Human Rainbow Dash

[That DJ Pony 15]

This was a drawing that I made of RD because I kinda got bored that day, and I wanted to try something new. If you have any ideas that would help I would appreciate it.

[~Lawful Sturdy Wing~ 522]

This was a drawing that I made of RD because I kinda got bored that day, and I wanted to try something new. If you have any ideas that would help I would appreciate it.image.jpg

 

Well lets see what we can do here! Honestly this isn't bad, though you messed up the line art pretty significantly, you managed to perfect the humans proportions. The head, chest, arms, and waist all feel put in their place and nothing seems crushed or squished, that is really hard for new artists to do! good job!. Now for the bad things... The wings are different sizes and the feathers are poorly done, the right leg seems malformed, the head seems slapdashed and the coloring isn't consistant... but that is probably just because you werent using a computer pad. Finally, the line art, the lines are very sketchy and wavy, try keeping your hand more straight and the lines smoother. That is all!

 

-Sturdy

[That DJ Pony 15]

Well lets see what we can do here! Honestly this isn't bad, though you messed up the line art pretty significantly, you managed to perfect the humans proportions. The head, chest, arms, and waist all feel put in their place and nothing seems crushed or squished, that is really hard for new artists to do! good job!. Now for the bad things... The wings are different sizes and the feathers are poorly done, the right leg seems malformed, the head seems slapdashed and the coloring isn't consistant... but that is probably just because you werent using a computer pad. Finally, the line art, the lines are very sketchy and wavy, try keeping your hand more straight and the lines smoother. That is all!

 

-Sturdy

Thanks for the tips! Like I said it was one of my first human drawings, so obviously it wasn't going to be picture perfect, and I wasn't using a computer at all, this was all pencil and colored pencils. I have a small shake to my hand when it comes to drawings but it has become better. Thanks and I will keep the tips in mind.