Need Help Titling My Upcoming FiMFiction

[Flareon 151]

Ok so here's what I've come up with for the general summery of the story it's a little short but I don't want to give away to much when in the summary.  Any title ideas are a blessing I don't feel right starting on this until I have a good title set for it. All those included in the process like Colt was for my OC's name will be credited when this goes on FiMFiction.

 

 

Summary:

Ignis has spent the last 2 years building a life with his love Twilight. Now married and living together in Poneyville, and are now expecting their first foal.  Ignis is one of Luna’s personal Knights a pony in a select few chosen by Celestia herself.  He’s honor bound to protect her with his life but that doesn’t leave much time to be with Twilight.

But when a threat is made to kill Twilight and her unborn foal, all hooves are soon on high alert.  The life of a Knight is fraught with danger and hardship.  How far is Ignis willing to go to protect the love of his life and their unborn child While still protecting the Princess of the night?

 

[Thundershock 310]

This sounds like an interesting story.I may some suggestions for a title .

Chaos proctector

Striking doom

Twilight's final hour

just some suggestions they're not the best,but they're also the best i could think of.

[Kaidan 16]

Try titles that play on the fact that he has divided loyalties to Twilight and Luna.

When duty calls

a test of honor

Family or Duty?

Fractured Loyalty

Where true loyalty lies

 

I'm not much of a title's person, but capture the conflict of the story in the title and readers will have a sense what it's about before even reading the description.

[Flareon 151]

Hmmmm all of them are very good ideas and all worth trying out I'll look into them and hope to hear more from everypony here on the forums.