ( Looks a little boneless.)

 

Also, is that a cap or his mane on the green one?

I tried to give him a bowl-cut hair do... didn't turn out that great, unfortunately. No excuse for his eye though, colour or shape. I think it was a case of couldn't-see-the-forest-for-the-trees.

[Snowdream 221]

the blue one has like exactly the same colours as my OC does...

 

anyhow nice pictures, the fluttershy eyes dont look quite right but good job all the same